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I actually really like the colors. The raider looks odd though, like he's at a bar and just ran into one of his friends.

Personally I like the shield they use now, maybe try doing a simple update of that?

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That might be the worst thing I ever seen it is ugly and the logo looks retarded and the colors are ugly

If you don't have any constructive criticism to post, then just don't post.

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That might be the worst thing I ever seen it is ugly and the logo looks retarded and the colors are ugly

I would expect something like that from a 12 year old, but you say you're 21..... Grow up.

I don't mind that you don't like it... But at least give me some advise on how I can improve it.

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That might be the worst thing I ever seen it is ugly and the logo looks retarded and the colors are ugly

Pathetic. A comment like this should result in immediate termination from the boards- no room for crap like that.

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Okay, I'm just going to pass over Mr. Ignorant above. Wow. Did you even change the colors? Haha.

The concept I like, the jerseys are a little less boring than what they have now. My main issue is with the Fonz-ness of the logo's mascot. For reference:

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I assume that wasn't your intention, but it looks like he's saying "HEYYYY!" instead of being a fierce mascot. The edges of the teeth give a vampirish look to me too. I think if you refine it a little bit, it can go a long way. He's just not quite there yet, IMO. Great start!

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This is a great start, but as others have said, it doesn't fit the part. If this guy was head-on on the shield it would be a lot more Raiders-esque and would probably be a real suitable upgrade on the againg logo.

Your rendering is top-notch, man. You've got a real nice style to your work, and I'll be following other projects you work on!

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Thanks cj... That means a lot coming from you.

Before I start fixing the mentioned areas, do you think the mouth would look better completely closed like the current logo, or, clinching his teeth, or should I keep his mouth open, and just focus on making him look more "fierce"?

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Great start here. I would re-examine the shape of the head, particularly the left side. I think it should extend a little more.

Although silver and black ARE the Raiders, I really like the color shift. One thing I would consider is making the darker cream even darker. As it stands, there's not a lot of contrast. I didn't even notice the five o'clock shadow (which I really like) until I looked at my monitor from a different angle.

Again, great start and I look forward to seeing how this progresses.

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