jaha32 Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 Here is my latest logo idea for a team. The one on the top left would be the primary while the one in the bottom center would be for the caps/helmets (and so could the one on bottom right on alternative caps). The others could be used for various different reasons. Also, I just had a website put on the web at designsbyhahn.com that I plan on updating as I do more and more logos if you want to take a look. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 Dude.Damn.Frickin Awesome. Nothing more I can say. Wow. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
w00tness Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 Jesus Christ, these are awesome logos. Love the color combinations and the modernness of the logos. Awesome work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 I really like this set, looks great!One idea, though, is to make the tail on the 'S shark' in the bottom right picture just a little longer. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kmw_29 Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 Looks like an eel. I would suggest a little more definition in the fins, especially the tail fin. Looks nice otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ericjjyy Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 it looks really nice. Id put some white where the eye is and let the fins stick out more(even if thats not actually 100% correct) becasue it looks a bit too much like a slug instead of a hammerhead right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
capsfan1000 Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 It looks like a colored slug. You need to add more to the fins and the tail and make them more distinct Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spamspamspamspam Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 This is f***ing awesome!Hell, it's even better than the Blue Jays' current logo, though that's a bad example. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigmike Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 Jesus Christ is my lord and savior , these are awesome logos. Love the color combinations and the modernness of the logos. Awesome work.Oh and Great job these are sweet Check out my new NFL 2016 Series! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted October 8, 2008 Share Posted October 8, 2008 Great job, looks fantastic.Like someone else said, though, it looks like the buffaslug in shark forum. Need to make a tail fin and such. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted October 9, 2008 Author Share Posted October 9, 2008 there is actually a tail fin. the tail fin is closest to us. in the primary the tail fin is even in front of the words to enfisize how it all flows. this guy is just twisting and turning in an S like shape with different fins and bottom parts facing different ways. i think i may need to add one of those little fins that sharks have on their sides near the tail fin. that might help show what's going on. i wish this image was easier for you to identify how it flows. idk. maybe look at it longer. idk. i wish i knew how to fix it. i guess i'll try DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted October 9, 2008 Author Share Posted October 9, 2008 how would you suggest i add more definition in the tail fin? i have the dark blue line and the huge white (sort of viking horn-shaped) highlight there now DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beansdooma Posted October 9, 2008 Share Posted October 9, 2008 how would you suggest i add more definition in the tail fin? i have the dark blue line and the huge white (sort of viking horn-shaped) highlight there nowmake this part navy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted October 9, 2008 Author Share Posted October 9, 2008 hmmm. i think that would throw off the whole light source of the entire logo. that is the upper part of the tail fin. i am just a little perplexed right now DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pcgd Posted October 9, 2008 Share Posted October 9, 2008 These are awesome. Very nice work. I only have a few suggestions to take this to the top level.I see what you are doing with the back fin, but its not working for me. I think the line needs to be thickened to keep consistant line weight, and just to show the back tail right now. My first thought was it was the backbone. Right now it kinda looks like a hammerhead snake. I honestly think you can have some fins and tails extending from teh S shape and it will still looks sharp.Really rough, but this is what I'm talking about:I'm not a huge fan of the crossed bats on the top left primary, I'm a much bigger fan of the top right primary with the suggestions I made.Again, great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted October 9, 2008 Author Share Posted October 9, 2008 ahh. thanks pcqd. that does help. i will work on that. the primary on the top left was actually the very last logo i did in this set since none of the others had that primary logo feel to them. i didnt think the one on the top right would work since it just has the city name, and not even the whole name, but thanks for your help i will fix it up and post in on here soon. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted October 9, 2008 Share Posted October 9, 2008 Wow these are awesome!!! I really like how you used St. Pete too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billsballerc Posted October 9, 2008 Share Posted October 9, 2008 i might make the dorsel phin a little bigger. But other then that this is phenominal. GREAT WORK! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BIGBAD Posted October 9, 2008 Share Posted October 9, 2008 great logobutit looks more like a genetically altered hammerheadit takes a while to see that it does have a taili realize you are trying to make it an "s"but it really needs a tail to be a shark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldswoosh33 Posted October 9, 2008 Share Posted October 9, 2008 Sweet Logo very cool. I like the colors and really like the name. Nice Job. Romans 5:8 NikoLazar.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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