CAB Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 I like this, but it has always bothered me how the Pirates logos have large amounts of red, when the jerseys contain hardly any. I think that you could completely eliminate the red by taking it out of the logo, if that's the direction you want to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted May 11, 2009 Author Share Posted May 11, 2009 I think the Pirates logo needs the red in it, just to balance out the yellow.Onto Milwaukee...notesadded modified Beer Barrel Man (with Wisconsin silhouette) to sleevesput Milwaukee on road jerseymodified both scripts, extended underlining swash further to the left on each for better balancechanged numeral font from Times New Roman to Clarendon, I feel it's a better matchchanged nameplate lettering to standard MLB block, more legibilityput modified BBM logo on home BP Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaiseTheBanner Posted May 11, 2009 Share Posted May 11, 2009 Why can't I see any of the images? avatar by crkraider22, signature by crkraider22 and chestnutz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted May 11, 2009 Author Share Posted May 11, 2009 do you have photobucket blocked? Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted May 11, 2009 Share Posted May 11, 2009 Lookin' good, slapshot. That Brewers concept might be one of my favorites so far. The barrel man is a nice touch on the sleeves and that number font in much better than what they have now. Great job on this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronxmet Posted May 11, 2009 Share Posted May 11, 2009 You are right on the Brewers' concept, the Clarendon number font matches better than the current Times New Roman font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GuitarPunk2512 Posted May 12, 2009 Share Posted May 12, 2009 love the brewers set, the city name on the roads is alot better, and i like the gold birm, i would try and make the script on the alt white or gold though to make it stand out more, i would also use that gold birm hat with the alt unis. Mets, Jets, Islanders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linus Posted May 12, 2009 Share Posted May 12, 2009 The Brewers set is perfect. Love the update font for the name and numbers, the road jersey looks great and all around its a solid concept. Again, nice work. beLEAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted May 14, 2009 Author Share Posted May 14, 2009 notesnot much done...I think the current set is a good balance of blue and redmodified road script to vertically arched letters with red outlinesused "angry cub" logo as sleeve patch and home BP cap Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 My one nitpick is the vertically arched letters on the wordmark, but the arc treatment on the nameplates. Unify them and you're set. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted May 14, 2009 Author Share Posted May 14, 2009 notesAgain, tough to mess with near-perfection, or to do what hasn't already been donecreated road St. Louis scriptadded cuff striping to add just a bit of colorcreated red home alternate, uses current Sunday alt hat Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 Cubs and Cardinals look good. I like the use of the St. Louis script on the road. I also like the red Cards alt. Nice job. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted May 28, 2009 Author Share Posted May 28, 2009 took a little break, back to finish upnotesused original blue/orange color scheme (used Mets' Pantones, not sure what originals were)modified Texas/star logo as primary, made star point to Houstonremoved pinstripesadded road stirrups Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 Astros look good. I like that road cap. But what I like the most is that new primary logo you made. It looks great. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted May 29, 2009 Author Share Posted May 29, 2009 noteschanged silver halo to gold (I am an alchemist!... sorta)removed drop shadow from scriptmade script/numbers/etc white w/blue outline on red alt for legibilitymade home cap blue, added blue brim to road capkept "Angels" as road script...until the team can figure out where it's located, Angels is fine. Team has had a long history of not using city/region name on road uniforms. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shumway Posted May 29, 2009 Share Posted May 29, 2009 Damn near perfect with the Halos, slappy. My only gripe is the red road cap. I'd either switch the caps you have here or make the road cap solid navy. I don't think I've commented at all here, but I've checked this thread regularly. Great stuff overall...I love the dark green/light blue Rays set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted May 29, 2009 Author Share Posted May 29, 2009 Other teams I've worked up using a similar color scheme seem to have blue road caps, and I wanted to break away from that pattern. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted May 29, 2009 Share Posted May 29, 2009 I knida agre with shumway about the road cap. It's a good cap and I understand why you used it, but IMO it just doesn't look that good with the road uni. I love the home cap and the alternate jersey. Everything on the red jersey is easy to see. Great job. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted May 29, 2009 Share Posted May 29, 2009 Put halos on the caps and this is perfect. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted June 1, 2009 Author Share Posted June 1, 2009 notesnot much different from the current setup, just made the alt font the universal fontmade lettering on alt white instead of silver for legibilityteal piping on alt Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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