DLabPG5429 Posted November 1, 2012 Share Posted November 1, 2012 Still working on creating a whole identity for this idea but as of right now I'm starting with a logo I have finished and waiting for critique Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illwauk Posted November 1, 2012 Share Posted November 1, 2012 This would only work if the Cardinals were a new team, or maybe for the football Cardinals if they'd stayed in STL, but in a vacuum, this is some good work. Only thing I'd change is the direction of the birds' head so it look like it's facing forward. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KidBro Posted November 2, 2012 Share Posted November 2, 2012 http://i.imgur.com/Q5k4Z.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted November 2, 2012 Share Posted November 2, 2012 http://i.imgur.com/Q5k4Z.gifNice feedback, kid.Honestly, I think this has some potential. Can't say I'm a huge fan of how the font looks - have you tried interlocking like the current StL? But in general, I love the idea. Just think there's some refining that could happen to make this pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancealot Posted November 2, 2012 Share Posted November 2, 2012 The head shape looks too much like the football teams cardinal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kw11333 Posted November 2, 2012 Share Posted November 2, 2012 http://i.imgur.com/Q5k4Z.gifAct like an adult for once in your life.Logo is good, Personally, I would take that logo, and apply to another sport like the NBA. The logo it self is good, but the Cards brand is iconic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seancarter Posted November 2, 2012 Share Posted November 2, 2012 I think you need go back to draining board on this concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
29texan Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 Still working on creating a whole identity for this idea but as of right now I'm starting with a logo I have finished and waiting for critiqueI actually think this is a GREAT concept..... just not for the St. Louis Cardinals baseball club.As mentioned before, it would be great for an expansion team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KidBro Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 http://i.imgur.com/Q5k4Z.gifAct like an adult for once in your life.I was just playing with the guy. Chill out and try to have some fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uniguy22 Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 I think you've just inadvertently created an amazing alt logo for the Blue Jays. You almost have the shape of a maple leaf. With a few tweaks you could have a great Jays/leaf hybrid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Green27 Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 Don't let the few party poopers get you down, this is a dandy looking logo. I get what people are saying about 'St. Louis would never use it' but cmon it's just a concept guys. I applaud your creativity and second uniguy22's Blue Jays comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 Third on taking this same concept for the Blue Jays. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 Don't let the few party poopers get you down, this is a dandy looking logo. I get what people are saying about 'St. Louis would never use it' but cmon it's just a concept guys. Party poopers? It's called legitimate criticism. Thats what happens here. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Admiral Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 It looks like it would be a good logo for an upscale sports bar near Busch Stadium. ♫ oh yeah, board goes on, long after the thrill of postin' is gone ♫ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noolish Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 I think this would be a cool concept for the Arizona Cardinals. I like the logo a lot, actually. St. Louis is just tricky because of how classic their style is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPDesign Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 The initial shape is nice, but the second layer of line work needs a lot of tweaking. Some places it's inside the original shape, other places it is offset, and others its on the edge. It looks too messy right now.The T is also too thin compared to the S and L. I know that's how it is because its smaller, but to make it look like a finished small cap they should be the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charlessollars Posted November 4, 2012 Share Posted November 4, 2012 I did a bunch of new Cards logos and some uniforms too here is the link to the full set there are 70 total I will post some single pics as well Here are the uniforms I have done so far to go with the above logos If you want to see the single photos from my page you can go to my flickr account http://www.flickr.com/photos/fourteen85/sets/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLabPG5429 Posted November 5, 2012 Author Share Posted November 5, 2012 thanks for all the comment guys I will look into the whole Blue Jays concept and other ideas. Your input really helps, this is for my Graphic Design class at school and I just want more input before I submit it. I'll post more tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted November 6, 2012 Share Posted November 6, 2012 charlessollars, since you're new here you might not be aware of how we do threads on these boards. If a title is started by someone that says, say, "Toronto Blue jays Concept," it means that the poster of the thread has a concept they want input on. It may appear that a thread marked "Toronto Blue Jays Concept" is an invitation for anyone with a Blue Jays concept to post it, but in fact, we almost treat threads like mini-portfolios. Unless a thread is specifically marked in an original post that others may post (usually these are contests), it is meant for the original poster to post their ideas.By putting your own ideas into your own thread, rather than in someone else's, it assures that all your hard work will get the attention it deserves. So go ahead and start your own thread with the material you submitted here. Folks will be glad to check it out.PeaceWhittier Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayman Posted November 7, 2012 Share Posted November 7, 2012 Look within the circled area. The lighter red looks like a mistake, I don't know if you are handing this in as a final or concept but either way, for the final you should smooth the lighter red. Also try to make both shades of red seem like they belong together because right now, especially where I have circled, it doesnt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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