TurnTwo Posted November 25, 2008 Share Posted November 25, 2008 C&C please!UPDATED (SCROLL DOWN) 12/7/08 (See Post #19) "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted November 25, 2008 Share Posted November 25, 2008 looks a bit cartoony...i think because of the eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spearhead Posted November 25, 2008 Share Posted November 25, 2008 Kind of a fat buff, but nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurnTwo Posted November 25, 2008 Author Share Posted November 25, 2008 looks a bit cartoony...i think because of the eyes.That's my main issue with it.I'm not sure what to do about it, though. "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Dravan Posted November 25, 2008 Share Posted November 25, 2008 I like it overall but here are my ideas.1: add some red to the actual logo, just a bit.2: seperate the back legs, they look like they are tied together and as a result he looks like an animal on a spit with out the fire.3: Cola is right, tweak the eyes a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted November 25, 2008 Share Posted November 25, 2008 looks a bit cartoony...i think because of the eyes.That's my main issue with it.I'm not sure what to do about it, though.try making the white of the eye much smaller...focus on the dark blue being the main portion and focus of the eye. that should help a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted November 25, 2008 Share Posted November 25, 2008 I've never seen a more disinterested buffalo! He kind of looks... agitated. A buffalo who is making such a leap would certainly have more of an expression on his face. Keep working on the eyes and mouth - those are the weakest part of this. As is, I see this more as a minor league or Japanese-league logo - which isn't a bad thing, but probably not what you were going for. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drew22 Posted November 25, 2008 Share Posted November 25, 2008 Immediately what I thought of.North Dakota State Bisons. Eagles/Heels/Dawgs/Falcons/Hawks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted November 25, 2008 Share Posted November 25, 2008 C&C please!Reminds me of that episode of Family Guy where Peter finds out he's black and stops smiling for the camera. The buffalo's facial expression is almost the same as Peter's. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted November 26, 2008 Share Posted November 26, 2008 Tough, but cutesy. Reminds me a little of this: "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winghaz Posted November 26, 2008 Share Posted November 26, 2008 North Dakota State is the Bison, not the Bisons.But I agree with you. It looks a lot like the Bison helmet logo. But, what the heck, Phil Hanson is a former Bison and Bill, so maybe it works. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurnTwo Posted November 27, 2008 Author Share Posted November 27, 2008 I love the cartoon references (Family Guy, Bullwinkle), but it wasn't really what I was going for haha.I'll get a pretty much completely new design up tonight hopefully.Thanks for the C&C guys! "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurnTwo Posted November 27, 2008 Author Share Posted November 27, 2008 Better? C&C please. "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stumpygremlin Posted November 27, 2008 Share Posted November 27, 2008 It needs the tail back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted November 27, 2008 Share Posted November 27, 2008 It kind of looks like it is stading hunched over rather than jumping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nolegboy Posted November 28, 2008 Share Posted November 28, 2008 Better? C&C please.With that smile (grimmace?) it kinda looks like maybe you photoshopped out whatever he was railing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StoneRaizer Posted November 28, 2008 Share Posted November 28, 2008 2nd version is much better, but it needs the tail. I like how you're trying to keep the same profile of the current Bills logo while incorporating both blues. I think the horn would look better if the inside curve was the same as the outside. I agree that it looks a bit cartoony, maybe add some more ripples to the fur? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigmike Posted November 28, 2008 Share Posted November 28, 2008 I actually liked the first one alot better, the second one needs his tail back, and I like the mouth and nose alot better on the first one, because to me the second one looks more catoonish then the first one. Check out my new NFL 2016 Series! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurnTwo Posted December 8, 2008 Author Share Posted December 8, 2008 Latest:I have no idea what to do with the face so I left it blank for now.Any ideas, inspiration or C&C would be greatly appreciated! "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O_Town_Clown Posted December 8, 2008 Share Posted December 8, 2008 Latest:I have no idea what to do with the face so I left it blank for now.Any ideas, inspiration or C&C would be greatly appreciated!Blank = Good. Don't go back to working out facial features, just keep it simple. Sig by TalktoChuck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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