scottysprings Posted February 25, 2010 Author Share Posted February 25, 2010 Thanks for all the feedback again everyone, I really appreciate it. As suggested I thickened up the shading once again and made some other tweaks to hopefully make the logo more dynamic. Here is the updated logo in the four color schemes I've narrowed it down to, based upon all your recommendations. Let me know what you think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sguse1 Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 I love the color combo in bottom left. That looks like the best one, or the top right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 V3B or V3D, the eyes are starting to look much better. https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 Either one on the left. I like the Patina Green better than the bronze though, although a bronze uniform would be cool. I think you still need to use the outline color as your shading color and combine the outline and shading more (work your darker bronze on the grotesque into the outline, then have a base bronze color, then the lighter bronze highlight should be white, and butt up right next to the outline. That will really set this logo apart in my opinion.I would also like to see a more art deco type wordmark. Start off with an art deco-esque font and customize it to look great with the logo, or hand draw one as well.Great work so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 I like V3B and V3D. The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lich0037 Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 V3B! Sports Branding and Design | The Minnesota High School Helmet Project | Eric's Helmet Collection Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick in England Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 3B! 3B! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 3C and 3B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueYankee26 Posted February 25, 2010 Share Posted February 25, 2010 3B FOR THE WIN! trueyankee26.wordpress.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JH42XCC Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 V3A and V3D are the best looking ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 V3B, followed by V3D "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentz Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 You should probably lose the highlight color. I think it overcomplicates it. If you go with a or c, you would have 4 shades of the same color in the logo. To be honest you could probably lose the shadow color also and just have a two color design, but three colors would definitely be enough.I would go with b. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scottysprings Posted February 26, 2010 Author Share Posted February 26, 2010 Alrighty guys, I put in a few more hours of work on this and here's what I got. Biggest change is the new typeface which I hand-drew in Illustrator (I'm pretty proud of it too ). I was going for the art deco feel that's been mentioned a few times throughout the thread. I also eliminated the color that was used for shading from the design and used the dark outline color in its place, as well as making the brighter color white and modifying the shading paths a bit. I don't think there's much else to say as far as changes go but I'm quite happy with how this has come along. Thanks again for all the feedback thus far, I really appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian in Boston Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 B... hands down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentz Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 Huge improvement. I like both but I still prefer B. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 A, I think if you're going for a New York team, I think having the colors of the Statue of Liberty is a huge plus, it also creates a new meaning for the team. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 A because of the patina color. I still want to see the shadows merge with the outline though, but it is definitely looking damn good now.Also a minor nit pick on the font...the S looks too skinny compared to the rest of the letter forms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JH42XCC Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 I'm going with "A" on this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 I'm going with A as well. I think the green looks great and it does remind me of the Statue of Liberty, which will be great because it's New York based team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tBBP Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 I vote B...but with the previous script. That one read better than this more recent one.This thing here is coming along GREAT, btw. *Disclaimer: I am not an authoritative expert on stuff...I just do a lot of reading and research and keep in close connect with a bunch of people who are authoritative experts on stuff. || dribbble || Behance || Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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