Shadojoker Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 I like where this is heading!! Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 Looks great so far. The only issue for me is that he's not dynamically in motion enough. He's too passive. The pose you're using seems like it's just slightly too early in the dunk, like he's on the way up. Maybe let his arm with the ball be slightly more forward, at a slightly more up angle (930 or 10 o'clock), so it feels like we're on the powerful downward part of the dunk. And maybe rotate or skew the whole thing clockwise one hour so it just has a bit more implied energy in the movement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted May 18, 2015 Author Share Posted May 18, 2015 Alright, I'm pretty comfortable with where I landed here. Note the addition of sword rather than dagger, some further upward motion, and hand highlights. Next update will probably include some shirt mockups! Which fabric/background color looks best? GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPDesign Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 This looks super nice, and is a really cool concept.Right now, the white on the sword stands out a bit too much. I would either try to work in white highlights more consistently throughout the illustration or remove it from the sword blade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philly's Phinest Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 Two thumbs up for sure on this one. I really like where this is headed. I like all of these, however, I think the navy background really pops. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportsherald Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 You've incorporated the constructive comments well, with very professional results. One last detail is that there is very little contrast when this is against the dark blue (and to a lesser degree the red) background, so a much thicker outline would be very helpful there. Use the rules of heraldry for more effective sports logos! i.e. keep it simple, use good contrast... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 This is a very nice and solid concept. Personally, I think the gold background looks the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAWeaver Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 This is very nicely done, GMS. I like how this has progressively gotten better.Might I ask as to why you chose gray as the main color on the bottom three and not one of the main colors like you did on the top three? Personally, I like the top three as the navy offsets the wine and gold as everyone else has said.Again, excellent work on this! I absolutely love it! @loganaweaver - Twitter / @loganaweaver - Instagram / Nike Vapor Untouchable Football Template / Logan's Logos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted May 18, 2015 Author Share Posted May 18, 2015 This is very nicely done, GMS. I like how this has progressively gotten better.Might I ask as to why you chose gray as the main color on the bottom three and not one of the main colors like you did on the top three? Personally, I like the top three as the navy offsets the wine and gold as everyone else has said.Again, excellent work on this! I absolutely love it!Thanks, there should be a few more updates yet to come, too.As for the grey - just remember the end use for this is on a t-shirt. Grey and other neutrals tend to sell best, and limiting colors/inks saves $$$. Just wanted to present them in context.As it stands, the bottom left is most likely to be the version produced, albeit with some tweaks. GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 My favorites would be the current colors on the navy background, and then the blue and orange, but I'd like to see that on an orange background. I would definitely pick up the navy one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redlegs420 Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 I think it looks great! Nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 Excellent!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Scorcho Posted May 19, 2015 Share Posted May 19, 2015 Great concept, and really well executed. If I were a Cavs fan i'd want one on the red or gold background Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panthers_2012 Posted May 19, 2015 Share Posted May 19, 2015 Love the redesign you have done with having the sword instead of the dagger. Really nice logo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted May 19, 2015 Share Posted May 19, 2015 great stuff, Greg.i personally would prefer the middle bottom coloration on a white tee. the Cavs need to be wine / gold / white with their color scheme. get that navy outta here. Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted May 19, 2015 Author Share Posted May 19, 2015 great stuff, Greg.i personally would prefer the middle bottom coloration on a white tee. the Cavs need to be wine / gold / white with their color scheme. get that navy outta here.Couldn't agree more...unfortunately, the team's current obsession highlighting navy and gold has everyone else wanting just that. GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tigerslionspistonshabs Posted May 19, 2015 Share Posted May 19, 2015 Pretty wicked man. My only complaint, if I had to come up with one, is that the hat doesn't look like a Cavalier's hat (whatever the term for it is). From this angle it almost looks like a turban. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted May 20, 2015 Author Share Posted May 20, 2015 Here's the latest. We hit the presses today, ended up w/ gray shirt as predicted. Already getting a great response, so thanks to those of you who helped by providing feedback on this! Those who mentioned interest in purchasing: http://erie-apparel.com/Discount code for the board is "ccslc" GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 Ordered it! I'm so excited... How long will it take to ship to northwest Ohio? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted May 21, 2015 Author Share Posted May 21, 2015 Ordered it! I'm so excited... How long will it take to ship to northwest Ohio?Thanks a lot, really appreciate it! Expect to be in your mailbox Saturday. Monday at latest! GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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