ldconcepts Posted June 8, 2019 Author Share Posted June 8, 2019 Here's a cleaned up version. What do you think? C&C Appreciated! Twitter: @ldconcepts / Instagram: @ld.concepts / Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appleclock Posted June 8, 2019 Share Posted June 8, 2019 The elements are all great and well rendered. I just don’t like the overall composition. It’s an S hugging a fish, or maybe shoving it. The fish is presumably moving from right to left and the S is being read left to right. Not sure how you fix that exactly with what you have but as is the two elements don’t mesh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldconcepts Posted June 8, 2019 Author Share Posted June 8, 2019 13 hours ago, appleclock said: The elements are all great and well rendered. I just don’t like the overall composition. It’s an S hugging a fish, or maybe shoving it. The fish is presumably moving from right to left and the S is being read left to right. Not sure how you fix that exactly with what you have but as is the two elements don’t mesh well. Thanks for the feedback. Is this an improvement? Twitter: @ldconcepts / Instagram: @ld.concepts / Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GT Designs Posted June 8, 2019 Share Posted June 8, 2019 Definetly. Looks more like one logo than two combined logos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldconcepts Posted June 8, 2019 Author Share Posted June 8, 2019 Added a shoulder patch and jerseys. As always, C&C is appreciated! Twitter: @ldconcepts / Instagram: @ld.concepts / Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_DietDrPepper_ Posted June 8, 2019 Share Posted June 8, 2019 It looks good! But I think it needs a darker color mixed in there, like a forest green or something, something to contrast the bright colors Follow the NFA, and My Baseball League here: https://ahsports.boardhost.com/index.php Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krz Posted June 9, 2019 Share Posted June 9, 2019 17 hours ago, BellaSpurs said: It looks good! But I think it needs a darker color mixed in there, like a forest green or something, something to contrast the bright colors Yes, this was my first thought as well. Excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian in Boston Posted June 9, 2019 Share Posted June 9, 2019 I have to say that I much prefer this Seattle Sockeyes concept to your Seattle Kraken logo. The latter's combination of eyeball, tower, and tentacles screamed "Eye of Sauron staring out from Barad-dȗr" to me. As for the Sockeyes' palette, I concur that the salmon and seafoam would benefit from the addition of a third, darker color. It needn't feature heavily in the design of the logos and uniforms. Rather, it could serve as an accent color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiagaraConcepts Posted June 27, 2019 Share Posted June 27, 2019 This logo is very cool,good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vtgco Posted June 27, 2019 Share Posted June 27, 2019 For the logo, instead of groups of 3 U-shapes (idk what to call them), perhaps just do one at a time. Also, the rectangles are inconsistent (the top one moves parallel to the S, but the bottom ones are perpendicular) That, along with reducing the number of internal outlines, might improve the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tygers09 Posted June 30, 2019 Share Posted June 30, 2019 Ohio State called, they want their color scheme back...haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_DietDrPepper_ Posted June 30, 2019 Share Posted June 30, 2019 28 minutes ago, Tygers09 said: Ohio State called, they want their color scheme back...haha. That's not, Ohio St color scheme? Follow the NFA, and My Baseball League here: https://ahsports.boardhost.com/index.php Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tygers09 Posted July 3, 2019 Share Posted July 3, 2019 Sorry, I first thought the secondary color was grey, but after I posted my comment I noticed it was light blue... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flames1fan Posted July 4, 2019 Share Posted July 4, 2019 On 6/8/2019 at 8:02 PM, ldconcepts said: Added a shoulder patch and jerseys. As always, C&C is appreciated! How about use other design then using over usesd jersey design we all ready see too many team use. Not very original. Flames and Blues look the same, rest have close enough arms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
16kid Posted July 4, 2019 Share Posted July 4, 2019 On 6/8/2019 at 5:02 PM, ldconcepts said: Added a shoulder patch and jerseys. As always, C&C is appreciated! Take my money!! Wow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mario Paquette Posted July 30, 2019 Share Posted July 30, 2019 On 6/8/2019 at 7:33 PM, BellaSpurs said: It looks good! But I think it needs a darker color mixed in there, like a forest green or something, something to contrast the bright colors I think the same thing, I would not be surprise if there is a very dark blue in there to represent the sea. That's what's missing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thunderfan23 Posted July 31, 2019 Share Posted July 31, 2019 Overall, I think this is a wonderful concept. It may be missing a couple of elements here and there. But I think this is great! Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shalin Posted April 15, 2021 Share Posted April 15, 2021 Who would I need to talk to obtain a permission to use this logo for a personal hat? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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