OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 12, 2016 Author Share Posted May 12, 2016 5 hours ago, Crabcake47 said: Agreed on Tampa. I love the font, but the stripes remind me more of rose bushes/spiny plants than lightning. Great idea tho! 8 hours ago, ScreamingViking said: Most of these concepts are excellent. I especially like the Toronto striping and the Winged D Detroit primaries. The Tampa Bay is a little off. I like the faint incorporation of silver, but those "bolts" on the arms got me thinking Jack and the Beanstalk.Try removing the curve in the pattern on the arms; that might make them look more like bolts. Hmmm I get what you're saying. I'd like to stay away from the same sort of design in terms of piping that the team already has on their alternate, so I'll see what I can do to differentiate it. My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahowe6464 Posted May 12, 2016 Share Posted May 12, 2016 The Lightning one is crazy but I like it. The bolts should have sharper edges though. Detroit... man, the winged wheel needs to be front and center. But a good concept nevertheless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 12, 2016 Author Share Posted May 12, 2016 Up Next: Ottawa Senators Ottawa desperately needs a new look. This gives them a unique striping pattern and number font, and brings back the unused logo which is far superior to their current primary imo. Buffalo Sabres Their retired third jersey from a few years ago is too beautiful to never be worn again (atleast the same style striping), so that is what this is based off of. Enjoy! My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted May 12, 2016 Share Posted May 12, 2016 My only complaint when I see the Sabres white jerseys like that is the yellow on the outside. I think if you had blue on the outside and the gold in the middle the contrast would make both pop out better. Resulting in a sharper jersey design. Great job though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 12, 2016 Author Share Posted May 12, 2016 5 hours ago, MrWonka said: My only complaint when I see the Sabres white jerseys like that is the yellow on the outside. I think if you had blue on the outside and the gold in the middle the contrast would make both pop out better. Resulting in a sharper jersey design. Great job though. Here is an update based off of your feedback, thanks Dylan! Be on the look out, the Pacific Division is up next. Edit: also working on an update to Tampa, so I'll try to post that later on today. My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 12, 2016 Author Share Posted May 12, 2016 And here is an update to the Bolts! Any C&C? I'll begin to post the Pacific Division tomorrow My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB03 Posted May 12, 2016 Share Posted May 12, 2016 Perfect, I love it. Arm pattern looks a thousand times better. Good work with all of these! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted May 12, 2016 Share Posted May 12, 2016 Looks great. I'd maybe try tapering the lightning bolts on the arms, wider at shoulders and to a point at the sleeve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B-mer Posted May 12, 2016 Share Posted May 12, 2016 Lightning are much better. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 13, 2016 Author Share Posted May 13, 2016 I'm glad everyone has enjoyed this series so far, time to move on to the Pacific Division Arizona Coyotes C&C always appreciated My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crabcake Posted May 13, 2016 Share Posted May 13, 2016 These are awesome! Tampa's update is perfect, and the Coyotes are amazing. Sabres and Senators are also big upgrades on what they have now. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 13, 2016 Author Share Posted May 13, 2016 1 hour ago, Crabcake47 said: These are awesome! Tampa's update is perfect, and the Coyotes are amazing. Sabres and Senators are also big upgrades on what they have now. Keep it up! Thanks Crabcake! My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldconcepts Posted May 13, 2016 Share Posted May 13, 2016 Love the new Arizona concept! Though I think it would be better with their current primary. Twitter: @ldconcepts / Instagram: @ld.concepts / Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 14, 2016 Author Share Posted May 14, 2016 Up next: Edmonton Oilers Edmonton's orange third gets promoted to full time status, and a matching road is added Vancouver Canucks This was based off of the throwback uniform that Vancouver wore this past season. C&C always appreciated My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahowe6464 Posted May 14, 2016 Share Posted May 14, 2016 These two are good. Love Vancouver's striping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmick Posted May 14, 2016 Share Posted May 14, 2016 I really like the Florida set. I've seen a few of these concepts floating around based on what their supposed to wear next year, but this one looks the best. I would put the shoulder patch on both arms and I would ditch the blue hem - it doesn't add anything. It just blends in with the pants and makes the jersey look shorter. Overall though, nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 14, 2016 Author Share Posted May 14, 2016 Thank you for the comments so far, any other C&C before I post the next two teams tomorrow morning? My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted May 15, 2016 Share Posted May 15, 2016 I know it's subtle, but I really like the V neck for Vancouver. It's just another little touch that sets these above the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 15, 2016 Author Share Posted May 15, 2016 Up next: Calgary Flames While my opinion may be in the minority, I find the horse head logo much more unique and better suited to be a primary logo. Plus in the case of these uniforms, I think that the color balance and general design of the logo fits in better with the striping and colors of the jerseys. Anaheim Ducks The Ducks have such a great and unique color scheme if used correctly. I'm not the biggest fan of their current homes, but their orange alternates and road uniforms are really appealing to me. So I sort of based this set off of those two uniforms. Enjoy! My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted May 15, 2016 Share Posted May 15, 2016 Big fan of most of the work so far. Everything is clean and well presented. The one that really stands out however is your Lightning concept. Turning the shoulder design into bolts that match the pants was a stroke of genius. Those uniforms are proof that you can have a clean look without sacrificing creativity in the form of an overused, traditional template. Speaking of templates, did you create the Adidas one yourself? It looks just about perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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