killa Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 I 'v imagine a baseball team name Dead Clown and i creat for it this logos hope u like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 Looks great, I like it.One thing; What's up with the end of the bat? | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 Disturbing, but very well done, excellent work! I think the teeth need some work, they're not menacing enough.LEWJ, I think the knobs of the bats are supposed to be like the end of bones (right killa?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killa Posted February 20, 2007 Author Share Posted February 20, 2007 thanks guysyes right "Delayed_Penalty" its like the end of the bonesin the first time i make it with a normal batdo u prefer it like this or with the bones Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Discrim Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 heh, I think I prefer the bony bats myself. I'm very impressed with this here. since this is the first time we've "met," welcome aboard A strong mind gets high off success, a weak mind gets high off bull Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killa Posted February 20, 2007 Author Share Posted February 20, 2007 heh, I think I prefer the bony bats myself. I'm very impressed with this here. since this is the first time we've "met," welcome aboard 10x "Discrimihater" me too i prefer the bony bats cause he look more apropriete with the idea and the head Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueSky Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 Agree that the teeth need work. Also not sure the skull "stitches" work, they look like tire tracks. That's all the "criticism" I'm ready to offer a guy who makes designs like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killa Posted February 20, 2007 Author Share Posted February 20, 2007 Agree that the teeth need work. Also not sure the skull "stitches" work, they look like tire tracks. That's all the "criticism" I'm ready to offer a guy who makes designs like this. i replace thats what u call "tire tracks" with a new stitches, now he look more realno !? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 Great work so far. You definitely improved the stitches. With a few more modifications (which the people here can help you with), this can be a great logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueSky Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 Should the hair be red, blue, or green? The gold looks good colorwise but it resembles a lion's mane. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killa Posted February 20, 2007 Author Share Posted February 20, 2007 Now he look better with red stitches, 10x "skyaa1" for ur advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 I think that some blue/green/rainbow hair is needed. Right now it's not entirely clear that it's a clown. It just kinda looks like a skull with some straw sticking out of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koizim Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 Dude......that's :censored:in' disturbing......Now I can never go to another circus......... Engine, Engine, Number Nine, on the New York transit line, If my train goes off the track, pick it up! Pick it up! Pick it up! Back on the scene, crispy and clean, You can try, but then why, 'cause you can't intervene. We be the outcast, down for the settle. Won't play the rock, won't play the pebble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
averyj Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 Try some navy hair. You know, I rarely visit ccslsc anymore. I really should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BostonBlazer Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 I love this! This is an awesome concept! Kudos! http://www.reverbnation.com/richardyerardihttp://www.ahlfans.net Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cooleyvol Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 Shouldn't the lower set of stitches on the far left side be curving away from the upper set of stitches? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted February 21, 2007 Share Posted February 21, 2007 thanks guysyes right "Delayed_Penalty" its like the end of the bonesin the first time i make it with a normal batdo u prefer it like this or with the bones Now that I know that it doesn't look that bad. Good job. | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltravisjr Posted February 21, 2007 Share Posted February 21, 2007 I like this, and great job on the new stitches! Have you tried red hair to let it stand out in front of the bats and also balance off the nose?LT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted February 21, 2007 Share Posted February 21, 2007 Now he look better with red stitches, 10x "skyaa1" for ur advice That's awesome. It passed the "freaks out wifey" test with flying colors. My only concern is that you have too many colors (I counted 8) for a good logo. It's bordering on 'illustration'. Challenge yourself to cut back on the number of colors, perhaps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avsman Posted February 21, 2007 Share Posted February 21, 2007 Looks great, I like it.One thing; What's up with the end of the bat? My question is what's up with his teeth? He looks like a dinosaur skeleton. Maybe see if you can clean those up a bit. Other than that, it's prettty nice. Have you ever looked at sports logos...ON WEED? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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