Ink's MLB

[Ink]

Colorado Rockies

[AnythingChicago]

A couple suggestions:

-Add some purple into that home pinstripe jersey.

-Outline the numbers on the road jersey.

Overall, it's not my favorite concept, but it's just...Okay...I guess...

[Ink]

It's hard to see but the pinstripes are purple. I'll come back to it and some other ones once i finished all 30 teams

[Ink]

Arizona Diamondbacks

[Ink]

Los Angeles Dodgers

Hard to improve their current set of uniforms

1)Added blue alt for home

2)Added piping on the sleeves for all uniforms

3)Patch on sleeves is a mick of the Brooklyn Dodgers logo from 1911 and the current LA logo

4)Added home and away Brooklyn Dodgers uniform to be worn sometimes when they play the Giants to have a throwback series

[Ink]

San Francisco Giants

Very hard to improve their current set

1)Got rid of the gold out line in everything

2)Home script is orange with black outline

3)Alt Friday home is orange, hat is orange with black brim

4)Away script says San Francisco but with the same font as the home

5)Black alt roads added with a black hat and orange brim

6)All the patches are the same

7)No names on back off all uniforms, unlike current where names are on their roads

8)Added alt New York Giants home and roads for use when they play the Dodgers in a series

[aci]

Erm... San Fancisco?

[Ink]

Erm... San Fancisco?

Dam it!! i did not notice that, now im pissed off, thanks for the heads up

[Ink]

I fixed the Giants the best I could right now. I will go back once I'm done with all 30 teams to fix the rest

[Ink]

New York Yankees

In my opinion they are perfect the way they are, but here are some minor tweaks

1)Replaced the red in their primary logo with their color blue

2)Outlines on numbers for their pinstripe uniform are grey

3)Added a blue home alt

4)Road sleeve piping is a little different then their currents

5)Added a road hat with a gray brim

6)Added a blue alt road uniform

[Littlem27]

The only thing I would change here is scrap the road hat.

[Spanbread1]

lol these are nearly as bad as letsgooakland's ideas./ its like you copied all of the major league logos and tried imrproving them, but really you made them worse!! lmao

[LetsGoOakland9]

lol these are nearly as bad as letsgooakland's ideas./ its like you copied all of the major league logos and tried imrproving them, but really you made them worse!! lmao

why do you have such a boner for me? This is the second thread you've brought me up in

[Spanbread1]

lol these are nearly as bad as letsgooakland's ideas./ its like you copied all of the major league logos and tried imrproving them, but really you made them worse!! lmao

why do you have such a boner for me? This is the second thread you've brought me up in

on the contrary, LGO. i actually think ur really bad at making logos and uniforms, and its really funny that you tink peoepl like your jerseys. lol

[Lights Out]

And I actually think you're really bad at grammar and spelling, and it's really funny that you think you can rudely insult others' work without any concepts to your name.

[Spanbread1]

And I actually think you're really bad at grammar and spelling, and it's really funny that you think you can rudely insult others' work without any concepts to your name.

your ideasa re good lights out. its just that letsgooakland and ink are really bad so they should stop making those templates and stick to posting critigues like me

[LetsGoOakland9]

And I actually think you're really bad at grammar and spelling, and it's really funny that you think you can rudely insult others' work without any concepts to your name.

your ideasa re good lights out. its just that letsgooakland and ink are really bad so they should stop making those templates and stick to posting critigues like me

there's a difference between critiques and constructive criticism and what you post. Your presence on the boards would be welcomed if you would post helpful replies.

Also, before you continue to insult peoples' work you should post some of your own

[Spanbread1]

And I actually think you're really bad at grammar and spelling, and it's really funny that you think you can rudely insult others' work without any concepts to your name.

your ideasa re good lights out. its just that letsgooakland and ink are really bad so they should stop making those templates and stick to posting critigues like me

there's a difference between critiques and constructive criticism and what you post. Your presence on the boards would be welcomed if you would post helpful replies.

Also, before you continue to insult peoples' work you should post some of your own

your right, LGO. ill do my best to post helpful critisism. im sorry to ink and to you, LGO.

[mania]

Truthfully, every single one of these feels rushed and slapped together. On some the numbers are omg HUGE and on some, it's the scripts. In large part, they're kind of uninspired, and across the board at best mediocre.

Ok, I'll start from the beginning.

1. Phillies - Not bad, to be honest. I don't know how well the color scheme works now, I think the blue's too dark to really compliment the maroon, but I like the idea of making the maroon the lead color of the Phillies. My biggest issue with this is the sleeve patch/numbers, as combining them really doesn't work.

2. Mets - here's where things start to go off the rails. Most people would agree that dropping the black was a good thing, but holy , the execution here is really awful. The scripts are ginormous, hat logo is monstrous, the back numbers are too, the player name being straight is a downgrade (and it's off-center), the two blue alts are unnecessary, and if they were to go with two blue, they don't really match and really throw things off.

3. Braves - the updated colors don't work, the execution's poor... basically see step two, beyond the monumental mistake of giving the Braves a red alternate.

4. Marlins - the road script is absolutely hideous, it doesn't match the home script and the colors are inconsistent across the board.

5. Nationals - Scripts are poor (and don't match the Walgreens W), number font isn't very good, and the 4th of July stuff is just an absolute :censored:ing trainwreck.

6. Cardinals - the St. Louis script as used doesn't work because it's completely off-center. It makes the entire jersey look lopsided.

7. Cubs - nothing here is really an improvement.

8. Pirates - don't hate the ideas here, but there's never a reason a team would need three different home alternates.

9. Reds - the cream doesn't look cream. It looks tan. And it's not a very good look. With the change in scripts, the number/name font feels completely out of place. The Reds have perhaps the best visual history in baseball, so much great stuff to play off of, and this does none of that.

10. Brewers - the BiG clashes with the rest of the set, the scripts don't match, and the inside stroke on the current script just looks... awful.

11. Astros - once again, you just blanded things up. Nothing here is an improvement over what they currently wear.

12. Padres - idea wise, I can't fault you too much on this. That being said, the white SD doesn't look very good, and the road script is kind of unfortunate and doesn't really match... looks especially odd with the number font.

13. Rockies - The Rockies might have the worst every day set in baseball, and yet you still gave the world a downgrade. The entire logo on the script is bulky, the single color numbers (when you use them) do not work, and the awful scripts need something new.

14. Diamondbacks - I don't like the D-Backs script on their actual, but the full thing in that font does not work at all. Similarly, I don't know what you did to the D-Snake, but downgrade.

15. Dodgers - hard to screw up, but the retro sleeve patch feels forced, and the Brooklyn alternate is silly. A fanbase would never stand for their team wearing another city on their chest on a regular basis.

16. Giants - While I can almost appreciate your attempts to change this, and agree with dropping the gold, the road script is really ugly, and black with orange trim has been the team's identity forever (barring this year's awful orange alternate), so the orange script really falls flat. And see Dodgers re: New York alts.

17. Yankees - why is everything outlined except for the New York script on the grey? And what in the world did you do to that poor script? It looks like the worst VectorMagic job I've ever seen. The primary logo update doesn't work because of how much the navy clashes with the bright blue of the hat, the road hat is really, really unfortunate, and the alts add absolutely nothing to the package.

I stopped mentioning the awful execution on the first few, but it's prominent in all. You've rushed every single one of these. It's ok to take some time to try to get things right.

Go and try to go through some tutorials. Start here, especially about arching text. In some of these, you have some good ideas, which is part of the reason I felt compelled to reply. You just have to give them some love/time/effort.

[skier14]

You really need to spend more time on these. Make them cleaner, and neater. These all feel very rushed.

You have made 17 teams in 11 days, really try to slow it down, take more time, and create a higher quality concept.

A lot of my advice is on the display, so if you could fix that, then maybe I (and other members for that matter) could give you more feedback on your designs as designs.

The key is to spend more time. 17 teams that fast is really a lot, try to slow it down and make each one presentable.