Sigma Kappa Posted May 10, 2010 Share Posted May 10, 2010 Hi guys, what do you think about my newest design? I need to hear your opinions, comments and critics! It's a logo I came up with for a new "NHL EXPANSION" design competition over on PUCKDRAWN ... Thank you guys!...so here's the logo...Thank you for viewing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted May 10, 2010 Share Posted May 10, 2010 The head position and the colors are making me think Western Michigan University. It's obvious that you've created a new logo and not ripped off another, so I'm not going that direction.I also think the mane needs to be more flowing, not flopped over behind the neck. That, in my opinion, will only further its similarity to Western Michigan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illwauk Posted May 10, 2010 Share Posted May 10, 2010 Western is the first thing I thought of when I saw this too. I say replace the gold with silver... not only is Nevada known as The Silver State, but it would probably take care of any possibilty of these being mistaken for WMU. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frenchie Posted May 10, 2010 Share Posted May 10, 2010 Western Michigan, Denver, Swift Current, Boise State, Louisville and Baltimore Stallions, Cal-Poly Mustangs, etc. etc., nothing original there...Regardless of originality (we all need to start somewhere for inspiration), I see a few things I like, a few I don't.-Can't understand the name Broncos for Vegas.- I like the colour scheme but it's a little too close to Anaheim, and Vegas needs to be really glitzy and extravagant.- I don't understang the hem striping, too asymetrical for my liking.- The logo shouldn't be rotated like that, that curved edge was meant to be diagonal.- The arched white striping (sleeve to sleeve) is quite wide, Keep tweaking and let's see what everyone else says... @Frenchie_TO Owner of the Rochester Americans of the MLH Owner of the Toronto Frenchies of the GCFHL6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firefly Posted May 10, 2010 Share Posted May 10, 2010 Broncos makes sense since they host tons of rodeo events throughout the year. Getting to the logo, the nostril seems... off? Perhaps you don't need the white in the nostril of the teeth. Maybe just leave those areas black. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MDC Posted May 10, 2010 Share Posted May 10, 2010 From far away, it looks like a mountain lion opening its jaw really wide, while facing the left. Especially on the white background. that was actually the first thing i saw. Just my two cents ---Owner of the NHA's Philadelphia Quakers, the UBA's Chicago Skyliners, and the CFA's Portland Beavers (2010 CFA2 Champions)--- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted May 10, 2010 Share Posted May 10, 2010 I think the colors are too similar to Anaheim as well. What about a brown-centric scheme with silver? NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMW79 Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 I like them, but I too immediately saw Western Michigan's logo on Anaheim's unis... The numbers also seem a bit high on the shoulders too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corvus Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 Yep, Anaheim was the first thing I thought when looking at the colours. And something seems off about the shape of the horses' head, too small perhaps in relation to the neck, not sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleujayone Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 I have to agree with the others, I see too much similar with the Ducks. The logo is nice though. Since the Broncos are a name already taken by the NFL team in Denver (which also isn't that far away). Why not instead go with the name "Mustangs" as it's a name not already adopted by one of the major sports.Also I'd tweak the colors to Crimson, (PANTONE© 1797 C) as the primary, Canyon Gold (PANTONE© 138 C) and instead have black as a secondary trim color rather than the primary. We all have our little faults. Mine's in California. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
worcat Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 shocked no one mentioned anything about the calgary flames. while colors would be different, the horse heads would be a bit too much in the same league. Bleeding Blue since 1986 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 shocked no one mentioned anything about the calgary flames. while colors would be different, the horse heads would be a bit too much in the same league.The Flames don't use the horse head anymore though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pianoknight Posted May 11, 2010 Share Posted May 11, 2010 I'm not a hockey fan per se, but I like the design. It's solid and the color scheme is nice. The only comment I have is like how some people above have mentioned the "mountain lion" head thing. It could be cleaned up a bit, maybe streamline the "goatee" part under his chin? 5th in NAT. TITLES | 2nd in CONF. TITLES |  5th in HEISMAN |  7th in DRAFTS |  8th in ALL-AMER  | 7th in WINS  | 4th in BOWLS |  1st in SELLOUTS  | 1st GAMEDAY SIGN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corvus Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 shocked no one mentioned anything about the calgary flames. while colors would be different, the horse heads would be a bit too much in the same league.The Flames don't use the horse head anymore though.That and the horse logo presented here has more in common with the Denver Broncos than the Flames fire-snorting horse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EPOCH Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 Where did you get the jerseys and what are they made out of? -Greatest American Born Player and Dallas Star-www.facebook.com/dallasfreezehockey<Dallas Stars> <Dallas Cowboys> <Texas Rangers> <Dallas Mavericks> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 something about the snout/mouth doesn't look right to me...it's too long and thin, perhaps...solid otherwise, though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DanDismounts Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 I think the problem with the snout is that the nostils need to flare up a bit, look at the Denver Broncos logo and you'll notice how the nose flares up just a bit at the nostrils. I also am having a problem with the chin...I don't know if I like the little curl at the bottom...Don't get me wrong I believe this is a great logo but there are just a few minor changes neededGreat Work! DAN|dismounts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
untvar Posted May 12, 2010 Share Posted May 12, 2010 SK, I always liked your concepts on Puckdrawn.com, but this horse seems a little goat-faced. I think of a horse as a majestic, 'knightly' animal. The bent back ears, the goatee, and the big lips detract from that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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