texfischer Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 I wanted to try some stars on the stripes, and use the gem of an eagle logo as a shoulder patch. Let me know what you think, C&C please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 mod deleted irrelevant commentsAs for the concept it's pretty good. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skier14 Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 I've got some things to say:Quit with the comic sans, gray, bigger, and centered text. No one likes any of that (especially comic sans).Change your avatar. It's creepy.As for the concept it's pretty good. Nice job.I've got some things to say:It's not Comic Sans.He's not asking for feedback on his avatar. Give him feedback on his concept.I like the concept, but the star striping may be a bit too much, maybe try toning that pattern down a bit, but overall, it looks pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnythingChicago Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 I've got some things to say:Quit with the comic sans, gray, bigger, and centered text. No one likes any of that (especially comic sans).Change your avatar. It's creepy.As for the concept it's pretty good. Nice job.I've got some things to say:It's not Comic Sans.He's not asking for feedback on his avatar. Give him feedback on his concept.Trebuchet MS is a humanist sans-serif typefaceClose enough.Anyways, sorry for interfering with the concept. At least it's pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xodius Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 The USA font bothers me, with the font on the back being block and all. Plus it doesn't go with the stars and stripes theme. Find a better wordmark and you have a winner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 Trebuchet MS is a humanist sans-serif typefaceClose enough.That's like saying Helvetica and Wingdings are the same because they're both fonts.Tex: It's a decent start. I think the back numbers are too far apart, and I don't like the Red Sox font for the "USA" lettering. POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ink Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 why did anythingchicagos post just magically disappear? Where was this post elimination on Robbmans alternate universe that we needed so much....Anyways as for the concept I like it! I wasn't overly crazy about the Tuscan front font but its grown on me. Only thing is the numbers on the sleeve are a tad too small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nash61 Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 I would make the eagle logo the primary. On September 20, 2012 at 0:50 AM, 'CS85 said: It's like watching the hellish undead creakily shuffling their way out of the flames of a liposuction clinic dumpster fire. On February 19, 2012 at 9:30 AM, 'pianoknight said: Story B: Red Wings go undefeated and score 100 goals in every game. They also beat a team comprised of Godzilla, the ghost of Abraham Lincoln, 2 Power Rangers and Betty White. Oh, and they played in the middle of Iraq on a military base. In the sand. With no ice. Santa gave them special sand-skates that allowed them to play in shorts and t-shirts in 115 degree weather. Jesus, Zeus and Buddha watched from the sidelines and ate cotton candy. POTD 5/24/12, POTD 2/26/17  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 Really don't think that Tuscan is the right font for the letters here. Something a little more contemporary might work better with the modern cut and look of the jersey. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
north dakota Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 The numbers are very spread apart, other than that the concept is great. Woah! You think I'm Cody? My name is Carl Scott Simone and we just happen to share a birthday. BIG DEAL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tvko Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 Is it darker in some areas or is that just me?The shoulder numbers seem misplaced. That's basically all I see wrong. Bravo You know what they say, "Traditionalist's can go die in a hole if they don't like it." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geoff Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 The darker parts represent a different material and it's mesh. Notice it's in the area's that need to breathe more.As far as my take: as stated before, cut down on the number of stars, the rear numbers are too spread out, and I'm not a big fan of the font on the chest.What I would suggest is stick with the USA Hockey logo, use the letters used at the Olympics (because that jersey was beautiful), or switch the eagle logo to the chest. Also, the section where you have the shoulder logo is where the numbers go, move the logo up or eliminate it and move their numbers to their designed location. Athletic Director: KTU Blue Grassers Football Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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