Spammy Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 Ok, not much to explain here except I made a sketch for a fictional team, and then logotized it. (if that's a word...) Here is the sketch: And here is the logo. I will add the shoulder patch, and other stuff and then make a logo package.C+C Always appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dfwabel Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 When I think of SD, I think of surf over palm trees.The Panthers already have a Palm on their secondary. It is good that you did not have a four branch tree like The Palm Restaurant or the Panthers. However, it is eight branches which is the same number of the LA Sparks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spammy Posted September 23, 2010 Author Share Posted September 23, 2010 Don't the Sparks have 10 branches? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 I love this, nice job Spammy. My only suggestions would to get rid of the shading in the palm tree and even out the hockey sticks (that may just be my eyes). Oh yeah, the LA Sparks secondary has 8 branches, and the primary has 10. Anyways, I really, really like this. Great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 That's nice spammy. BTW yeah, you can use this for the CHLA. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Audiodrama Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 I like this quite a bit. It seems more fitting for an alternate logo as it seems like it's lacking a few key elements to be a primary, namely the name of the team itself. Perhaps put "PALMS" where the "SAN DIEGO" text currently is, and drop the "SAN DIEGO" below it, in a smaller size? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 I like this quite a bit. It seems more fitting for an alternate logo as it seems like it's lacking a few key elements to be a primary, namely the name of the team itself. Perhaps put "PALMS" where the "SAN DIEGO" text currently is, and drop the "SAN DIEGO" below it, in a smaller size?Yeah I would agree with this. I mean it's a fantastic secondary and a good primary IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 I'm fairly impressed, Spam.Couple things:-Keep your outlines consistant, particularly the ties on the hockey stick.-About those outlines, try to create them manually as opposed to simply adding a stroke to the shape. I see this in the palm tree especially, everything else is fine.-The whole scene doesn't really 'capture the moment'. Try working off this reference, maybe add a third color for some highlighting.Good work so far, looking forward to an update. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goforbroke Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 It would be a ice subtle touch to have 6 branches on the tree to represent the 6 players on ice at a time. Unless the number 8 is supposed to represent something too?Also, judging by the length of the hockey sticks from handle to blade, the blades seem very short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePreacher Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 This is a great logo! I can totally see the Panthers re-locating from Sunrise (Miami) to San Diego... The question is: Could Southern CA really support three teams? If NY can, I don't see why not.. I mean, the Ducks and Kings put more bodies in the seats than the Rangers and the Isles do (low blow, I'm sorry.) I always envisioned a San Diego hockey team being named after the AHL Gulls, as it is both a common sea bird in the area, and "Gull" is a pun (as it sounds like "Goals.") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 I would make the main part of the banner to beige(sand) and change the outline of the banner to blue, so it looks like it connects to the palm tree and outer circle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spammy Posted September 24, 2010 Author Share Posted September 24, 2010 Better? Worse? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 I'd make the hockey sticks more like hockey sticks, and the tree more like a palm tree. Also a different font. Then, delete the last outline. @MichaelDanger19Â | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
north dakota Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 I like it. Woah! You think I'm Cody? My name is Carl Scott Simone and we just happen to share a birthday. BIG DEAL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayLo1112 Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 I would try to make "palms" take up that whole sash in the middle, and san diego over the top maybe? because it looks cramped now and much too small to read as a patch or whatever itd be used for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 I'm liking it so far, but I don't like the font. It's too techno and not tropical enough. Maybe go with a "Palms" script and San Diego arched above the circle? POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyclone20 Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 Nice job so far its really coming along Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spammy Posted September 24, 2010 Author Share Posted September 24, 2010 Here is an Idea for the Secondary logo, I am presenting it with the primary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SenatorJake Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 Very well executed logo, so kudos on that. This name would without a doubt lead to many people calling this team the San Diego Facepalms if ever they had a mediocre season. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted September 24, 2010 Share Posted September 24, 2010 Very well executed logo, so kudos on that. This name would without a doubt lead to many people calling this team the San Diego Facepalms if ever they had a mediocre season.I'll let you know if they do! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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