chestnutz Posted December 3, 2008 Author Share Posted December 3, 2008 Damnit about the spelling mistakes. I always confuse Milloy and Harrison. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted December 6, 2008 Author Share Posted December 6, 2008 Alright, I got struck by an idea to update my old Jets concept, so here we go again...Colors: I got a bit of negative comments last time for using too dark of colors. So a while ago I decided to try this incorporating a little darker green and a silver. I think it turned out nicely.Logos: I updated the primary logo, which I received praise for last time, with the new colors. I got rid of the J monogram and kept just a NY logo. I also added another alternate logo inspired by the old Jets wordmark Jet kinda thing, which I incorporated into the jerseys last go round. Added some silver accents into it.Uniforms: I used the alternate logo I made for this update a lot here. I kept the same type of sleeve stripe treatment as last time. The jet is always on a green background. Nothin' more to say here. People said the primary logo was too detailed to put on the helmet, so I opted for the jet stream kinda thing.I'll probably put this on the action templates once I finalize these. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueYankee26 Posted December 6, 2008 Share Posted December 6, 2008 FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! trueyankee26.wordpress.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brandon11 Posted December 6, 2008 Share Posted December 6, 2008 Alright, I got struck by an idea to update my old Jets concept, so here we go again...Colors: I got a bit of negative comments last time for using too dark of colors. So a while ago I decided to try this incorporating a little darker green and a silver. I think it turned out nicely.Logos: I updated the primary logo, which I received praise for last time, with the new colors. I got rid of the J monogram and kept just a NY logo. I also added another alternate logo inspired by the old Jets wordmark Jet kinda thing, which I incorporated into the jerseys last go round. Added some silver accents into it.Uniforms: I used the alternate logo I made for this update a lot here. I kept the same type of sleeve stripe treatment as last time. The jet is always on a green background. Nothin' more to say here. People said the primary logo was too detailed to put on the helmet, so I opted for the jet stream kinda thing.I'll probably put this on the action templates once I finalize these.I like the silver a lot better! this concept is great! brandonjbrown Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted December 6, 2008 Share Posted December 6, 2008 A huge upgrade! The silver really brings it together. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scottysprings Posted December 6, 2008 Share Posted December 6, 2008 Really nice, man! You're work has been looking great recently. The jets uniforms looks awesome, I love the helmets, simple and classy. It remind me of tempest's Jets concept from a while ago. I'm not sure I like the pants, the white version especially. I don't think it's a good image to have the jet nose diving straight down into the turf . Did you try white sleeves on the green jersey? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted December 6, 2008 Author Share Posted December 6, 2008 Thanks for the comments guys.I tried, but didn't like it, and decided for it to always be on a green background. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigmike Posted December 6, 2008 Share Posted December 6, 2008 Man I love this update, The silver looks great! Nice update. Can't wait to see your next set! Check out my new NFL 2016 Series! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stumpygremlin Posted December 7, 2008 Share Posted December 7, 2008 I love all the logos you came up with. However, my biggest beef is that none of them are actually used on the uniform. I'd maybe put the plane as a sleeve or hip logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tBBP Posted December 7, 2008 Share Posted December 7, 2008 I'm catching a real big "FSU meets Michigan State" vibe off this here......That being said, I don't not like it. I do like the idea of using the "jetstream" as detail, however.At the present moment, I really can't come up with any suggestions/critiques other than what's above. (Sorry bout that, cat.) I will say that this one > your previous attempt, however. And by a good margin. *Disclaimer: I am not an authoritative expert on stuff...I just do a lot of reading and research and keep in close connect with a bunch of people who are authoritative experts on stuff. || dribbble || Behance || Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted December 7, 2008 Share Posted December 7, 2008 Overall it's quite good. The only things that really bother me are the numerals. Try something that matches the overall look better. Right now they look kind of default. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rdsx246 Posted December 12, 2008 Share Posted December 12, 2008 Concept #9: Buffalo BillsThe choke artists are my hometown team, sort of. I'm not from Buffalo, but I have lived in Rochester (hour and a half drive) my entire life, and everyone here is a Bills fan, all the news are about the Bills, etc., so the Bills have some significance to me, even though I despise them (go Eagles)You guys guessed right in that I was dropping the navy and keeping royal blue. I think the royal blue and red just looks so damn good on the Bills, they pull it off so well in their throwbacks, no doubt it's one of the most beauitful throwbacks in the league. It's a shame you can't say the same about their regular s*** set.So I set out to change that...Logo: Their current logo isn't bad at all, but I didn't want to cop-out and not change anything about it. So I changed the buffalo on the primary logo to white with a blue outline. I doubt most of you will like it, but I feel it adds some freshness into the Bills' logo set. I also made a red alternate logo for use on the helmet, which I'll get to later. Honestly I couldn't think of anything solid enough to be an alternate logo. The wordmark is simple, italicized to go with the sash in the logo to convey motion, and a block number set.Uniforms: Obviously I was influenced by their great throwback uniforms. I didn't want to just copy the throwback uniforms though, that's been done several times on the boards here. I love their white helmet, so I went back to that, and to contrast the logo further I used the red alternate one instead of the primary white one. The striping on the helmet and pants is a simple 3-color pattern. For the jersey striping I went with the same color pattern, but instead of them being the traditional, straight stripes, I developed them to look like the motion-stripe in the logo, gradually going from small on the front of the jersey, to large on the back.I also made a red alternate jersey, which somewhat looks like the old Patriots uniforms, but I didn't see it as that big of a problem Action: And the sets in action, modeled by DE Aaron Schobel, QB Trent Edwards, and HB Marshawn Lynch.So, tell me what you think!These are a major improvement from the uniforms now. I really like how the design is more like the 90's uniforms than the new ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted January 14, 2009 Author Share Posted January 14, 2009 Just givin' this a little bump. My first team in a while will be the Titans, and will probably be up late tomorrow night or Thursday.Hint: Think Oilers. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phlash Posted January 14, 2009 Share Posted January 14, 2009 chestnutz,that jets concept is A+ very proffesional and creative, the logo is beautiful and the helmet stripes are orginal and work. I was hoping you'd sneak a red monochrome on the falcons update, but that jersey set was solid too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted January 15, 2009 Author Share Posted January 15, 2009 And for the revival, team numero 10, the Tennessee Titans. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted January 15, 2009 Share Posted January 15, 2009 Your logos and color scheme for the Titans are absolutely fantastic. The uniforms, I think, can still be a little bit better though. The main reason for this is because I don't think there is enough red. Maybe add a red outline to the shoulder yolk, or make the stars on the helmet red, or something. I would also like to see a blue jersey with a red shoulder yolk. Overall, however, I do like this better than what they have now, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YELDARBfield Posted January 15, 2009 Share Posted January 15, 2009 Flip the stars as they should be (in a 'V' pattern and not an 'A'), and you may have something here. Twitter • Facebook • Instagram • LinkedIn • Tumblr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Cunningham Posted January 15, 2009 Share Posted January 15, 2009 Flip the stars as they should be (in a 'V' pattern and not an 'A'), and you may have something here.Really, it's not even a V. It's like taking the V shape and then rotating it to the right (clockwise) about 15 degrees or so.That aside though, I really dig the helmet. It's a great look: throwback-ish, but not losing touch with modernity. I also like the colors simply because they harken back to the Oilers.The shoulder yolk looks a little weird, following the cut of the jersey like it does. Why not keep the yolk the way it is now and have it just go across the top of the shoulders and down the sleeves? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted January 15, 2009 Share Posted January 15, 2009 For the Titans, I like the colors (although I would lighten the blue a bit) and I really like the helmet logo. Sorry to say, but I hate that shoulder yoke. It looks unfinished and completely out of place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted January 15, 2009 Share Posted January 15, 2009 I like the colors, but they are the Oilers colors. I have to say, I don't really like the shoulder yoke either. It's a really strange-looking shape. I think it should be a different color once it's redesigned too, because when it's white players might confuse it with the away team's uniform. I think it would look good if it were navy. I like the helmets, too. Overall, I like the general direction but I think it needs more navy even if it's just a trim color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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