jaha32 Posted November 4, 2009 Author Share Posted November 4, 2009 I made the changes...well most of them. chestnuts mentioned not liking the white highlight on the eye but when I took it away it didnt look s nice really so I made it smaller and moved it slightly. the eye lost some of its popping out feel without it. the mouth is gone all together. bees dont really have a distinguishable mouth anyways so hopefully it doesnt seem weired without it. I veried the thickness of the lines on the ball. im sure if i completely understood what some of you meant by that so hopefully this is better. i also added a teak sliver in the shading area to make it better. hopefully its not too much. the yellow highlights on the arm and hand are slightly thicker and there is more space between the highlights and the hand like harrington suggested so it is more balanced throughout the logo. oh and i changed the S a little and the B on the other side just to even out the symmetry. hopefully it is better now... i may do some more things with this like the Bee all alone and an alternative logo but I want to get the primary right first DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 Ooh I don't like how that ball looks, IMO the teal and gold look turrible next to each other. Otherwise great concept! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spammy Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 Great Update!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeadFish Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 Great logo!Removing the mouth did help, still looks great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopskid Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 Maybe try removing the white circle from the eye, just to compare which looks better, i'm not sure. The bees right arm should be longer, seems like the left one is bent and still longer than the right.Other than that, I love it. Reminds me a lot of the Hornets' logo, except much much better. Nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDixonDesign Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 Wow! Love the update, I love everything about it! Great rendering... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TornadoGTS Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 I didnt think the mouth was that bad but after seeing without it, I definitely like it without it. Im kinda on the fence on the teal on the ball though. Facebook: CustomSportsCovers Twitter: CSCovers Quote No because when the Irish came to Ireland and first came in contact with the leprechaun people, they didn't take their land away and force them to move west. Instead, the two groups learned to assimilate peacefully. However, certain tribes of the leprechaun refused to taint the pure blood and moved north into the forests of Ireland, only to be seen rarely, usually at the same time of a rainbows appearance and occasionally at the factories of Lucky Charms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted November 5, 2009 Author Share Posted November 5, 2009 I extended the left arm some. before i thought about extending it but thought maybe it was coming across to the viewer as at a slight angle towards you so it was ok a little short, but i can see it is better with length now. hopefully its there. i got rid of the teal on the ball since teal and yellow never made contact in any other part of the logo it makes sense not to have them touch there as some suggested. some of you werent too big on the white cicle on the eye so i added a version wihout it just to see. i personally think the eye loses alot without the white highlight when comparing but i guess i might be in the minority. ive never done an insect before and one of the cool things about them is there huge glaring eyes so i thought to make them really pop. i dont know. which one is better as far as eye????? i'd like to hear what you guys think about it.... DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
epper Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 i'm with you: keep the shiny dot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
santoleri3 Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 i'm with you: keep the shiny dot.I agree... keep the dot. Courtesy chapeeko Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jedipick1138 Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 I like the dot. Great logo! One of the best ones I have seen on here in a long time!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDixonDesign Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 Agreed for keeping the "dot" on the eye...looks great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 Keep the dot, and great work. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1stDownCreative Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 the white highlight on the eye is a must...maybe try it as an oval angle with the teal highlight...hand highlights...just one thumb highlighted yellow with every other finger on both hands looks odd...maybe try all yellow on the highlighted side of the bee while keeping the shadowed side teal...i noticed you took away the teal shadow from the ball...have you tryed white highlights at the top of the ball? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 Agreed. Absolutely keep the white highlight on the eye. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TornadoGTS Posted November 5, 2009 Share Posted November 5, 2009 the white highlight on the eye is a must...maybe try it as an oval angle with the teal highlight...exactly. I think thats what threw it off for people the first time around, is that its a perfect little circle and doesnt really flow with the rest of the curves. Facebook: CustomSportsCovers Twitter: CSCovers Quote No because when the Irish came to Ireland and first came in contact with the leprechaun people, they didn't take their land away and force them to move west. Instead, the two groups learned to assimilate peacefully. However, certain tribes of the leprechaun refused to taint the pure blood and moved north into the forests of Ireland, only to be seen rarely, usually at the same time of a rainbows appearance and occasionally at the factories of Lucky Charms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted November 8, 2009 Author Share Posted November 8, 2009 Here are 3 versions with slight differences in the color of shading on the arm and hand. the first one is the same as i had it before with the thumb a yellow highlight since its facing up and the heands are highlighted on the under side so they are teal. that was my rationalal behind it to get a nice blend of yellow and teal and since ther is so little teal to begin with i dont want to take it away really like 1st Down suggested. the second has all yellow and the third has no yellow highlights on the upper body and that is my least favorite. i still like the first best but i'd like to hear what you think. its really so minor maybe nobody cares either way. also added a white highlight on the ball and changed the white dot on the eye to an oval DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted November 8, 2009 Share Posted November 8, 2009 Hey Jaha. Love the concept.Of the latest set. The middle one is the best. I think if you just take away the light blue "highlights" on the middle of the chest and the bee's left shoulder, you would have it perfect. I don't think either really add to the logo. Keep the highlights of yellow on his right arm. You can definitely do away with the middle highlight of light blue. If you want to keep the other shoulder highlight, make it smaller or ona different angle. right now it doesn't add anything to the dimension of the bee. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robo Posted November 8, 2009 Share Posted November 8, 2009 That is a great logo! Look forward to seeing more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted November 8, 2009 Share Posted November 8, 2009 I vote middle as well. Great stuff. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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