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That sleeve patch is fantastic!

Thanks man, I didn't know whether to go shirtless or have him in a uniform... So I defaulted to shirtless since the original was.

I would have left him shirtless as well, and the anchor tattoo is a very nice touch.

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Not a knock on your skills but the original wordmark has a better maritime feel to it just by the font choice and the swooshy underline in your version is a bit large so if you toned it down some it wouldn't draw as much attention. That's really all I have to say as this is already a solid look, especially the updated Merman.

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Everything's good but on the primary with the undelining swoosh covering part of the trident-M, the trident gets lost and isn't obvious anymore. You could just underline "ermen". But then I think the M and "ermen" would become more detached since the ermen has no light blue and is much thinner. I think some tweaking of letters to make the M and ermen seem more unified would help. But Im being a little nit-picky since the overall design is nice.

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the onmly problem here is the colour scheme. the colours aren't the ones used by the actual Mermen. the light blue is more paole and the navy is darker.

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Love the concept! That show is hilarious, although I haven't seen the current season yet.

I like the take on the shoulder patch. The original is a bit more aggressive, which I like in a sports logo, but your version seems to say: "yeah, we play baseball, but we'd rather be drinking." It seems more tailored to Kenny Powers. I think the batting logo works better for a real team.

The word mark and logo are a similar story. The current set uses a more angular logo and word mark (and includes a custom font), which is more aggressive, and more reminiscent of an actual trident. Yours with rounded points and the barbs on the "M" arching down instead of up conveys a team that's less about victory and maybe more about dictating their memoirs.

All that said, I can see your logos being used by an actual minor league/semi-pro team. They tend to try and balance aggressiveness with family-friendly visual packages, and I think yours does that.

I prefer the slightly more aggressive look of the original, but your work, choice of colors and execution is great! Let's see some uniforms!

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I like the work you did, especially the stand-alone 'M' trident.

Gotta say, though, whenever I hear the word 'Mermen', I think of the kid from Bad Santa.

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