Whittier S Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 Thicken that outside line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted May 26, 2014 Author Share Posted May 26, 2014 2.4 MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 Never stretch a typeface to "fit" your design. If it doesn't fit in the space, then find a different typeface. Also, move the edge of the circle away from the edge of the red area. It draws the eye too much. Finally, the top of the badge should just be straight angles imo, not forced into a weird curve like you've got it now. Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 Keep listing to the critiques that you are getting and improving the logo. It may seem like a lot, but it's defenitely worth it. Posters will value your other work far more if you're able to continue to strive to perfect your work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted May 26, 2014 Author Share Posted May 26, 2014 3.0 MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1clkgtramg Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 You're on to something here. Shape is right, general design is right. Now its more about prefferences like the font or another outline added to give it more colour. Wait till you get more responses to see what is missing/needed. US and World License Plate Redesign - Fixing the Elite Ice Hockey League - NHL to Soccer Crossover - European Hockey League Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 This is great that you've given lots of thought to revision and considered what others have to say. That's why this community exists.Think about what would get lost if this would get shrunk down to the size of a badge on a soccer jersey. Think about what would be too thin or difficult to pull off with embroidery thread. I actually shrink down logos so that they are the same size in my monitor as they'd be in real life for different applications, to help me do this. This is almost there. I think the phrase "Soccer Club" would lose its significance if this were shrunk down. I know you put it there to help fill some dead space, but I'm not so sure. What if you changed the top text to "TENNESSEE S.C." (which definitely looks like a more soccer-y way to put it)? Experiment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 I would say make the Tennessee seal a soccer ball ( either old-school or new-school), but I don't think it would translate as well on paper as it would in my head. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted May 26, 2014 Author Share Posted May 26, 2014 I would say make the Tennessee seal a soccer ball ( either old-school or new-school), but I don't think it would translate as well on paper as it would in my head.I say otherwise. is is one of the most iconic symbols on any of the US flags and means much to the state (I have lived there all my life) It would make no sensethat will be a rare occasion I reject an idea MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted May 26, 2014 Share Posted May 26, 2014 I'm liking it right now. How about adding a white outline around the red portion? "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted May 26, 2014 Author Share Posted May 26, 2014 So it has been frustrating trying to figure this out so I looked through all the world cup crests and found that all the good ones (except for Germany) have some soccer-ish shape, the name of the country, and some detail from the flag, and nothing else so I removed all extra text. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdp Posted May 27, 2014 Share Posted May 27, 2014 So it has been frustrating trying to figure this out so I looked through all the world cup crests and found that all the good ones (except for Germany) have some soccer-ish shape, the name of the country, and some detail from the flag, and nothing else so I removed all extra text.[image]You're on to something with this, but the crests you reference also convey the sport--whether it be within the association's acronym (FFF, KNVB, CBF) or an image of a soccer ball. You'll need either of those if you continue designing this for soccer. "Type something, will ya? We're paying for this stuff." - Peter VenkmanComplete: Stateside Soccer Federation | Complete: World Football Club Alliance | Stalled: Roller Hockey International Redux | Stalled: MLB & Soccer Crossover Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted May 27, 2014 Share Posted May 27, 2014 "Tennessee" either needs to be removed or made bigger because it does not look right at all that small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted May 27, 2014 Share Posted May 27, 2014 Kern the text to be more spread out. Far better than stretching. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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