chickenfish13 Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 Hey Guys. This is my latest concept, for the Philadelphia Flyers. I find their current look boring. Enjoy. Jerseys may come soon. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 Huge downgrade IMO. You said their old look was "boring", but you've made it worse. The Flyers have a nice and classy logo, this isn't working at all. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVP Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 You need to clean this up. Some of the lines aren't even touching at the corners, and the outlines just look sloppy. The hockey stick looks really forced, and completely out of place. The skate looks more like having ribs stuck behind it for some reason. For a flying skate, the Canucks have already been there and done that.And for future presentation, use a contrasting colour for the background, using black in the background for a concept full of black makes the presentation very dull. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJ Sands Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 Your As and Rs look almost identical. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 I second everything that has been said so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 I second everything that has been said so far.Me to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan1 Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 I second everything that has been said so far.Me to.+1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 Sorry. I don't like this. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendan Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 It's not that the logos are bad it just that the Flyers logo is pretty iconic. With that said the logos do need a little work mainly the skate logo. The wings on the skate look more like bones than wings, look at the wings in Detroit's logo for a reference. And as mention they're needs to be more of a difference between the A's and R's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siegel0572 Posted March 16, 2009 Share Posted March 16, 2009 This does not work for me at all. The stick in the top of the bell does'nt look right, and what are supposed to be wings on the skate do not resemble wings at all. And like some of the others have said, your A's and R's look alike. I would go back to the beginning and try again since this is a downgrade from their current look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted March 17, 2009 Author Share Posted March 17, 2009 Heres a quick update: dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MDC Posted March 17, 2009 Share Posted March 17, 2009 That update fixed a lot. the primary looks a lot better, and is shaping into a pretty nice logo, although i dont like how you still forced in the hockey sticks. If they can only be in there like that, then they shouldnt be in there.There is still something about the alternate that irks me. Now that the ribs are removed, and there is an actual wing helps a lot, but the actual skate doesnt seem to work. See vancouver canucks. i would try to maybe use a puck, or just use some sort of logo with the letters P and F ---Owner of the NHA's Philadelphia Quakers, the UBA's Chicago Skyliners, and the CFA's Portland Beavers (2010 CFA2 Champions)--- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted March 17, 2009 Author Share Posted March 17, 2009 Update #2. Which Secondary is better? dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted March 17, 2009 Share Posted March 17, 2009 ^ PF Flyers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blitz Posted March 17, 2009 Share Posted March 17, 2009 Update #2. Which Secondary is better?I think B has the most potential, but the wing definately needs to look meaner, sharper. Try to make it less bird-like, more archangel(superhero) like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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