missouri tigers Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 I think we need more of these types of concepts.Any Comments or Criticism would be greatly appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nash61 Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 The colours are good, but it doesn't scream "FALL CLASSIC" like MLB likes to do with the WS logos. On September 20, 2012 at 0:50 AM, 'CS85 said: It's like watching the hellish undead creakily shuffling their way out of the flames of a liposuction clinic dumpster fire. On February 19, 2012 at 9:30 AM, 'pianoknight said: Story B: Red Wings go undefeated and score 100 goals in every game. They also beat a team comprised of Godzilla, the ghost of Abraham Lincoln, 2 Power Rangers and Betty White. Oh, and they played in the middle of Iraq on a military base. In the sand. With no ice. Santa gave them special sand-skates that allowed them to play in shorts and t-shirts in 115 degree weather. Jesus, Zeus and Buddha watched from the sidelines and ate cotton candy. POTD 5/24/12, POTD 2/26/17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted October 29, 2011 Author Share Posted October 29, 2011 The colours are good, but it doesn't scream "FALL CLASSIC" like MLB likes to do with the WS logos.That's actually the point. I wanted to bridge the gap from the early 2000's WS logos to the more recent Fall Classic styled logos. I tried to get away from that because I'm not a fan of the past 4 or so logos. The addition of the whole fall classic thing and the mostly autumn based colors always seemed a little cheesy to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moseph Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 thats pretty cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kphealey Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 I might be holding my laptop crooked, but something feels off-balance here.I also think that you need something at the top. It looks too much like a jeweler's diamond and less like a baseball diamond. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 I might be holding my laptop crooked, but something feels off-balance here.I also think that you need something at the top. It looks too much like a jeweler's diamond and less like a baseball diamond.I think what's causing this illusion is the fact that the last S in "SERIES" comes over further than the first S. I don't really know what you could do to address this; perhaps just moving the word "SERIES" to the left a little? But that might make it look off-balanced as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedSox44 Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 I don't know why, but the font gives me a vaguely 50s sci-fi feel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
altosax29b Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 I think you need second base. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
54Chevy Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 kerning needs work in both world and series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted October 30, 2011 Share Posted October 30, 2011 I think it needs a consistent font and it's really missing something else. Good start point though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hailstateunis Posted October 30, 2011 Share Posted October 30, 2011 I might be holding my laptop crooked, but something feels off-balance here.I also think that you need something at the top. It looks too much like a jeweler's diamond and less like a baseball diamond.I think the rotated baseball causes the off-balance. http://www.hailstateunis.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted October 30, 2011 Share Posted October 30, 2011 The first s is closer to the base path on the right. Some of that's from the open part of the s. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scarsofthumper Posted October 31, 2011 Share Posted October 31, 2011 I think you need second base.We could all use a little second base. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted October 31, 2011 Share Posted October 31, 2011 solid concept. check your kerning and remove the shading from "series" or use a much lighter color. i would also remove the shading from the ball, and im not sure the ball even needs to be there. the yellow part is a bit too close to the MLB logo too, open up that space to relieve some visual tension. i would also suggest exploring something to place at the top where 2nd base would be GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don_Kay Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 The field is definately crooked.The WORLD should be in the same style as SERIES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MEANS Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 the fonts used really don't go well together, I would keep Series and choose or come up with a better font for "World" https://www.andrewsterlachini.com/ or http://dribbble.com/MEANS1974 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scraw28 Posted January 7, 2012 Share Posted January 7, 2012 I agree everthing is fine but you need the word world the same font style as the series Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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