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Team USA Hockey Concept


texfischer

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I've got some things to say:

  • Quit with the comic sans, gray, bigger, and centered text. No one likes any of that (especially comic sans).
  • Change your avatar. It's creepy.
  • As for the concept it's pretty good. Nice job.

I've got some things to say:

  • It's not Comic Sans.
  • He's not asking for feedback on his avatar. Give him feedback on his concept.

I like the concept, but the star striping may be a bit too much, maybe try toning that pattern down a bit, but overall, it looks pretty good.

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I've got some things to say:

  • Quit with the comic sans, gray, bigger, and centered text. No one likes any of that (especially comic sans).
  • Change your avatar. It's creepy.
  • As for the concept it's pretty good. Nice job.

I've got some things to say:

  • It's not Comic Sans.
  • He's not asking for feedback on his avatar. Give him feedback on his concept.

Trebuchet MS is a humanist sans-serif typeface

Close enough.

Anyways, sorry for interfering with the concept. At least it's pretty good. ^_^

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Trebuchet MS is a humanist sans-serif typeface

Close enough.

That's like saying Helvetica and Wingdings are the same because they're both fonts.

Tex: It's a decent start. I think the back numbers are too far apart, and I don't like the Red Sox font for the "USA" lettering.

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why did anythingchicagos post just magically disappear? Where was this post elimination on Robbmans alternate universe that we needed so much....

Anyways as for the concept I like it! I wasn't overly crazy about the Tuscan front font but its grown on me. Only thing is the numbers on the sleeve are a tad too small.

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Really don't think that Tuscan is the right font for the letters here. Something a little more contemporary might work better with the modern cut and look of the jersey.

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The darker parts represent a different material and it's mesh. Notice it's in the area's that need to breathe more.

As far as my take: as stated before, cut down on the number of stars, the rear numbers are too spread out, and I'm not a big fan of the font on the chest.

What I would suggest is stick with the USA Hockey logo, use the letters used at the Olympics (because that jersey was beautiful), or switch the eagle logo to the chest. Also, the section where you have the shoulder logo is where the numbers go, move the logo up or eliminate it and move their numbers to their designed location.

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