derschwigg Posted February 15, 2014 Author Share Posted February 15, 2014 For the Colts, I'm think something like this though. https://www.behance.net/gallery/Indianapolis-Colts-Brand-Refinement-Proposal/6301123 Credit on that goes to BrandMooreArtThat's great, but that's his. I can't put his work in my project and call it my own. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted February 15, 2014 Author Share Posted February 15, 2014 Insomnia strikes, so I was able to crank out a Titans concept!Enjoy! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlexInHBurg Posted February 15, 2014 Share Posted February 15, 2014 The Titans one is good, something in the wordmark throws me off, though, I can't put my finger on it. Being a Colts fan, I think what they have now is perfect, but the closest I've ever seen to being better was the one that Griffin put a link to. DALLAS STARS INDIANAPOLIS COLTS WASHINGTON WIZARDS NEW YORK YANKEES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRB14 Posted February 15, 2014 Share Posted February 15, 2014 The Titans word mark is off centered and the whole concept needs more red. Everything else is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted February 15, 2014 Share Posted February 15, 2014 These are all very good. As a Saints fan, I sometimes hold out on providing C&C because I'm afraid that my fandom can get in the way of seeing a good design. I agree with pretty much all of the original suggestions for the Saints, and I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who feels this way. Definitely the drop shadow needed to go. But my biggest issue with the original logo is how far down the "arms" of the FDL fall. Maybe the logo was too vertically compressed. With the tips of the "arms" that low, it just looked weird to me. The updated FDL is a big improvement. I like the change in word mark but now the S looks too angular like someone else noted. If the angles could be rounded out, I think you have a winner.For the Dolphis, I would definitely go with the logo with the animal. I actually really like how you've stylized the sun and tilted it just a bit. As bright as the orange is, I think the aqua could be livened up just a tad.The Steelers is pretty good. I'm digging the word mark. But the crossed hammers are almost too minimalist for my liking.The Jets logo is good. The only comment I could make is that it may be just a BIT too detailed. But it's very nice.Colts and Titans look very nice. I have no suggestions on those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted February 15, 2014 Share Posted February 15, 2014 The Titans word mark is off centered and the whole concept needs more red. Everything else is good.I agree, maybe a thin stroke of red around the sword. As for the wordmark, none of them are part of the logos. DIether the logo or wordmark is off-centred in the rectangle, but them being unaligned to each other doesn't matter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRB14 Posted February 15, 2014 Share Posted February 15, 2014 I knew that they were separate. The 'TITANS' convexes (I think that's the right word) and meets near the middle, but not quite. It should meet in the middle of the A, right now it's a bit to the right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted February 15, 2014 Share Posted February 15, 2014 All of these have been great so far, excited for the Seahawks and Chargers. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunnyHeadlines Posted February 15, 2014 Share Posted February 15, 2014 Being a Titans fan, I love our current logo, but I personally also like to see new designs for anything. For your concept, I'm not really liking the light blue inside the sword and as a background. Also, we were named the Titans after the only full scale replica of the Parthenon here in Nashville, so I would love to see a little Greek culture in it too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportslover12345 Posted February 16, 2014 Share Posted February 16, 2014 Great job on these logos, espicially the Titans and the Jets logos. Those are my favorites. Really nothing I can see that has to be changed. Great job and keep up the good work. Thanks to Silent Wind of Doom for these sweet sigs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted February 16, 2014 Share Posted February 16, 2014 The sword needs to look more like a T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted February 17, 2014 Author Share Posted February 17, 2014 Here's the new look Lions, with a revision on the Titans! I think I'm gonna take another look at the Dolphins before I go back to new rounds, on top of some other projects I've got going on.Enjoy! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NCCoachArete Posted February 17, 2014 Share Posted February 17, 2014 Really like the Lions logo. Looks very regal. Not as big a fan as the Titans logo though, I believe because of the gray in/on the sword. Perhaps the gray is too dark?Also, sorry for posting this here, but my request post keeps getting buried...derschwigg, could you send me the lumberjacks logo you did for me minus the face? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerFan98 Posted February 17, 2014 Share Posted February 17, 2014 Detroit looks really nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted February 17, 2014 Author Share Posted February 17, 2014 Really like the Lions logo. Looks very regal. Not as big a fan as the Titans logo though, I believe because of the gray in/on the sword. Perhaps the gray is too dark?Also, sorry for posting this here, but my request post keeps getting buried...derschwigg, could you send me the lumberjacks logo you did for me minus the face?Thanks! As for the Titans, it looks much different on screen than it did in Illustrator - the grey looks like it's got a lot more green to it than it should. As for the Lumberjacks, sorry! I'll get that to you asap. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GotPixels Posted February 17, 2014 Share Posted February 17, 2014 Really enjoying this. First rate stuff. The Titans color thing might be a cmyk vs. rgb deal. If your original comp is cmyk that is. Again, great stuff. Old Dog Learning New Tricks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted February 17, 2014 Author Share Posted February 17, 2014 It's bugging me to have that discolor, so here's the fixed version. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunnyHeadlines Posted February 17, 2014 Share Posted February 17, 2014 Titans looks perfect, as for the lions, I think the grey border around the Lion should be a little more thin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted February 20, 2014 Author Share Posted February 20, 2014 I had a little bit of time, so I put together this new look for the 49ers. I also had an idea for a fauxback, but I don't have time to do that just yet. So here's San Fran! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted February 20, 2014 Share Posted February 20, 2014 Woah. That's crazy good. Love this "Would never be used in that league, but still insanely cool stuff" kinda thread. Keep this up! Love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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