bohob Posted February 25, 2009 Share Posted February 25, 2009 First off, people are trying to help you when they say change the template. You should change it. Second, a gold M on a gold jersey is not readable. Third, the numerals don't match the script. Fourth, a number of people complained about the dijon colored jerseys for the all-star game, and your presentation of it is not a good rebuttal. The white drop shadow on the NOB stands out more than the navy NOB, and it's hard to read partial letters. Finally, would this go with white pants even though it has a road script? Or would it be a road jersey and be worn with grey pants? (That would be incredibly awful.) This concept has serious issues, and you need to fix it before moving on to the next one. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted February 25, 2009 Author Share Posted February 25, 2009 Alright i hear what everyone is saying, i will slow down, edit or use a different template, and update philly and the brewers beroe i move on. keep the C&C comingNot bad.But, looking at your disclaimer, can the modifications ever really be your property?To this i am not sure. Of corse when i recolor a logo i am not saying it is my property, i have just seen many concepts on here with a marking similar to mine. I think all i am trying to say is that everyone should be fully aware that this is not my original logo. I thought it looked more profecional, but if i am wrong i can change the layout to not inclue that. THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crkraider22 Posted February 25, 2009 Share Posted February 25, 2009 Alright i hear what everyone is saying, i will slow down, edit or use a different template, and update philly and the brewers beroe i move on. keep the C&C comingNot bad.But, looking at your disclaimer, can the modifications ever really be your property?To this i am not sure. Of corse when i recolor a logo i am not saying it is my property, i have just seen many concepts on here with a marking similar to mine. I think all i am trying to say is that everyone should be fully aware that this is not my original logo. I thought it looked more profecional, but if i am wrong i can change the layout to not inclue that.Your spelling is as bad as your template! I guess that at your school they care more about what football uniforms to get than the english language.Edit: Its professional by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted February 25, 2009 Author Share Posted February 25, 2009 Alright i hear what everyone is saying, i will slow down, edit or use a different template, and update philly and the brewers beroe i move on. keep the C&C comingNot bad.But, looking at your disclaimer, can the modifications ever really be your property?To this i am not sure. Of corse when i recolor a logo i am not saying it is my property, i have just seen many concepts on here with a marking similar to mine. I think all i am trying to say is that everyone should be fully aware that this is not my original logo. I thought it looked more profecional, but if i am wrong i can change the layout to not inclue that.Your spelling is as bad as your template! I guess that at your school they care more about what football uniforms to get than the english language.Edit: Its professional by the way.yup in my school no one gives a crap about anything. no thats just me, cammon i spelled something wrong, at least say something about the concept if you care so much about my spelling THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted February 25, 2009 Share Posted February 25, 2009 Alright i hear what everyone is saying, i will slow down, edit or use a different template, and update philly and the brewers beroe i move on. keep the C&C comingNot bad.But, looking at your disclaimer, can the modifications ever really be your property?To this i am not sure. Of corse when i recolor a logo i am not saying it is my property, i have just seen many concepts on here with a marking similar to mine. I think all i am trying to say is that everyone should be fully aware that this is not my original logo. I thought it looked more profecional, but if i am wrong i can change the layout to not inclue that.Your spelling is as bad as your template! I guess that at your school they care more about what football uniforms to get than the english language.Edit: Its professional by the way.yup in my school no one gives a crap about anything. no thats just me, cammon i spelled something wrong, at least say something about the concept if you care so much about my spellingHe did say something about your concept. He said the template is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted February 25, 2009 Author Share Posted February 25, 2009 Alright i hear what everyone is saying, i will slow down, edit or use a different template, and update philly and the brewers beroe i move on. keep the C&C comingNot bad.But, looking at your disclaimer, can the modifications ever really be your property?To this i am not sure. Of corse when i recolor a logo i am not saying it is my property, i have just seen many concepts on here with a marking similar to mine. I think all i am trying to say is that everyone should be fully aware that this is not my original logo. I thought it looked more profecional, but if i am wrong i can change the layout to not inclue that.Your spelling is as bad as your template! I guess that at your school they care more about what football uniforms to get than the english language.Edit: Its professional by the way.yup in my school no one gives a crap about anything. no thats just me, cammon i spelled something wrong, at least say something about the concept if you care so much about my spellingHe did say something about your concept. He said the template is bad.ok well i give up because i do not want this to go to the graveyard, i guess i will try to spell better. THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted June 17, 2009 Author Share Posted June 17, 2009 Its about time for an update. I fixed the template, i think, did I?Anyway, here is St. LouisC&C please THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 Personally, I like it when the number is even with the chest logo. It's a good looking jersey, that's just my preference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 Personally, I like it when the number is even with the chest logo. It's a good looking jersey, that's just my preference.Yeah me too. Also, the template looks much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted June 19, 2009 Author Share Posted June 19, 2009 Thanks for the commentsHere is a small update with the only change being the number placment on the front.I have more jerseys ready I just want a little more C&C on the cards._____I am also giving out the new and improved template if anyone wants to use it. THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sport Billy Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 A St. Louis uniform needs to have the Birds and Bat - non-negotiable.This design looks like the knock-offs that are designed for the high school thug look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted June 20, 2009 Author Share Posted June 20, 2009 A St. Louis uniform needs to have the Birds and Bat - non-negotiable.This design looks like the knock-offs that are designed for the high school thug look.it has the bird and bat on the sleeveanyway i made a blue version for the road too.C&C please THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted June 20, 2009 Share Posted June 20, 2009 I mean, it looks fine, but it's just incredibly obvious and we've seen something like this a thousand times. Do something more - change some logos, change some colors, come up with a new wordmark - and this series will be way less boring.EDIT: looking back I actually really like what you did with the Athletics, there is enough green to balance out the yellow, it's pretty good. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drew22 Posted June 21, 2009 Share Posted June 21, 2009 This template is much better. Good job. I like both of the Cards alts. I think the BoB looks fine on the sleeve. Eagles/Heels/Dawgs/Falcons/Hawks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaiseTheBanner Posted June 21, 2009 Share Posted June 21, 2009 A St. Louis uniform needs to have the Birds and Bat - non-negotiable.This design looks like the knock-offs that are designed for the high school thug look.Uhh, please explain this to me.I like what you have done so far, especially with the A's, I had no idea yellow could look that good. avatar by crkraider22, signature by crkraider22 and chestnutz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted June 22, 2009 Author Share Posted June 22, 2009 Any more comments before i post another? THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted July 28, 2009 Author Share Posted July 28, 2009 Time for the Rays. This is the alternate I wish they had. It would make the dark blue uni they have now an alternate for the road only.enjoy.C&C THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBGKon Posted July 29, 2009 Share Posted July 29, 2009 Time for the Rays. This is the alternate I wish they had. It would make the dark blue uni they have now an alternate for the road only.enjoy.C&CAny way I could see what this looks like with a navy script and navy numbers outlined in white? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted July 29, 2009 Author Share Posted July 29, 2009 Time for the Rays. This is the alternate I wish they had. It would make the dark blue uni they have now an alternate for the road only.enjoy.C&CAny way I could see what this looks like with a navy script and navy numbers outlined in white?I could try that but i think the white goes well with the pants. THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted July 29, 2009 Share Posted July 29, 2009 I like what I see, but a few things...I'd prefer Navy numbers, since the Royals powder blues have white numbers. Maybe even a navy script, with a white outline, no drop shadow?Also I'd use MLB Block numbers. Idk, I saw a lot of counterfeit jerseys with the wrong number font, but w/eBut overall, I approve. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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