HatCityEnforcer Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 Just wanted to get this one up and out here as well....It's for my MLH expansion team that starts play this coming season...Yes, I did go with the brighter athletic gold over a vegas gold in this..and there's a reason behind it...that being teams that represented New Haven never went with vegas gold as a primary color (the Blades wore red & blue, Nighthawks went from blue & orange to blue & gold to red & blue, to black & silver....the Beast had a traffic sign yellow (as in flourescent..it wasn't pretty ) to go with blue & red. The NH Sens (only in town for a year) just copied the parent club logo and unis (mostly black & red...there was some metallic gold, but just on the circle around the Sen and on the Sen's helmet...)...With that little bit of history in the background, now ya know why I didn't even consider a metallic gold color in this concept....Anyways...here's what I got..C&C is appreciated... FANTASY TEAMSHousatonic U. Dragons (NCFA Basketball): 16-6 (8-4 Conf.)--National Runner-UpJersey State U. (NCFA Football): Inaugural Year - 2006Motor City Silverhawks (WArFL): 9-4 (3rd--National Conf.)Lehigh Valley Ironmen (WAmFL): Inaugural Season--2006New England Marauders RFC (RLI): 6-0-7 (6th place)Detroit Spirit (AA): 3-6 (T-4th--Patriot League)Brooklyn Atlantics (IBF): 10-5 (1st--Appalachian Conf.)Boston Mariners RFU (WRU): Coming Soon!New York Americans (SHL): Inaugural Season - 2006-07 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bulldogbarks55 Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 Excellent, excellent work! Not only are they very tasteful, they actually look like real, old-fashioned HOCKEY UNIFORMS! You didn't have to go with kooky cartoon mascots and god-awful colors and illegible striping patterns. If only the "professional" designers would have as much taste as you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HatCityEnforcer Posted August 17, 2005 Author Share Posted August 17, 2005 *BUMP!* FANTASY TEAMSHousatonic U. Dragons (NCFA Basketball): 16-6 (8-4 Conf.)--National Runner-UpJersey State U. (NCFA Football): Inaugural Year - 2006Motor City Silverhawks (WArFL): 9-4 (3rd--National Conf.)Lehigh Valley Ironmen (WAmFL): Inaugural Season--2006New England Marauders RFC (RLI): 6-0-7 (6th place)Detroit Spirit (AA): 3-6 (T-4th--Patriot League)Brooklyn Atlantics (IBF): 10-5 (1st--Appalachian Conf.)Boston Mariners RFU (WRU): Coming Soon!New York Americans (SHL): Inaugural Season - 2006-07 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moser316 Posted August 17, 2005 Share Posted August 17, 2005 The logo doesn't stand very well on its own, but it really works with this concept. Nice choices on the color scheme and old-school vibe BTW... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted August 17, 2005 Share Posted August 17, 2005 These are very nice. Love the colors and the sweaters (esp. the red!). But I think the primary and secondary logos need work. Right now it seems as though there is too much white space between the plane and the circle. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted August 17, 2005 Share Posted August 17, 2005 I might suggest is to leave the name off when putting the logo on the jerseys, but that's just my own peeve. Though, if you leave the name off, it would probably be best to make the plane take up more room in the circle, rather than leaving a bunch of white space at the bottom of the circle. In fact, it might be best to move the wordmark outside the circle entirely when displaying it with the plane, and have the plane take up that bigger space in the circle.I know the wing should be angled a bit, but the shading makes the wing look almost broken. (I'm not sure how you'd fix that properly, mind you.) Also, the city and name in the wordmark are at two different angles, and it looks strange, plus it seems odd to introduce a completely different typeface on the shoulder logo.All in all, I'd say you've got a great concept and a good start, just needs some cleaning up. Nice job!(Oh, and... Yes, yes, bulldog, we know, you want all designs to revert twenty or thirty years...) Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio  POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB06 Posted August 17, 2005 Share Posted August 17, 2005 Shouldn't the logo be one of these?Wait a second...what? As in a plane? Read it again? OK......Oops. Sorry about that... Â Sodboy13 said: As you watch more basketball, you will learn to appreciate the difference between "defense" and "couldn't find the rim with a pair of bloodhounds and a Garmin." meet the new page, not the same as the old page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OB33 Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 Simply Amazing, and not just because I love Corsairs. #CHOMPCHOMPCHOMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sideshowbob Posted August 20, 2005 Share Posted August 20, 2005 i really like the alternate jersey and the wordmark, i think you should change the color of the plane though New and Improved Adrenaline Online:http://adrenalinedesignstudio.synthasite.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StPatty33 Posted August 20, 2005 Share Posted August 20, 2005 Great work!The only thing that doesn't sit right is the straight blue/navy blue together in the logo. you should bump down the saturation in the straight blue and make the two shades more distinguishable, eh.Other than that, awesome job! The below to be updated once the newest banner is raised! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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