Raysfan12 Posted April 13, 2012 Share Posted April 13, 2012 The most unique Rays concept ever. Great use of the color pink especially the alt and to challege that sterotype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedSox44 Posted April 13, 2012 Share Posted April 13, 2012 This is gorgeous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sapphire Posted April 13, 2012 Share Posted April 13, 2012 Yes. Those are near perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MDGP Posted April 13, 2012 Share Posted April 13, 2012 Both versions are surprisingly awesome. I really can't decide which one I like better. Either way, I think the Rays would look much more unique if they went with your concept. Excellent Job! I've got a dribbble, check it out if you like my stuff; alternatively, if you hate my stuff, send it to your enemies to punish their insolence! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 This looks really good. Two things I noticed though. 1. The degree of slant on the scripts is a little too large. Right now it looks like a 45 degree angle. Bring the slant down (just a little) and I think it will help a lot. 2. the front fin and the back fin of the ray look very different in the way they bend. I'm no ray expert or anything, but I think the fins should resemble a similar bend. Otherwise, this is a great concept, love the color scheme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
See Red Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 I don't like the font you used. I see the "R" in Rays and all I can think about is the St. Louis Rams word mark, even though it's a different font. I love the colors, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 Wowwwwww, I can't believe I missed this! This is amazing. I've never thought that pink would be able to work on a baseball uniform, but this concept proved me wrong. Plus, you picked the perfect team to try it on (Tampa or Miami). The gradient effect, the scripts, the numbers, the uniforms, I like it all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted April 14, 2012 Author Share Posted April 14, 2012 This looks really good. Two things I noticed though. 1. The degree of slant on the scripts is a little too large. Right now it looks like a 45 degree angle. Bring the slant down (just a little) and I think it will help a lot. 2. the front fin and the back fin of the ray look very different in the way they bend. I'm no ray expert or anything, but I think the fins should resemble a similar bend. Otherwise, this is a great concept, love the color scheme.the angle I used for everything is about 18 degrees, but I get what you're saying. Also I want to fix the back fin somehow, but trying to match the shape is sort of dificult, but I'll see what I can do.Thanks everyone! @MichaelDanger19Â | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 These are fantastic. Sorry I didn't comment until now. I am in the camp that thinks everything is a little too slanted. Everything else works great. Kudos to you for going there and making it very presentable. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted April 14, 2012 Author Share Posted April 14, 2012 Updated the Ray @MichaelDanger19Â | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedSox44 Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 Updated the RayNot sure if I like the new Ray... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 Updated the RaySwitch the yellow and the white on the front fin (so yellow on top and white on the bottom) and I think it will look a little better. Also, maybe try connecting the blue of the tail (is it called the stinger?) with the blue of the body. The pink breaking through the blue really sticks out to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 These are beautiful, simply beautiful. Keep up the great work! And quite frankly, I like the updated ray. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimEOBrien Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 Switch the yellow and the white on the front fin (so yellow on top and white on the bottom) and I think it will look a little better. Also, maybe try connecting the blue of the tail (is it called the stinger?) with the blue of the body. The pink breaking through the blue really sticks out to me.Nothing personal but I disagree with everything you just wrote. The logo could probably be improved somehow, but those two ideas are bad ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 Updated the RayUnfortunately it looks dead to the untrained uneducated about animals eye.EDIT: and it looks like adidas snuck their three stripe motif in there.DOUBLE EDIT!: I like everything else about this concept, though. Really creative and outside the box...innovative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piratesfan16 Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 Updated the RayUnfortunately it looks dead to the untrained uneducated about animals eye.EDIT: and it looks like adidas snuck their three stripe motif in there.DOUBLE EDIT!: I like everything else about this concept, though. Really creative and outside the box...innovative.LOL It looks like it just got ran over with the tire prints on the fin. Not trying to be derogatory to the creator, but since you brought up how it looked dead, I thought I'd point that out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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