ThePeam Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 C&C always Welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beluga4 Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 And what was the original Orlando Juice logo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 And what was the original Orlando Juice logo?Bad.I'm digging this one. Nice work Peam. Only criticism would be that in the OJ logo, you have a block o, and a curved j. Looking good so far....LOOK AT THAT TEAM'S LOGO ON SPORTSLOGOS.NET. COMMENTS ANYONE? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted February 2, 2014 Author Share Posted February 2, 2014 And what was the original Orlando Juice logo?I'm digging this one. Nice work Peam. Only criticism would be that in the OJ logo, you have a block o, and a curved j. Looking good so far.The J is supposed to be part of the O. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkeypower Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 I'd get rid of the "est. 2014", at least on the primary logo.I like everything else about the set though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Go Red Sox! Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 I specially like the cap logo. Simple, but original. Good color scheme, always works. I just would have spaced out "ORLANDO" a little (primary and secondary logo), so it looks like that: O R L A N D OApart from that: I like that design. Definitely an upgrade compared to the original and pretty lame logo! “Never argue with an idiot! They will only bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.” ––George Carlin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 Work on making those strokes thicker or get rid of them. Tiny strokes are cheap and at best girly. Id also suggest making the stitches in the baseball orange to clean up the palette GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WSU151 Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 Might want to fix the ORLNADO in the header. Nothing's worse than a sloppy mistake in a presentation.The concept is pretty good...I like the primary...but the fonts are too generic. I can tell after two seconds that the baseball is straight from the Twins logo. Like BrandMoore said, make the stitching orange. The J on the hat logo needs to be thicker, at least as thick as the O, though I do like how the monogram reads "OJ". In the secondary logo, "Orlando" needs to be on the same curve as the roundel. A great font for juice, IMO, is the old bubbly Citrus Bowl font. I think you need something a little more round rather than square. Smart is believing half of what you hear. Genius is knowing which half. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 C&C always Welcome. Would love to see a uniform mockup with this. If you do, make sure you utilize the unique color scheme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 C&C always Welcome. I like everything, but the primary looks a lot like the old Nickelodeon logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerFan98 Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 C&C always Welcome. I like everything, but the primary looks a lot like the old Nickelodeon logo.I was just going to mention that! Good job though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ingmar66 Posted February 3, 2014 Share Posted February 3, 2014 Nice colours, nice font, nice work. I would add the red ball stitches to the O in the cap logo, to make it pop out a little more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted February 3, 2014 Share Posted February 3, 2014 C&C always Welcome. That's a fun logo TP....Just a thought on the "OJ" cap logo.What if the orange "J" was the drop shadow of the "O". I think that would work. *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seancarter Posted February 3, 2014 Share Posted February 3, 2014 this great logo concept and orlando would be great location for Major League Baseball team Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted February 3, 2014 Author Share Posted February 3, 2014 So... seams in the cap logo, make the J the shadow and use a round font okay... I'll try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted February 8, 2014 Author Share Posted February 8, 2014 Updated... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted February 9, 2014 Author Share Posted February 9, 2014 Bump. Anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted February 9, 2014 Share Posted February 9, 2014 Bump. Anyone?Coulda sworn that I replied to the update. I think that the shadow on the cap logo is good, making t the J, but you need to make it that the J is out a little more. Right now, the O is thick, while in comparison, the J is pretty thin. Bring it out to make it more definable and you've got yourself a REALLY nice set. Good work Peam! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted February 10, 2014 Author Share Posted February 10, 2014 Update #2, I think I'm done. Uni's commin' soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted February 10, 2014 Author Share Posted February 10, 2014 C&C always Welcome. I like everything, but the primary looks a lot like the old Nickelodeon logo.Haha, I see where your coming from. But... in the original logo the drop was used as a drop of juice, and because Universal Studios (which is in Orlando) owns Nickelodeon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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