thespleenenator Posted September 13, 2011 Share Posted September 13, 2011 As I was ranting about how Tim O'Brien's concepts were horrid, I thought "If i'm going to say stuff like that, I should probably do a serious on my own." So here it is.Illinois: Home, Away, Home Alt 1, Home Alt 2, Home Alt 3,Home Alt 4,Away Alt 1C&C Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted September 13, 2011 Share Posted September 13, 2011 no offense, but it kinda lacks creativity. try connecting the uni more to the illini tribe instead of using a simple, generic template. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted September 13, 2011 Share Posted September 13, 2011 So what's going on with the shoulder numbers? Do you read them only from the front or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wILL-INI Posted September 13, 2011 Share Posted September 13, 2011 Well, first of all, the Chief automatically makes this not a serious concept. Yes its a great logo, and we never shoulda lost it, but to bring it up is just sad now. The italic Illinois is a little weak without an outline. And the single line down the helmet and pants is kinda boring. I like the font for the numbers, but they are kinda boring. Also from the side you get a big I on the shoulder and the leg side, sometimes of different colors. A bit redundant. And yeah what is up with the shoulder numbers? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HawkeyHouse Posted September 13, 2011 Share Posted September 13, 2011 They seem to plain to me, I do like them. Try a white helmet instead, and add more blue! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted September 13, 2011 Share Posted September 13, 2011 It's not bad, and your execution has improved, but there's also not much to the design. I just feel like Illinois' general aesthetic lends itself to some creative designs with split colors or native imagery, but this lacks any of that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicageaux Posted September 13, 2011 Share Posted September 13, 2011 I'm not really digging the I on the sleeves, it just seems too much and there's something about the helmet as well, but I really can't figure out what. Other than that, not that bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted September 13, 2011 Share Posted September 13, 2011 *snickers* A serious... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OchentaYOcho88 Posted September 13, 2011 Share Posted September 13, 2011 The orientation of the TV numbers just don't look right. This image gives you a good idea of what it would look like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted September 13, 2011 Share Posted September 13, 2011 Kinda 'blah' dude. These are pretty basic for proving that you can "do a serious on your own"...Like why not do something outlandish, since you were so opposed to how safe Tim's were? Seems like you took a more conservative route than even Tim did with these. I wouldn't qualify combinations as "more creative", either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winghaz Posted September 13, 2011 Share Posted September 13, 2011 Shoulder or arm numbers aren't just there for decoration. They have a purpose, for the fans and the folks in the pressbox. The numbers need to be facing the fans/pressbox to help identify the player.That's why I object so much to Nike's uniforms not having shoulder/arm numbers. Those numbers really do serve a purpose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thespleenenator Posted September 13, 2011 Author Share Posted September 13, 2011 Wow, these looked so much better on Inkscape. I look at them now, and you guys are right. The design isn't bad, but man these are boring. I'll leave them up for now, but I need to get more creative than this. I'm surprised no one noticed the socks, and the matching patterns on the shoes. I guess they were more subtle than I thought they were. I was originally going to do a headdress helmet, but I thought that was over done. As for the shoulder numbers, I have no idea what you guys are talking about. Shoulder numbers don't face forward, they face up. Maybe the fact that they're italicized is throwing you off?1 more thing. You guys seem to be confused with what I was getting on Tim about. It wasn't that his designs were simple, I don't mind that. It's that his changes were so minuscule, that there was almost no difference between the current uniforms and his concepts. That's why I was "angry". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbannon92 Posted September 14, 2011 Share Posted September 14, 2011 Wow, these looked so much better on Inkscape. I look at them now, and you guys are right. The design isn't bad, but man these are boring. I'll leave them up for now, but I need to get more creative than this. I'm surprised no one noticed the socks, and the matching patterns on the shoes. I guess they were more subtle than I thought they were. I was originally going to do a headdress helmet, but I thought that was over done. As for the shoulder numbers, I have no idea what you guys are talking about. Shoulder numbers don't face forward, they face up. Maybe the fact that they're italicized is throwing you off?1 more thing. You guys seem to be confused with what I was getting on Tim about. It wasn't that his designs were simple, I don't mind that. It's that his changes were so minuscule, that there was almost no difference between the current uniforms and his concepts. That's why I was "angry".I don't like the continuation of the stripe on the socks, especially since college teams wear low socks. It wouldn't be very noticeable.Your shoulder numbers ARE wrong. They should be parallel to the edge of the jersey - yours are perpendicular.I would rather see a concept that doesn't mess with an already solid look than see one that's a downgrade, which IMO yours is. You should try to incorporate the zig-zag/split color pattern, since it's so unique and identifiable with Illinois. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted September 14, 2011 Share Posted September 14, 2011 This is very bland. Tim O'Brien's concepts didn't look that bland. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thespleenenator Posted September 14, 2011 Author Share Posted September 14, 2011 Wow, these looked so much better on Inkscape. I look at them now, and you guys are right. The design isn't bad, but man these are boring. I'll leave them up for now, but I need to get more creative than this. I'm surprised no one noticed the socks, and the matching patterns on the shoes. I guess they were more subtle than I thought they were. I was originally going to do a headdress helmet, but I thought that was over done. As for the shoulder numbers, I have no idea what you guys are talking about. Shoulder numbers don't face forward, they face up. Maybe the fact that they're italicized is throwing you off?1 more thing. You guys seem to be confused with what I was getting on Tim about. It wasn't that his designs were simple, I don't mind that. It's that his changes were so minuscule, that there was almost no difference between the current uniforms and his concepts. That's why I was "angry".I don't like the continuation of the stripe on the socks, especially since college teams wear low socks. It wouldn't be very noticeable.Your shoulder numbers ARE wrong. They should be parallel to the edge of the jersey - yours are perpendicular.I would rather see a concept that doesn't mess with an already solid look than see one that's a downgrade, which IMO yours is. You should try to incorporate the zig-zag/split color pattern, since it's so unique and identifiable with Illinois.Everyone is entitled to their opinion, but seriously? It's just a bunch of random blobs and lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbannon92 Posted September 14, 2011 Share Posted September 14, 2011 Wow, these looked so much better on Inkscape. I look at them now, and you guys are right. The design isn't bad, but man these are boring. I'll leave them up for now, but I need to get more creative than this. I'm surprised no one noticed the socks, and the matching patterns on the shoes. I guess they were more subtle than I thought they were. I was originally going to do a headdress helmet, but I thought that was over done. As for the shoulder numbers, I have no idea what you guys are talking about. Shoulder numbers don't face forward, they face up. Maybe the fact that they're italicized is throwing you off?1 more thing. You guys seem to be confused with what I was getting on Tim about. It wasn't that his designs were simple, I don't mind that. It's that his changes were so minuscule, that there was almost no difference between the current uniforms and his concepts. That's why I was "angry".I don't like the continuation of the stripe on the socks, especially since college teams wear low socks. It wouldn't be very noticeable.Your shoulder numbers ARE wrong. They should be parallel to the edge of the jersey - yours are perpendicular.I would rather see a concept that doesn't mess with an already solid look than see one that's a downgrade, which IMO yours is. You should try to incorporate the zig-zag/split color pattern, since it's so unique and identifiable with Illinois.Everyone is entitled to their opinion, but seriously? It's just a bunch of random blobs and lines.You misunderstood. I wasn't saying that Illinois' look was solid. I was referring to Tim's thread, which you've been bashing. I'll rephrase...I would rather see Tim's concepts with little change to already solid looks than see a concept that's a downgrade, which IMO yours is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thespleenenator Posted September 14, 2011 Author Share Posted September 14, 2011 I still don't see the difference. I was saying that Illinois current look is terrible. What the hell does Tim have to do with anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbannon92 Posted September 14, 2011 Share Posted September 14, 2011 I still don't see the difference. I was saying that Illinois current look is terrible. What the hell does Tim have to do with anything.I'm saying that you're not really proving anything in this thread. You made this thread to "talk the talk" after bashing Tim's thread. I'm saying that you're not backing it up. While your concept made a lot of changes, they're not necessarily good changes. I would rather see a concept with very few changes than one with changes that downgrade the look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thespleenenator Posted September 14, 2011 Author Share Posted September 14, 2011 I still don't see the difference. I was saying that Illinois current look is terrible. What the hell does Tim have to do with anything.I'm saying that you're not really proving anything in this thread. You made this thread to "talk the talk" after bashing Tim's thread. I'm saying that you're not backing it up. While your concept made a lot of changes, they're not necessarily good changes. I would rather see a concept with very few changes than one with changes that downgrade the look.So you LIKE Illinois current look? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbannon92 Posted September 14, 2011 Share Posted September 14, 2011 I still don't see the difference. I was saying that Illinois current look is terrible. What the hell does Tim have to do with anything.I'm saying that you're not really proving anything in this thread. You made this thread to "talk the talk" after bashing Tim's thread. I'm saying that you're not backing it up. While your concept made a lot of changes, they're not necessarily good changes. I would rather see a concept with very few changes than one with changes that downgrade the look.So you LIKE Illinois current look?This shouldn't be that hard to comprehend...No, their current look is average. Your concept is worse. I guess I have to be blunt...your concept is bad. Take our advice, and come out with an update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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