patsox Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Original Home Concept:Revised Home ConceptRevised Home Concept:Revised Away Concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigga Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Oh boy. Here we go. I've got my popcorn ready! Let the bashing begin.Brian, you may want to revisit this one...seriously. You've been through this more than enough times to know better than to post something like this, I'm pretty disappointed. On January 16, 2013 at 3:49 PM, NJTank said: Btw this is old hat for Notre Dame. Knits Rockne made up George Tip's death bed speech. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 So you changed the number font and called it a concept? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Oh boy. Here we go. I've got my popcorn ready! Let the bashing begin.Brian, you may want to revisit this one...seriously. You've been through this more than enough times to know better than to post something like this, I'm pretty disappointed.Haha what he ^ said. This should be fun to watch. Another patsox thread that will end up in the graveyard. Maybe we will have another spammy vs. tc/mr. beastly Anyway, what is the point of this concept? https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Over/under is set at 30 posts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Over/under is set at 30 postsDefinitely over for this classic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 IBTL?Seriously patsox? You had to have known this was going to get ripped to shreds when you posted this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bowld Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 is this a joke? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Audiodrama Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Guys...just ignore it and it will go away... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saintsfan Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Ok first off, many people on here don't like the BLUE Jays not being blue. So why post such an unblue concept? Secondly its lazy. (For instance the Maple Leaf flag doesn't carry on to the backview of the sleeve) Personally I could take a low grade paint concept if there was something imaginative about it, but this is just a white uni with existing logos on the front and the cap, and maybe new numbers. Either you want abuse to be thrown at you, which isn't unheard of on the internet after all, or you pretty stoopid posting a concept like this. 2011/12 WFL Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 He just wants attention. Ignore it. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted May 18, 2009 Author Share Posted May 18, 2009 I happen to like the Blue Jays' color scheme and logo. The only thing I don't like is the sleeve patch and the numbers. I changed the sleeve patch to a patch of the entire flag instead of the maple leaf and I changed the numbers so that they would match the logo better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Alright, well first off, it's very pixelated. You really have to work on that. Making clean concepts isn't that hard, especially in MS Paint. The random black spotches should be cleaned up before posting anything. Like saintsfan said, the maple leaf flag doesn't carry over onto the back side of the uniform. The outlines of everything - the jerseys, hats, pants - are also very pixelated as well. Perhaps you can find a cleaner template. I'm sure we have plenty on the boards you can find. Also, the outline of the numbers on the back are very pixelated, as well. Pixelation is your biggest issue right now, as well as the random colour splotches.Work on adding a little creativity, too. Sticking with what they have is great for full league redesigns, if you're happy with their current jerseys, but not for a concept. If you just work a little harder, then I'm sure you can make something better. On 4/10/2017 at 3:05 PM, Rollins Man said: what the hell is ccslc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Here is another option for a template. I really like it and I think its a lot cleaner than the one you're using. Thank Roger Clemente.EDIT: Its fuzzy for some reason? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 My favorite part is the Tan outline of the pants...no, no, the number beveling.Seriously though, too much Black, not enough creativity, the numbers do not look the same as the wordmark, and the flag needs to be on the back of the arm too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swilson160 Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heernumurr Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Is over 5000 posts too many to think you're somebody's hilarious dupe account? This is awful. Unimaginative, unfinished, poorly thought out and poorly executed. At first I wanted to give you the benefit of the doubt, but you never take any comments on board yet continually post these concepts. It takes away from those who have spent time and thought on their concepts, and when someone's been around as long as you have, you must know this. Therefore we must assume that you dont care and just want to piss people off. You should put IBTL in your signature, because the graveyard is where all your concepts should go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamikel Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Dude, this is weak, even by your standards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted May 18, 2009 Author Share Posted May 18, 2009 Here is a revision:In this iteration I have emphasized blue over black. In addition, I replaced the straightened wordmark I had used in the previous concept with the same logo that is on the cap. I used the same font for the number, but rethought the beveling I had used in the last concept and went with a flat, solid color instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Shhh...nobody say anything, maybe it will go away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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