DawgPacPBH Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 one question...if i want to move a point after i have completed the shape i can, but somtime the shape dissapears if i try. any help there?C and C Please peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDunn Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 The three things I immediately noticed is that the nose seems big. It juts out a ways and the thick silver highlighting makes it seem big, too. Second, the spires appear to be going straight up instead of pointing out more towards the viewer. It looks more like a punk kid you might see at the Warped Tour than the Statue of Liberty. It's a start, though. Finally, the neck is wierd. It just...ends. I dunno how to put words to what I'm thinking. The bottom doesn't look complete and arbitrarily just rounds off at the end. It doesn't look finished, I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 sorry, but all i see in that is a the outline of a large-nosed greek woman with an over-bite and elf ears....sorry, petey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted July 10, 2004 Author Share Posted July 10, 2004 sorry, but all i see in that is a the outline of a large-nosed greek woman with an over-bite and elf ears....sorry, petey haha coley, its all good. thats what C and C is for!!omgkthx!!! peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gordie Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 The top part looks nice, but overall I'm getting an 'Easter Island elf hits the souvenir shop at Ellis Island' feeling.You should keep working on this one. Spend some time refining the face, and it could be pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted July 10, 2004 Author Share Posted July 10, 2004 i have come to the conclusion i was high or something while making that. i cant see why i liked it at all. i like this version much more, gives more of a liberty like feel. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 now she looks like a fat old woman woman, with a chin like michael moore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 I would say now she looks like a man. No grace at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xnylived Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 i wouldn't say she looks like a man, but she sure does look pissed off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Waffles Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 The crown looks nice...the face needs more definition and less blobbiness.For reference, the closest thing I could find to a profile shot of Lady Liberty: Click Here (I don't feel like sapping someone's bandwith ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 Looks like Mr. Spock with a spike hairdoo. Seriously, your design, IMO, looks out of proportion and a bit 'curvey' -  Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021     St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL)  2023 Champions   Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted July 10, 2004 Author Share Posted July 10, 2004 now she looks like a fat old woman woman, with a chin like michael moore well. the statue is a woman, and it is old, and michael moore probably saw it once or twice. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 so we had an angry elf, now we have an angry fat lady.....haha just playin but, IMO, your headed in the right direction, your second is a little better, just keeping playing around with it and see what you can come up with. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 Yeah the second is better, but it still looks like a guy--maybe change or delete the spikes and use it for a diffeent team, making neceaary adjustments to suit that team... Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schlim Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 Boy its easy to pick apart a logo when you don't create one yourself. I think my personal thoughts are that the verticality and strength of the original staue is compromised by the swirling swoop of her neck. In the first one she seemed too unnatural, instead of just photoshopping her face and reducing it down to the basic elements and shape, a new creation was born that failed to mirror the original. Good effort, but it seems to fall short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted July 10, 2004 Author Share Posted July 10, 2004 Okay. This is Mr. Liberty. i dont want a "Lady" as a logo. GO MR LIBERTY!!!11!11one!!11.well, i think it is better than the other too. maybe a bit over done on the "shading"(arent quotes fun?) there is nothing wrong with a guy as the logo. cause he is cooler. almost as cool as me. but not. now im rambling. okay here peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clannhoran Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 I actually like the "pissed off" look. I could see this statue swatting boatloads of immigrants with his / her torch. Perhaps it's the androgeny that's making Liberty angry, the hormone pills are not working!Seriously, I think you're very close to a fantastic logo.Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Primal Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 That second one would make a kick-arse King Neptune with a bit of work... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suigi Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 I agree with clannhoran.Instead of "Give me your tired, your poor," she's holding a baseball bat going "YOU WANNA PIECE OF ME?!"Ah, Robin Williams.That said, both logos don't look so nice. Super Wario Comix!Iron Crossover IX Contender (Tied for 6th)Iron Crossover Halloween Contender (Tied for Bronze) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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