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Bear Logo

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Hey guys,

I havent done any logo work in a while, so I decided to try out a bear logo.

Lemme know what you think. It is still a work in progress, but I would like to get some cnc on it to make it better.

I feel like it's incomplete, but I'm not sure what to add/take away.

Lemme know

-Vicious-

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Really nice start. I would say add some little dots for eyes. Add some shadows on the tongue so it doesn't touch the teeth. It'll make the fangs stand out more. Add a little high light to the nose. Right now it's just a void. The hair needs to be simplified. It's very busy right now. Add some shadows to give the logo depth. Right now it's very flat.

I look forward to an update.

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Here's what its like actually colored. got a bit crazy with the colors, but its all for fun.

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Thanks for the critique undead. the left side bugs me for some reason. I will try adding eye dots and simplifying it a bit more.

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I definitely would try to add eyes like previously recomended. I see what you're saying about the left side. It looks a little wide compared with the rest of the logo. Try to bring the edges in a bit and make the head more slim. Also, the hair on the right above the eye looks kind of like a comb-over to me. Maybe it's the part in the middle above the nose, but it just looks a little off to me.

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It's like the Grateful Dead Bears on steroids. lol

critique wise, the left side is a bit off. The eye area is lower than the right, meanwhile the ear looks level, or slightly higher.

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Added some eyes, Highlights at the nostrils that i think give the nose more of a placement, Changed the left side of his face, and his right ear. Enlarged the teeth.

Lemme know how you all like it.

Next step i guess is to simplify a bit more. the chin and the right cheek bother me now.

CnC

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I like it, but the eyes are still just a bit strange. You may want to refine the shape a bit more, I'm seeing almost a shaggy-dog kinda vibe, but the potential is there.

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Thanks for all the input guys.

More changes coming in the morning.

-Vicious-

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It's coming along, and I like the angle. It is different than most bear head logos so that is really unique, which is nice to see. The right eye (his left eye) is too small. Based on the angle of the nose it should extend more to our right. the tongue is also too close to the teeth. shadows in the mouth would make a dark colored gap between the fangs and tongue. It could also lose some of the numerous angles and jaggedness in the hair to simplify it. I think once you change those few things, this could turn out really nice.

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I'm not digging the huge dark area around the eyes. It kinda looks like a bear mated with a racoon. Also, I think you need something to differentiate between the nose and the bear's left eye.

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Tried to simplify it up around the edges. played with the tongue a bit, still dont know what to think about it. changed the eye shape, made his left (our right) eye shadow larger.

Your thoughts?

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Right now, it's got sort of a Chow Chow vibe going on. But that's not entirely bad, because Chows are probably the most bear-like dog.

I think it just needs a little more ferocity, IMO.

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I'm getting a Cujo vibe from it. From here I could see it developing into a bear or a rabid st. bernard. But not a chow-chow.

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Thickened up the stroke on it, enlarged his mouth a bit for more ferocity.

Any suggestions on how to make it more bear-like lemme know.

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Way too "furry" or "mangy" for a bear. Bears have very short hairs on their face:

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Go with a less pointy, more smooth and circular look and it will serve you well.

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I like the old one more.

Everything is perfect, just the eyes I think dont match well with the rest. What about making them like this, in this style;mrTud.png

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