jgsmith725 Posted April 11, 2006 Share Posted April 11, 2006 What do ya think, What can I change on it, help me out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted April 11, 2006 Share Posted April 11, 2006 My biggest problem, and its not your fault, is that it doesnt have anything to do with Super Sonic! A plane, a bird, ear muffs, anything that says, fast and loud!!!!!Now your logo, I dont like how the green gets cut off halfway down the wordmark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted April 11, 2006 Share Posted April 11, 2006 first one is definately the best. nice job. although I agree with cyandlux about the lack of an actual supersonic, that's not nessacrily (sp?) your fault facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jgsmith725 Posted April 11, 2006 Author Share Posted April 11, 2006 its still a work in progress, spent some time on it and got tired of looking at it and just needed some c&c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jgsmith725 Posted April 11, 2006 Author Share Posted April 11, 2006 UPDATED! Still working on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Green Meanie Posted April 11, 2006 Share Posted April 11, 2006 I'd like it more if there wasn't any red in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redskins24 Posted April 11, 2006 Share Posted April 11, 2006 I think it looks great. I agree, don't put any red in the logo, and maybe bring the "sonics" down to the botton again- just without the green cutting into it. Finally, if you raised, or lowered the space needle so that we can see the entire shape of the top it would be perfect. Nice Work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shumway Posted April 11, 2006 Share Posted April 11, 2006 Your update is better, but I think the "Sonics" would look better below the rest of the logo, where you had it before, unarched. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Discrim Posted April 11, 2006 Share Posted April 11, 2006 a different wordmark wouldn't hurt, but I like the logo...and keep the red, it makes the gold pop that much more A strong mind gets high off success, a weak mind gets high off bull Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwoRsAndTwoLs Posted April 12, 2006 Share Posted April 12, 2006 I like the first draft. My advice would be to extend that green down further so that "Sonics" fits on it, and it looks something like the key on the court.And I don't mind the red at all.And I really like the current Seattle skyline showing up in there. Solid. Every Fifth Day is a Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted April 12, 2006 Share Posted April 12, 2006 I prefer the first draft as well.The only major issue I noticed in the first one is what a lot of people seemed to - the straight horizontal border of the basketball/skyline beneath a pronounced arch in the wordmark. I like the arch, but I would try and harmonize the straight edge with the wordmark so it looks more compatible. If you'd rather keep the wordmark on top of the ball, I wouldn't have "SEATTLE" offset within the skyline; it would look fine beneath the logo.That aside, this is extremely well done. The colors work, and I get the allusion to the Sikma Years. "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jgsmith725 Posted April 12, 2006 Author Share Posted April 12, 2006 I used new typface, i thought was sutible, kept the red accent, b/c i did like the red, gold and green they used in the mid 90's to the early 2000's. I lowered the skyline a little more so that the needle is viewable and put the wordmark below the logo. I plan to do some uniforms and secondary wordmarks and logos soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sc49erfan15 Posted April 12, 2006 Share Posted April 12, 2006 I say go back to your first draft, extend the green line so that it encloses "Sonics," and put "Seattle" either arched above "Sonics" in the same curve. Then, make the bottom green line that you extended in the same curve, or have it flat with "Seattle" under the curve in "Sonics." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted April 12, 2006 Share Posted April 12, 2006 Mr. Smith - very nice work!!! I like it a lot. Clean looking and I like the color scheme. Good job.  Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021     St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL)  2023 Champions   Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leopard88 Posted April 12, 2006 Share Posted April 12, 2006 Version No. 3 looks great to me. Most Liked Content of the Day -- February 15, 2017, August 21, 2017, August 22, 2017   /////    Proud Winner of the CCSLC Post of the Day Award -- April 8, 2008 Originator of the Upside Down Sarcasm Smilie -- November 1, 2005  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jgsmith725 Posted April 12, 2006 Author Share Posted April 12, 2006 This is a rough secondary logo for like the shorts and side logo onthe court. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leopard88 Posted April 12, 2006 Share Posted April 12, 2006 I like the secondary, but I think it might look better with the S from version Nos. 1 and 2 of the logo (without the slight angle for the arch). Most Liked Content of the Day -- February 15, 2017, August 21, 2017, August 22, 2017   /////    Proud Winner of the CCSLC Post of the Day Award -- April 8, 2008 Originator of the Upside Down Sarcasm Smilie -- November 1, 2005  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hat Boy Posted April 13, 2006 Share Posted April 13, 2006 I like the fact that you worked the word "super" in there. The primary logo should be formal like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tj4eck Posted April 13, 2006 Share Posted April 13, 2006 wow!!! ever logo you have done is just wow!!im speechless in a great waygreat job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted April 13, 2006 Share Posted April 13, 2006 UPDATED! Still working on it dude those colors work perfect i love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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