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Emphasizing my fav colour, POWDER BLUE!

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C&C welcome as always.

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You know I got mad respect for ya, so don't take this harshly.

My eyes are bleeding. lol

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after the jays, the twins are my team, so take this for what its worth: if used sparingly (like once every two months) these would be ok.

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I dunno 'bout these.

The striping on your concepts tends to be too... football-inspired, for lack of a better word. Too thick, too loud. Throws off the concept of a baseball jersey to me.

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no thanks. i like the idea of "thinking outside the box" but this just doesnt work for me. the colors dont "gell" well and the sleeve stripes leave me scratching my head. might want to rethink this one

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I dunno 'bout these.

The striping on your concepts tends to be too... football-inspired, for lack of a better word. Too thick, too loud. Throws off the concept of a baseball jersey to me.

it sho do look like a football jersey

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dem colors b 2 brite i kan burly c da key board lol :wacko:

Well that would explain a lot. :rolleyes:

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dem colors b 2 brite i kan burly c da key board  lol :wacko:

Well that would explain a lot. :rolleyes:

Yes, Mike. Please typre clear English next time please! :P

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Sorry dude but that's the fugliest thing I've ever seen.

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Make the stripes a bit smaller and make the "powder" blue more of a powder blue not a neon-powder blue(?) and it would look great!

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I hope you don't mind, brassbonanza. I made the stripes smaller and I made the Powder-blue more powdery looking and I made a few other changes, still keeping the same look.

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The wordmark needs less white as well... that's gonna wind up being a HUGE piece of embroidery, and a lot of white space on a dark colored jersey.

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A bit too contrasted colors. if you could tame the blue to be darker like the jerseys of yesteryear were, the red is darker as well as the navy.

id also have differences between the width of the stripes.

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Youch!!! Sorry man, but These would be a debacle if they ever saw the field of play

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