Vicious Posted May 11, 2011 Share Posted May 11, 2011 Hey guys,I havent done any logo work in a while, so I decided to try out a bear logo. Lemme know what you think. It is still a work in progress, but I would like to get some cnc on it to make it better. I feel like it's incomplete, but I'm not sure what to add/take away. Lemme know -Vicious- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undead Posted May 11, 2011 Share Posted May 11, 2011 Really nice start. I would say add some little dots for eyes. Add some shadows on the tongue so it doesn't touch the teeth. It'll make the fangs stand out more. Add a little high light to the nose. Right now it's just a void. The hair needs to be simplified. It's very busy right now. Add some shadows to give the logo depth. Right now it's very flat.I look forward to an update. Portfoliobobschultz6' class="bbc_url">@bobschultz6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted May 11, 2011 Author Share Posted May 11, 2011 Here's what its like actually colored. got a bit crazy with the colors, but its all for fun. Thanks for the critique undead. the left side bugs me for some reason. I will try adding eye dots and simplifying it a bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted May 11, 2011 Share Posted May 11, 2011 I definitely would try to add eyes like previously recomended. I see what you're saying about the left side. It looks a little wide compared with the rest of the logo. Try to bring the edges in a bit and make the head more slim. Also, the hair on the right above the eye looks kind of like a comb-over to me. Maybe it's the part in the middle above the nose, but it just looks a little off to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted May 11, 2011 Share Posted May 11, 2011 It's like the Grateful Dead Bears on steroids. lolcritique wise, the left side is a bit off. The eye area is lower than the right, meanwhile the ear looks level, or slightly higher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Impaler Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 I think his left ear, right when viewing, is too high and too front facing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted May 12, 2011 Author Share Posted May 12, 2011 Added some eyes, Highlights at the nostrils that i think give the nose more of a placement, Changed the left side of his face, and his right ear. Enlarged the teeth.Lemme know how you all like it. Next step i guess is to simplify a bit more. the chin and the right cheek bother me now. CnC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CS85 Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 I like it, but the eyes are still just a bit strange. You may want to refine the shape a bit more, I'm seeing almost a shaggy-dog kinda vibe, but the potential is there. Quote "You are nothing more than a small cancer on this message board. You are not entertaining, you are a complete joke." twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted May 12, 2011 Author Share Posted May 12, 2011 Thanks for all the input guys.More changes coming in the morning.-Vicious- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 It's coming along, and I like the angle. It is different than most bear head logos so that is really unique, which is nice to see. The right eye (his left eye) is too small. Based on the angle of the nose it should extend more to our right. the tongue is also too close to the teeth. shadows in the mouth would make a dark colored gap between the fangs and tongue. It could also lose some of the numerous angles and jaggedness in the hair to simplify it. I think once you change those few things, this could turn out really nice. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rcb05 Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 I'm not digging the huge dark area around the eyes. It kinda looks like a bear mated with a racoon. Also, I think you need something to differentiate between the nose and the bear's left eye. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted May 12, 2011 Author Share Posted May 12, 2011 Tried to simplify it up around the edges. played with the tongue a bit, still dont know what to think about it. changed the eye shape, made his left (our right) eye shadow larger. Your thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 Each revision is getting better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
altosax29b Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 The new one looks amazing, nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pianoknight Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 Right now, it's got sort of a Chow Chow vibe going on. But that's not entirely bad, because Chows are probably the most bear-like dog. I think it just needs a little more ferocity, IMO. 5th in NAT. TITLES | 2nd in CONF. TITLES |  5th in HEISMAN |  7th in DRAFTS |  8th in ALL-AMER  | 7th in WINS  | 4th in BOWLS |  1st in SELLOUTS  | 1st GAMEDAY SIGN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 I'm getting a Cujo vibe from it. From here I could see it developing into a bear or a rabid st. bernard. But not a chow-chow. https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted May 12, 2011 Author Share Posted May 12, 2011 Thickened up the stroke on it, enlarged his mouth a bit for more ferocity. Any suggestions on how to make it more bear-like lemme know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GFB Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 Way too "furry" or "mangy" for a bear. Bears have very short hairs on their face:Go with a less pointy, more smooth and circular look and it will serve you well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted May 12, 2011 Author Share Posted May 12, 2011 took GFB's advice. Thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SP00 Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 I like the old one more.Everything is perfect, just the eyes I think dont match well with the rest. What about making them like this, in this style; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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