piratesfan16 Posted November 28, 2011 Author Share Posted November 28, 2011 So wait: you created concepts for every team, redid them based on C&C, then made final concepts as with this one? Because that's what I inferred, though on Page 1 it says "completed" for all the AL teams, which would contradict by getting rid of the second go round of C&C. I'm confused.Don't mind that front page. I'm redoing that. Even if it says, "COMPLETED", it's really not. This is how it went:1) Submit first concept, get C&C2) Submit first update, get more C&C3) Submit final conceptI tried your C&C(putting gold piping on the road), but it just didn't look right to me, so I didn't include it. Sorry about the confusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bravo96 Posted November 28, 2011 Share Posted November 28, 2011 Los Angeles Angels of AnaheimEverything you see here is final. Therefore, I can finally say that I have completed an MLB concept.Some last minute changes to the uniforms.Here's what it would look like on shop.mlb.comNext up, the Seattle Mariners.This, this is absolutely beautiful. Gorgeous, GORGEOUS work here, piratesfan. Very nice. Click the Banner - Join the Movement! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted November 28, 2011 Author Share Posted November 28, 2011 Thank you Bravo96. I've changed my mind everyone. I'm still open to C&C. If I happen to get a comment that tells me something that's wrong with the concept, I'll go ahead and fix before I even begin working on the next team. Sorry about the confusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted November 28, 2011 Share Posted November 28, 2011 Perhaps another route to consider if you make a second MLB series would be to do one concept at a time (i.e. Do all its edits and go rounds based on C&C until it's perfect and then do your next concept) Just an idea.Oh, and great job on the Halos. Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12   Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted November 29, 2011 Author Share Posted November 29, 2011 Perhaps another route to consider if you make a second MLB series would be to do one concept at a time (i.e. Do all its edits and go rounds based on C&C until it's perfect and then do your next concept) Just an idea.Oh, and great job on the Halos.That's what I should have done from the beginning. I guess I'm a little impatient in that I want to keep going and going through concept after concept. Oh well, live and learn. Thanks.Seattle MarinersSome changes since last time. First of all, I went with a blue-teal instead of the darker, northwest green. I wanted to give them a brighter look. Some logo changes as well. You can see them below. Keep in mind, I'm not trying to monopoly any logo ideas that anyone has out there. If you want to make a concept that has a lighthouse in it, go right ahead. I don't care. This is a place to share ideas. Anyways, here are all of the logos(new spoked-wheel logo no included).Here's the uniforms.Here's what it would look like on shop.mlb.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted November 29, 2011 Share Posted November 29, 2011 This concept is perfect except for that hat. It looks like an eye. Add spokes on the sides as well so it looks more like a wheel (I'm assuming this is what you were going for). Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12   Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted November 30, 2011 Author Share Posted November 30, 2011 Better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted November 30, 2011 Author Share Posted November 30, 2011 Oakland AthleticsKind of tired to write a description right now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fox Posted December 1, 2011 Share Posted December 1, 2011 Love the new template that you're using, looks great! I think this A's set has a lot of positives. The home and road are perfect, but I think that the alternates could be improved. I'm not a fan of using a vest for the yellow alternate (not that there's anything wrong with it, I just thought the full jersey yellow alts from this year were the best). On the green alternate, either make the script yellow with white outlines or just plain yellow with no outline. Either one would work. Overall, nice work.By the way, why is it that now you've started to give teams two home alternates as opposed to a home alt and a road alt. The Angels set is best with two home alternates but I think that the M's could have a navy blue road alt and the A's could have a green road alt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted December 1, 2011 Share Posted December 1, 2011 I'm not calling you out for stealing or anything as it's a fairly easy concept, but that A's logo is solid. Raysox did a similar one once as well. In other words, it needs to happen for real. That said, the A's set looks great. My only complaint would be the primary logo. The field is a fine idea, but that seems too plain for a professional primary logo. I don't have any great ideas for improvement other than maybe putting the Athletics script over the field or something. Anyway, keep up the good work! https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted December 1, 2011 Author Share Posted December 1, 2011 I'm not calling you out for stealing or anything as it's a fairly easy concept, but that A's logo is solid. Raysox did a similar one once as well. In other words, it needs to happen for real. That said, the A's set looks great. My only complaint would be the primary logo. The field is a fine idea, but that seems too plain for a professional primary logo. I don't have any great ideas for improvement other than maybe putting the Athletics script over the field or something. Anyway, keep up the good work!Wow, when I clicked on that link, my day was made. Haha, that's awesome. Thanks for the encouragement as well Bmac. It means a lot coming from you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted December 2, 2011 Share Posted December 2, 2011 Mariners:YepOakland:Agree with Fox that it would look better sans vest, but other than that, great job. Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12   Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted December 2, 2011 Author Share Posted December 2, 2011 Here's my progress with the logo for the Rangers. If anyone has any ideas on this, I'd be very thankful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted December 2, 2011 Share Posted December 2, 2011 This is the perfect place to drop Easter eggs. Perhaps you could model his face after a Texas great (Ivan Rodriguez? Nolan Ryan?). Make a Toy Story Reference? Base his clothes off of classic Rangers jerseys? Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12   Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted December 2, 2011 Author Share Posted December 2, 2011 This is the perfect place to drop Easter eggs. Perhaps you could model his face after a Texas great (Ivan Rodriguez? Nolan Ryan?). Make a Toy Story Reference? Base his clothes off of classic Rangers jerseys?Nolan Ryan was my original idea. Part of me really wants to go with a "silhouette" look.Take a look:Silhouette modeled after Harmon Killebrew.Silhouette modeled after Jerry Lewis. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted December 2, 2011 Share Posted December 2, 2011 The problem with doing a silhouetted look is that it would clash with a very detailed horse if you know what I mean. If you want to do the silhouette, you should greatly simplify the horse (i.e. Make it almost a silhouette its self). Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12   Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted December 2, 2011 Author Share Posted December 2, 2011 Quick update before bed.The problem with doing a silhouetted look is that it would clash with a very detailed horse if you know what I mean. If you want to do the silhouette, you should greatly simplify the horse (i.e. Make it almost a silhouette its self).Oh yeah! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fox Posted December 2, 2011 Share Posted December 2, 2011 This would probably seem corny for a logo but I think it would be cool if you put him in Rangers uniform with a Rangers hat too, and use a generic face. I don't know, I think it could look great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fckger Posted December 2, 2011 Share Posted December 2, 2011 http://urlzoomr.cc/RRvvKA8 Black, AGPS + Android 2.2 Version, 3.6 inch Touch Screen, Analog TV (SECAM/PAL/NTSC), Wifi Bluetooth FM function Mobile Phone, Slip-operation can change the menu (3 pages), Dual Sim cards Dual standby Dual Cameras Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted December 2, 2011 Author Share Posted December 2, 2011 I might give that a try Fox.Here's my first attempt at a silhouette logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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