Perfect Zero Posted January 5, 2010 Share Posted January 5, 2010 From a marketing standpoint, I don't know how you would show this to kids without making them fudge themselves. A chill ran down MY spine when I saw it. The NFL would possibly want you to tone it down a bit.From my standpoint, this is sheer AWESOMENESS, and to hell with the NFL. If I had to pick at one thing, it would be that the outline of the shield is too much, but I love it the way it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JDY1111 Posted January 5, 2010 Share Posted January 5, 2010 From a marketing standpoint, I don't know how you would show this to kids without making them fudge themselves. A chill ran down MY spine when I saw it. The NFL would possibly want you to tone it down a bit.From my standpoint, this is sheer AWESOMENESS, and to hell with the NFL. If I had to pick at one thing, it would be that the outline of the shield is too much, but I love it the way it is. In a word, it's excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted January 5, 2010 Share Posted January 5, 2010 davidson this time you have inspired me. i have been working on raider uniforms and planning on a logo upgrade. so i decided to start on the logo today. heres my sketch GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dmhtfld Posted January 5, 2010 Share Posted January 5, 2010 davidson this time you have inspired me. i have been working on raider uniforms and planning on a logo upgrade. so i decided to start on the logo today. heres my sketchi like it but why does the skull have an eyeball? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MEANS Posted January 5, 2010 Share Posted January 5, 2010 very nice job on an excellent logo update. I have one suggestion though, make it much more simplified, much more iconic, less illustrative. I think from a distance it needs to stand up and be easily recognizable. Less beveling / highlights, add an eye-patch and as others have said re-work the helmet.Great work!I agree with this in full. It's a great illustration, and works great for a Raiders Crazy Fan section logo. I saw a badass tattoo upon first glance. I like it, but it didn't say NFL logo to me. With a few changes I think you could have that. Good work as always Fraser.if you look at the image of the logo posted on the mesh background it starts looking more simplified and iconic already. You don't notice the silver in the logo as much. https://www.andrewsterlachini.com/ or http://dribbble.com/MEANS1974 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted January 5, 2010 Share Posted January 5, 2010 very nice job on an excellent logo update. I have one suggestion though, make it much more simplified, much more iconic, less illustrative. I think from a distance it needs to stand up and be easily recognizable. Less beveling / highlights, add an eye-patch and as others have said re-work the helmet.Great work!I agree with this in full. It's a great illustration, and works great for a Raiders Crazy Fan section logo. I saw a badass tattoo upon first glance. I like it, but it didn't say NFL logo to me. With a few changes I think you could have that. Good work as always Fraser.if you look at the image of the logo posted on the mesh background it starts looking more simplified and iconic already. You don't notice the silver in the logo as much.i agree, it looks best on the jersey concept because those highlights go away. there seems to be a better balance of color as wellheres what i have so far. still some work to do with strokes, but everything is in place now GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 6, 2010 Share Posted January 6, 2010 That looks sick BrandN.Davidson, i suggest you send that to the Raiders as soon as possible . That's A+ work by an A+ designer, folks. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Admiral Posted January 6, 2010 Share Posted January 6, 2010 The charm of the Raider Nation is that they don't have to have a scary logo to be scary. ♫ oh yeah, board goes on, long after the thrill of postin' is gone ♫ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted January 6, 2010 Share Posted January 6, 2010 davidson this time you have inspired me. i have been working on raider uniforms and planning on a logo upgrade. so i decided to start on the logo today. heres my sketchi like it but why does the skull have an eyeball?If having an eyeball is a problem, then why not go further and question the need for an eye patch? "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dmhtfld Posted January 6, 2010 Share Posted January 6, 2010 davidson this time you have inspired me. i have been working on raider uniforms and planning on a logo upgrade. so i decided to start on the logo today. heres my sketchi like it but why does the skull have an eyeball?If having an eyeball is a problem, then why not go further and question the need for an eye patch?well the eyepatch could've been there when the person died but the eyeball would eventually disintegrate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TopCat Posted January 6, 2010 Share Posted January 6, 2010 Wow! Awesome, awesome job. My only nitpick is that it's probably too detailed and good for the NFL, if that makes sense. I feel that there are a lot of shapes clustered up near the mouth, maaaybe simplify it a little bit. Still incredible, man! facebook | @thebugcollector Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted January 6, 2010 Share Posted January 6, 2010 Awesome work. I always enjoy seeing your stuff. That said, I agree with others about maybe simplifying the mark and tweaking the helmet, but the one thing that truly bothers me is the wordmark. Your logo is so much more badass than the simplicity of Futura. I think a typeface with more badassery is in order. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted January 6, 2010 Share Posted January 6, 2010 I'm just picturing how awesome that helmet would look if it were black. The thing with the eyepatch is:1. It doesn't make sense to have an eyepatch when the skull has no eyes.2. Adding an eyepatch would seem to clutter the face. It would also look too similar to the current eyesockets which are all black too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckymack Posted January 6, 2010 Share Posted January 6, 2010 My only gripe is with the helmet, as others have stated. I thought it was a hardhat. Other than that, it's extremely well-done. Sigs are for sissies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TornadoGTS Posted January 6, 2010 Share Posted January 6, 2010 From a marketing standpoint, I don't know how you would show this to kids without making them fudge themselves. A chill ran down MY spine when I saw it. The NFL would possibly want you to tone it down a bit.Yeah but look at the Bucs' skull, maybe not as menacing as this one, but I dont see kids fudging over the Bucs one lol. I love this one as is, but it would probably have to be toned down for NFL standards, which then might get compared to the Bucs one, then they wouldnt be feeling too good about it. Facebook: CustomSportsCovers Twitter: CSCovers Quote No because when the Irish came to Ireland and first came in contact with the leprechaun people, they didn't take their land away and force them to move west. Instead, the two groups learned to assimilate peacefully. However, certain tribes of the leprechaun refused to taint the pure blood and moved north into the forests of Ireland, only to be seen rarely, usually at the same time of a rainbows appearance and occasionally at the factories of Lucky Charms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thunderfan23 Posted January 6, 2010 Share Posted January 6, 2010 Even as a Chiefs fan I gotta admit that's a pretty sweet design. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enotsdesign Posted January 6, 2010 Share Posted January 6, 2010 first off, thanks for sharing your work with us. truly awesome to look at. i like how you got the eyes perspective to peer down and up at the viewer. second, will or have you posted a mesh mock up template/tutorial? facebook | behance | deviant art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted January 6, 2010 Author Share Posted January 6, 2010 first off, thanks for sharing your work with us. truly awesome to look at. i like how you got the eyes perspective to peer down and up at the viewer. second, will or have you posted a mesh mock up template/tutorial?its made in after effects and not photoshop so a tutorial wouldnt be much use to anybody really. you could def achieve something similar in photoshop, but its harder to get proper depth of field, displacement map and light effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted January 6, 2010 Author Share Posted January 6, 2010 if you were to do something similar tho, this is how i did it:from left to right:- take your texture- multiply on your logo- add dirt textures- add wave texture- apply displacement map to wave texture- apply camera and angle lense- apply lights- grade and add depth of field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted January 6, 2010 Share Posted January 6, 2010 this is one of my favorite things ive seen on here in a while. i personally liked how the helmet was different than a real football helmet and comes out near the skull. i know other said they didnt like that part. it makes it seem like it's some kind of mideival football helmet or somekind of evil football helmet like a raider fan would wear himself. and keeping the font the same works for me since it is the raiders font and theres nothing wrong with it. i guess i have no suggestions for improvement since i am a huge fan of this. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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