undead Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 The new Ottawa primary always looks a little off to me. On the left side where the cape is doesn't look finished to me. I added a shoulder with armor. I also added a lot more shadows to make it more logo-like. I blacked out his child molester eyes and gave him some skin tone. I lowered the part of the helmet on his face. It looked like he wouldn't be able to see side-to-side. I replaced the decorative part of the circle with the word Ottawa.(Don't mind the 2 little "spikes" of white by Ottawa. It was a side effect of the transfer from Inkscape.) I created a secondary logo with the peace tower and also a new tertiary logo. I hope you like them. C+C is appreciated as always. Portfoliobobschultz6' class="bbc_url">@bobschultz6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jarred Revolver Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 Wow, awesome job on these! Way better than what they have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Does Art Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 I really like these a lot.But I think the face should stay white.Love that secondary. Hi, how are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korbyn Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 Awesome job. The cape was an awesome touch, and the O with the Parliament building definitely would look good on the shoulder.The OTTAWA in main logo looks weird though. I think you should keep the "arrow things" that are usually in that semi-circle. Also like shanurr said keep the face white. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan1 Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 I don't think the changes were necessary at all. But since you've added a right shoulder, you might as well just make a full body Senator. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Does Art Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 I don't think the changes were necessary at all. But since you've added a right shoulder, you might as well just make a full body Senator.What?! You think that because he added that little bit of gold, he should go and do the entire body? That would look ridiculous. Hi, how are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted May 5, 2008 Share Posted May 5, 2008 I don't like the updated primary logo or the tertiary logo but I LOVE the secondary logo!!!!!!!!!!! It is brilliant! Great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDR Posted May 5, 2008 Share Posted May 5, 2008 I have a soft spot for simplicity. With that said, I am f'n in love with that tertiary. I don't know where it would be used, but it's just delicious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
capn89 Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 The primary is very fitting because it makes him look dead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Does Art Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 The primary is very fitting because it makes him look dead. Ouch. Hi, how are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EatSleepJeep Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 I have a soft spot for simplicity. With that said, I am f'n in love with that tertiary. I don't know where it would be used, but it's just delicious.Agreed, that third is perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightHawk Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 I have a soft spot for simplicity. With that said, I am f'n in love with that tertiary. I don't know where it would be used, but it's just delicious.Agreed, that third is perfect.Primary: Absolutely not, it was better the other way.Secondary: Please, can we use it instead of our current secondary logo? Almost anything is better than the new 2D Senator.Tertiary: It could work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Does Art Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 I have a soft spot for simplicity. With that said, I am f'n in love with that tertiary. I don't know where it would be used, but it's just delicious.Agreed, that third is perfect.Primary: Absolutely not, it was better the other way.Secondary: Please, can we use it instead of our current secondary logo? Almost anything is better than the new 2D Senator.Tertiary: It could work.This should be a short stay. That 2D logo is beautiful, it's so much better than the one we wear now, it's not even funny. Hi, how are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SenatorJake Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 Will you make us a concept jersey someday? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chazberg Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 Not bad, but I think he needs the white in his eyes or he looks kinda dead. Also I'm not crazy about the tiny "OTTAWA" in that circle, the leaves looked fine. charles-noerenberg.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted May 7, 2008 Share Posted May 7, 2008 wow. fantastic job. but i think the face should either be white or a very pale color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EatSleepJeep Posted May 7, 2008 Share Posted May 7, 2008 Here's a dumb idea that may work out. Can the tertiary and secondary elements be blended? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undead Posted May 8, 2008 Author Share Posted May 8, 2008 Will you make us a concept jersey someday?Hey guys thanks for all the feedback. I didn't have time to change the primary for you but I did have a chance to whip up some jerseys. The shoulder logos are a little hard to see. Let me know what you think. Portfoliobobschultz6' class="bbc_url">@bobschultz6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EatSleepJeep Posted May 8, 2008 Share Posted May 8, 2008 BE-yoo-tee-ful.The alt red has a very nice barber pole feel to the sleeves.The black alt however, needs to have to O in white. Otherwise it just gets lost in the jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armadillo19 Posted May 11, 2008 Share Posted May 11, 2008 Wow, I am loving these jerseys, especially your secondary jersey and the tertiary logo. The tertiary is so simple yet such an awesome and creative blend.The Red Alt with the Peace Tower is amazing, but I feel like the shoulder stripes are just a tad too thick. If they were the same width as the bottom stripes it may seem a bit more symmetrical, but that's just me.All in all, an awesome concept, I'm really liking these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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