jaha32 Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 here is a logo for a fictional team I thought sounded cool. my initial idea was not for him to be muscular but it just seemed to work out better that way than having a more real bee-like midsectoin. I wasnt sure about the light blue color in there but thought it looked better than just yellow navy and white. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 rad, love the hands. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firefly Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 Badass. Any chance you could drop the mouth? I feel like the bee head sans mouth would have a more powerful look and play nicely against the hands. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logoman Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 That's pretty sweet. I agree with Firefly about the mouth. I think it would add a little focus on the superbly rendered hands to lose the mouth. BTW, is this for Birmingham England or Alabama? Just curious because the English pronunciation sounds better to me.You know, Birmingh'm compared to Bir ming hayam. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undead Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 Love everything about it. The wordmark is awesome and so are the hands. The light blue really adds to the overall package. I agree with the others that the mouth is unnecessary.Everytime you post a concept, it's a pleasure to look at. Portfoliobobschultz6' class="bbc_url">@bobschultz6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bowld Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 looks amazing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
epper Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 awesome. the best logo i've seen on these boards in quite a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sergeimakarenkov44 Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 this is the bees knees. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 This is really nice. What does the bee look like without the Wordmark? cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 i love this logo. i think the 2 white highlights (on the eye and face) are overkill though. i dont think you need either of them. the "S" also looks a bit funky, i thik it would be nicer like this...also, try some veried width strokes on the ball. it might have a bit more rythem with the rest of the logo GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 Very Charlotte Hornets, and very good. I'd definitely look at losing the mouth, or at least changing it. Perhaps a thin blue stroke coming up from the bottom of the head would work. I also think the yellow highlights on the arm and hand could be thickened. Everywhere else you've used yellow, it's for big sections of color, and I think it would look better if they all matched.Other than those small nitpicks, this is really nice. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 one of those concepts where you click on it thinking, "ehhh, this will be mediocre just like any other"and then when you open it you raise your eyebrows!!!! i was like, HOLY!!amazing looking logo!!! even the finger pointing is appealing rather than lame. Might just throw this in my top 10 original logos done on this site. masterful job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 Really, really nice. My only beefs are the ball could be rendered better (just isn't up to par with everything else) and the white spot in his eye is bothering me a little. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mad dog Posted November 3, 2009 Share Posted November 3, 2009 Well played sir! Looks very smooth.. Love the Bee's eye's and wings! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted November 3, 2009 Author Share Posted November 3, 2009 thanks for all the feedback guys. every time i make a post i really have no idea what the feedback will be like and am happy with what you guys said. i will get rid of the mouth and make the other changes you suggested, like some of the highlights and the ball, and post them soon when i get a chance. BrandNstudio, I know what your saying about the S but was thinking the entire wordmark's overall symmetrical shape looked better overall altho the S itself is a little different if that makes sense. i will see what i can do with that. undead, thanks for the comments also as always. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted November 3, 2009 Author Share Posted November 3, 2009 That's pretty sweet. I agree with Firefly about the mouth. I think it would add a little focus on the superbly rendered hands to lose the mouth. BTW, is this for Birmingham England or Alabama? Just curious because the English pronunciation sounds better to me.You know, Birmingh'm compared to Bir ming hayam.i forgot to answer your question a second ago...i was thinkng Alabama. i know birmingham, alabama is names after the england one since they both were industrial but other than that i dont know too much about the england place. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Audiodrama Posted November 3, 2009 Share Posted November 3, 2009 Nothing short of stellar. Can we pick at it? Yeah. But still professional-quality work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted November 3, 2009 Share Posted November 3, 2009 Good work here. The only thing that really jumped out at me was the fineness of the fingers. They definitely need a little more thickness to match the overall line width of the drawing, and what I mean by that is to just add more purple around the perimeter of them while leaving the teal highlights where they are. The lines on the basketball could also be made a little more dynamic by varying their width. I don't really have a problem with the white areas on the face and eye, but I will say the the white mark on the face did not read as a mouth to me until it was stated. Thought it was just a highlight. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TornadoGTS Posted November 3, 2009 Share Posted November 3, 2009 I don't really have a problem with the white areas on the face and eye, but I will say the the white mark on the face did not read as a mouth to me until it was stated. Thought it was just a highlight.Same here, I thought it was a highlight. I would just do something to it to make it look more like a mouth Facebook: CustomSportsCovers Twitter: CSCovers Quote No because when the Irish came to Ireland and first came in contact with the leprechaun people, they didn't take their land away and force them to move west. Instead, the two groups learned to assimilate peacefully. However, certain tribes of the leprechaun refused to taint the pure blood and moved north into the forests of Ireland, only to be seen rarely, usually at the same time of a rainbows appearance and occasionally at the factories of Lucky Charms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted November 4, 2009 Share Posted November 4, 2009 thanks for all the feedback guys. every time i make a post i really have no idea what the feedback will be like and am happy with what you guys said. i will get rid of the mouth and make the other changes you suggested, like some of the highlights and the ball, and post them soon when i get a chance. BrandNstudio, I know what your saying about the S but was thinking the entire wordmark's overall symmetrical shape looked better overall altho the S itself is a little different if that makes sense. i will see what i can do with that. undead, thanks for the comments also as always.yea i see why you treated the "s" the way you did, it gives it a nice symmetrical silhouette, but the actual form of the letter ends up just looking weird and it dosnt quite match the others. i think you have the right idea, just keep working at it GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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