dcameronh Posted September 15, 2008 Share Posted September 15, 2008 Not a big fan of the Seahawks one. It looks a lot like the Lions. I think the Green should be included because it sets their current uni off from anyone elses. The other template you used was nicer as well. Overall though, it isn't bad. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted September 16, 2008 Author Share Posted September 16, 2008 Ok guys, I have thought about the template. But, I have decided to use the new template. My reasoning:-Well, I like the "layed flat" perspective given by the template. I pretty much use this perspective on all of my stuff, and I like it here, too.-This is Matt Millone's template. It really isn't mine. I wanted to create something that I could call my own (and I happen to be quite happy with the result).-I've decided that I don't like the perspective given by the old template. It only shows one sleeve and the right shoulder makes it hard to put stuff there. I like the balanced look of the new one.-I am the designer here and I want to use a new template!So, I will continue. You can still comment on it of course and express you feelings. But it will most likely stay the same.Without further adue:Concept 20: Dallas CowboysPlaying with the star motif here. I wanted to make the home template = the road template, finally. The alternate is more throwback, and intended to be worn with the white pants. Comments on previous concepts still welcome!Next: probably Dolphins. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Cunningham Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Ah. I give you all the credit in the world for doing a Cowboys concept and keeping the slate/green-silver color instead of selling out and using plain old silver. That being said, I'm not a fan of this concept otherwise. I can certainly appreciate what you're doing with the alternate, but I don't understand the striping on the sleeves of the home and away (is it a big stripe? or a new little section of the jersey under the star?). Also, I feel that the silver (for lack of a shorter term) names on the blue may be a little hard to read. And I would keep the facemask grey.And what's up with the pants and helmet facemask in this new template? (Other than that, I feel this template is far superior to the old one. The old one made stripes look weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted September 18, 2008 Author Share Posted September 18, 2008 Concept 21 - Miami DolphinsOk, I did change the helmet on the template, for those that didn't like the old one. For the Dolphins, I went with something modern. Yes, there is piping. But, because the piping actually adds to the design, I consider is good piping. The alt is pretty basic.C+C for this concept, and the Cowboys, would be great. Thanks!!Next: Maybe Bears, maybe Chiefs. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MattMilone Posted September 18, 2008 Share Posted September 18, 2008 Holy crap man, I really dig those Dolphins jerseys. The only change I would make is adding white numbers to the orange, just because the blue letters is kinda hard to read. But wow, these are really well done. Also, those pants are brilliant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted September 19, 2008 Author Share Posted September 19, 2008 Bump. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhilliesPhan1325 Posted September 19, 2008 Share Posted September 19, 2008 For the Cowboys, I think the stripe on the sleeve is too big. I like the Dolphins one. Two things, I agree that white numbers would look better on the orange jersey and I don't like the horizontal pants striping that much. "The 0-2 pitch... SWING AND A MISS! STRUCK HIM OUT! THE PHILADELPHIA PHILLIES ARE 2008 WORLD CHAMPIONS OF BASEBALL!" J M yoU wish you had a Duke Dog! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted September 20, 2008 Share Posted September 20, 2008 Not too fond of the Cowboys concept. For me, the stars on the sleeves look too big and seem distracting. I love the Dolphins concept, however. I like how you used their navy blue on the unis it looks great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted September 21, 2008 Author Share Posted September 21, 2008 Buhler? Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
floydnimrod Posted September 21, 2008 Share Posted September 21, 2008 Buhler?As in Darryl Buhler? Mancakes: The Bandhttps://twitter.com/FloydNimrod Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted September 21, 2008 Author Share Posted September 21, 2008 Buhler?As in Darryl Buhler?Ya know, if you're gonna post something, you might as well comment on the concepts. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
floydnimrod Posted September 22, 2008 Share Posted September 22, 2008 Buhler?As in Darryl Buhler?Ya know, if you're gonna post something, you might as well comment on the concepts. Yeah, you're right.I agree with another poster that the numbers on the Orange Dolphins jersey should be white.Also I think the piping on the back should match the front of the jersey, as in it should be a horizontal line that goes across the jersey in stead of going up to the collar. Mancakes: The Bandhttps://twitter.com/FloydNimrod Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted September 22, 2008 Author Share Posted September 22, 2008 Updated Dolphins Alt:Concept 22: Chicago BearsWell, I'll continue the series, although people don't seem to be interested anymore.For the Bears, I wanted to bring some continuity in the striping. That's about it, besides a new color scheme on the "C". Block numbers, too. Next, Chiefs. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted September 23, 2008 Share Posted September 23, 2008 uniforms are solid, not sure how i feel about the helmet stripes though. they just dont really fit erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted September 23, 2008 Author Share Posted September 23, 2008 uniforms are solid, not sure how i feel about the helmet stripes though. they just dont really fitYeah, I agree, and I changed the helmet. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted September 23, 2008 Share Posted September 23, 2008 I don't agree with the block numbers the numbers they have now are classic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted September 23, 2008 Share Posted September 23, 2008 I don't agree with the block numbers the numbers they have now are classic.Thats one of my problems as well. Also, the Blue pants seem to match the Blue jersey while the White pants match the White jersey. They are a team that likes to wear White over Blue and Blue over White. I wonder if there is a way for you to make those sets work better together. If not, these still look good. I am interested to see what you do with the Chiefs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LogoFan Posted September 28, 2008 Share Posted September 28, 2008 Concept 21 - Miami DolphinsOk, I did change the helmet on the template, for those that didn't like the old one. For the Dolphins, I went with something modern. Yes, there is piping. But, because the piping actually adds to the design, I consider is good piping. The alt is pretty basic.C+C for this concept, and the Cowboys, would be great. Thanks!!Next: Maybe Bears, maybe Chiefs.You're missing TV numbers on the home & away jerseys.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted September 28, 2008 Share Posted September 28, 2008 Concept 21 - Miami DolphinsOk, I did change the helmet on the template, for those that didn't like the old one. For the Dolphins, I went with something modern. Yes, there is piping. But, because the piping actually adds to the design, I consider is good piping. The alt is pretty basic.C+C for this concept, and the Cowboys, would be great. Thanks!!Next: Maybe Bears, maybe Chiefs.i think that a logo on the back of the neck would look really good on these jerseys THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted September 28, 2008 Author Share Posted September 28, 2008 Concept 21 - Miami DolphinsOk, I did change the helmet on the template, for those that didn't like the old one. For the Dolphins, I went with something modern. Yes, there is piping. But, because the piping actually adds to the design, I consider is good piping. The alt is pretty basic.C+C for this concept, and the Cowboys, would be great. Thanks!!Next: Maybe Bears, maybe Chiefs.You're missing TV numbers on the home & away jerseys....It's not like every team needs TV numbers. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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