AAO Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 custom wordmark, im gonna try some other tertiary/secondary marks (its a football concept), and ill make any edits needed:EDIT: Football Unis: Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sabrejeff Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 Very nice!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 Reminds me of the recently released Buffalo Rapids...It looks really nice, but one gripe... it looks like there should be hidden letters in the wave's blue and white highlights... looking at it, I wonder what the "M" stands for. Since none of T, B, or R are particularly conducive to the flow of the logo, perhaps try to eliminate any letters.Nice colours. The Dolphins'? One suggestion would be to downplay the orange ever so slightly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pcgd Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 I like the color scheme...but your outlines are way too thick.Some of your letters need work. The D is one. Also the space underneath the T is a little uneasy...try to incorporate something in there? I dunno, just looks funny cause there aren't any spaces that big anywhere else.The way you have the waves, I think you could incoporate TB or RT (riptide) into the wave shadows.Its a solid start though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted April 27, 2005 Author Share Posted April 27, 2005 awesome thanks guys...yea i realized the outlines were too thick...and yea a TB in the wave sounds good to me. ill work on it. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LMU Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 Nice, but it looks an awful lot like Pepperdine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dwertman Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 Very intriguing...I like alot,especially the colors Kings Cross AFC -BIP, Winnipeg Falcons - TNFF, St. Louis Archers - MLF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted April 27, 2005 Author Share Posted April 27, 2005 lmu pep, could you please post pepperdine's? never seen it.EDIT: Searched em up...now how do they look anything like my concept: Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhilaLogos Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 This i really like. This is one of my favorites of those I've seen from you. The custom wordmark fits very well, the wave is rendered beautifully, and I can't even imagine what kind of uniforms you can make with a set like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scar988 Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 all it needs now is a jersey! I like it a lot. RIP #55 JUNIOR SEAUOwner of ScarDraft.comBleacher Report NFL Featured Columnist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBGKon Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 dude, those are tight, after seeing those I hope when I put my poll up for my fantasy football team...great concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
f-ing palko Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 looks really good -- remenicent of the fisherman Islanders look, and I always liked that lighthouse logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LMU Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 lmu pep, could you please post pepperdine's? never seen it.EDIT: Searched em up...now how do they look anything like my concept:The color scheme is REALLY similar to their previous logo with Neptune, plus the whole wave theme and all.Sorry, it's just that Pepperdine's our arch-rivals, and anything Pepperdine-ish rubs me the wrong way. Still a great concept though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted April 27, 2005 Author Share Posted April 27, 2005 haha understood lmu. uniforms coming soon, i tried getting a 'TB' in the wave but its not working out right. ill keep playing with it. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 You incorporated the city name into the wordmark! That's a bit of a departure from your ususal preference, but I like it better this way.I understand what people are saying about the waves and the "M" or "W" shapes in there, but IMO it's not too big of a deal, at least not a big enough deal to scrap or totally rework the concept.Other than that, I agree on the color selection - good move. Everyone's advice so far would really help this concept (lettering details, outlines, etc.) "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nesi427 Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 VERY VERY sweet concept. I like the city name in the logo and the colors look awesome!Let's see some football and bball and baseball unis for this club... FANTASY SPORTS: UBA (NBA): New York Scrapers | CL (MLB): St Pete Beach Clippers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yh Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 Nice colours. The Dolphins'? . Looks like the Charlotte Bobcats' colors to me.AAO - you're off to a good start with this concept. I'm looking forward to your refinements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 I don't think the outlines look too thick. The lettering is a bit awkward, especially the spacing, but this is a concept where your leanings towards angular/futuristic typefaces will definitely work. Not a bad start on this one. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 That text reminds me of Barnes' Raytown Blue Jays' font. I like it a lot. The wave tertiary looks kinda silly because the shape of the wave is a little off. I would make that trailing edge a perfect circle because my brain wants to turn it into one every time I look at it, causing a strange anomaly in the viewing. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barnesdesign Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 I like the simplicity of this logo. The colors work really well too. I agree with an earlier post about perhaps the outlines being a bit thick. Good job! barnesdesign.netbarnesdesign.posterous.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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