Brendan Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 get rid of the purple altogether? or just certain parts...? also to everyone...how do y'all feel about the pinstripes? personally, i think it clashes with the intricacy of the ironwork...Get rid of the purple all together, IMO it doesn?t go well with the teal. Now the pinstripes, I personally like the look, but that?s just me. I think it adds a little something that makes the jersey pop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nyk Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 thx for the feedback guys, please keep it comin'here's the 3rd version:complete with a darker color "iron" side panels, pinstripes, and a different position of the FDB onto the ironwork.any more revisions or ideas?We Have A Winner, Nice work!, Send these to the Hornets. I wanna see what the road jersey would look like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshey Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 thx for the feedback guys, please keep it comin'here's the 3rd version:complete with a darker color "iron" side panels, pinstripes, and a different position of the FDB onto the ironwork.any more revisions or ideas?We Have A Winner, Nice work!, Send these to the Hornets. I wanna see what the road jersey would look likeYea, you should really send these to the Hornets! It would be wild if they switched to these. I'm usually not caring or paying attention to the concepts on this site because almost always they are garbage and RIDICULOUS but I'm happy I stumbled along this. GO NETS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted May 4, 2008 Author Share Posted May 4, 2008 here's a last version (?) of the home:thanks for all the advice (esp. Sabres7200, u had some good points)i took away the pinstripes, moved the ironwork more towards showing most on the front of the jersey, changed the ironwork back to gold (since i won't be making a gold jersey), and moved the FDB to the back above the nameplate. also made a lil template change and added the material folds for fun what ya think of this one? any more revisions b4 i make an away and alt jersey?ps: McCall, i vectored the wordmark and numbers from scratch looking at some of the words on hornets.com promotional stuff with that typeface. Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDunn Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 mmmmm...pretty. I like the gold ironwork more than the purple the more that I think about it. I think the dominance of the creole blue and gold in the latest version with the purple only showing up on the names on the back and as a trim color is great. The purple is needed in the scheme to contrast the gold and blue, but doesn't need to be as prominent. You executed that idea well. I know I said the trim on the bottom of the shorts should be purple, but with purple now taking a backseat, I wonder if the blue would look better down there. I can't decide.Overall, though, I love this latest design. It's completely different than anything else in the league but doesn't look too "out there" or overly garish. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 awwww. you really should make a gold jersey. people underestimate how good basketball teams look in yellow THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEWJ Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 awwww. you really should make a gold jersey. people underestimate how good basketball teams look in yellowYea that alternate is alright, but I'd almost rather see a navy-ish/purple-ish alternate.btw, I love those shoes in that pic.Love the latest update.Can't wait to see a road jersey/alt. | BROWNS | BUCKEYES | CAVALIERS | INDIANS | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 I like where this is going, but i have an idea id like to see...The striping around the neckline, i think itd look alot better if it also went on the shorts and the sleeves. Itd really balance it out i think.Another idea, although im not sure if it would look better or not, would be to try to make the side panel design sublimated. IDK, just an idea ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckymack Posted May 5, 2008 Share Posted May 5, 2008 here's a last version (?) of the home:thanks for all the advice (esp. Sabres7200, u had some good points)i took away the pinstripes, moved the ironwork more towards showing most on the front of the jersey, changed the ironwork back to gold (since i won't be making a gold jersey), and moved the FDB to the back above the nameplate. also made a lil template change and added the material folds for fun what ya think of this one? any more revisions b4 i make an away and alt jersey?ps: McCall, i vectored the wordmark and numbers from scratch looking at some of the words on hornets.com promotional stuff with that typeface.This is BY FAR the best NBA concept I've ever seen on these boards. Kudos to you, sir. My only suggestion is to mimic the neckline piping on the bottom of the shorts. Other than that, they're FANTASTIC. My eyes thank you. Sigs are for sissies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
w00tness Posted May 5, 2008 Share Posted May 5, 2008 Absolutely amazing. Everything looks so crisp and clean; the piping, the numbers, the player name.Good job, man. This is brilliant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milo Meningocele Posted May 5, 2008 Share Posted May 5, 2008 I'd concur that these are ALMOST perfect. I agree with whoever said you should mimic the collar piping on the short bottoms. My only other suggestion would be to switch the "NOLA" logo to the back, because it's barely noticeable on the shorts--and put the FDB on the collar, because the current collar logo is rather nondescript and unremarkable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted May 5, 2008 Share Posted May 5, 2008 here's a last version (?) of the home:thanks for all the advice (esp. Sabres7200, u had some good points)i took away the pinstripes, moved the ironwork more towards showing most on the front of the jersey, changed the ironwork back to gold (since i won't be making a gold jersey), and moved the FDB to the back above the nameplate. also made a lil template change and added the material folds for fun what ya think of this one? any more revisions b4 i make an away and alt jersey?ps: McCall, i vectored the wordmark and numbers from scratch looking at some of the words on hornets.com promotional stuff with that typeface.This is BY FAR the best NBA concept I've ever seen on these boards. Kudos to you, sir. My only suggestion is to mimic the neckline piping on the bottom of the shorts. Other than that, they're FANTASTIC. My eyes thank you.Look one page back. That's what he did originally. Looked a little too cluttered. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueSky Posted May 5, 2008 Share Posted May 5, 2008 Still don't like the gold wrought iron...'cause there's no such thing unless it's painted! This is like using an orange palm tree or a blue cardinal - just doesn't work. The gold ironwork also looks a little bit girly somehow. I realize purple isn't black (true wrought iron color) but the ironwork looks a lot better in a darker color IMO.Otherwise, terrific! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckymack Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 here's a last version (?) of the home:thanks for all the advice (esp. Sabres7200, u had some good points)i took away the pinstripes, moved the ironwork more towards showing most on the front of the jersey, changed the ironwork back to gold (since i won't be making a gold jersey), and moved the FDB to the back above the nameplate. also made a lil template change and added the material folds for fun what ya think of this one? any more revisions b4 i make an away and alt jersey?ps: McCall, i vectored the wordmark and numbers from scratch looking at some of the words on hornets.com promotional stuff with that typeface.This is BY FAR the best NBA concept I've ever seen on these boards. Kudos to you, sir. My only suggestion is to mimic the neckline piping on the bottom of the shorts. Other than that, they're FANTASTIC. My eyes thank you.Look one page back. That's what he did originally. Looked a little too cluttered.Oh, FINE! I did. And he did. Nevermind. They're perfect. Sigs are for sissies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted May 6, 2008 Author Share Posted May 6, 2008 okay, so this is the final template, accompanied by the away and alt jersey:i added the bottom shorts striping back to tie more in with the top and the collar. what i need to know is how the color choices are working for the away and alt jerseys, i feel like something could be wrong, but maybe not. i also have a different wordmark for the alt that doesnt have the bottom "swirls". Should i use that instead of cluttering the front of the jersey with more ironwork? Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
w00tness Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 Firtst one (white): Beautiful. I can't think of anything that you'd have to change to make it better.Second one (light blue): Another beautiful one. Try making the light blue stripes on the neckline and the bottom of shorts white.Third one (dark blue): Again, try making the dark blue stripes on the neckline and bottom of the shorts white. I think that way it gives the "three colors at the bottom" feeling like in the first one. Also, I'd take the "swirls" away (from the NOLA, I mean). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRYWHIT Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 Not a fan of the rought iron striping. It makes me think of the bad uniforms of the 90's ... too busy. I do like the purple color as a alternate. Also, the crawfish logo is way too small to read on the neck. go to a different stripping and Im in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milo Meningocele Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 In addition to my previous feedback, I'd ditch the "Hornets" wordmark from the back of the alt shorts. It's inconsistent with the rest of the set--and it's plain and unremarkable, when all the other marks are so stellar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pflava Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 Your last set is just stellar! A brilliant concept.I would agree that the light blue collar and shorts strip should be changed to white on the away and alternate uniforms, but otherwise these are perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 I like these. But do you want to make a yellow one just to see how it looks? that would be cool THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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