Has2916 Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 Alright, here we go. I've put on my bullet proof vest and I am ready to receive the onslaught of negative (and positive?) feedback.What Columbus will do with their upcoming 3rd jerseys really interests me. I tried creating a canon logo and combined it the flag from the new 10th anniversary logo. The jersey is based off of their original blue jersey and USA's 2010 Olympic jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrySmalls Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 This has potential; however, the primary logo is too detailed and cluttered. I would remove the flag of Ohio and focus the attention on simplifying the cannon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildwing64 Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 Looks pretty good overall. While I can't help but feel that the jersey is a bit plain, it for some reason works quite well. That or I'm having trouble thinking of any suggestions.As for the logo, that more than makes up for the plain-ness of the jersey. PotD: 24/08/2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 I really like the logo BUT THICKER LINES!!!!! Fix that up and its great. I don't like the jerseys though. I don't know what it is though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generic Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 I love the logo, creative. I'm iffy with it working as a crest logo, but obviously it's also working mostly. I don't mind the jersey design, but add a little more. Great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbaker19 Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 I unfortunately can't see it.EDIT: Now I can, and I really like that logo, but the rest of the jersey is a little blah to me. Thanks Dolphins91 for the jersey avatars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoops McCann Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 Yeah, the jersey seems to need something to spruce it up. I think it's the inconsistency between the red stripe on the sleeves and the bottom of the jersey (maybe stars for both). What would happen with stars on bottom of the jersey and maybe blue breezers (to look less like the Rangers...)?Love the primary logo. Blue Jackets logos have always been pretty busy, I think it's fine for an alternate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
north dakota Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 This would be a good alternate Woah! You think I'm Cody? My name is Carl Scott Simone and we just happen to share a birthday. BIG DEAL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan1 Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 Their home jersey is entirely navy blue. So is this alternate jersey. Besides the crest, you should add something different to tell them apart. Perhaps some white and red stripes around the arms and waist with stars and maybe some silver would do the trick. Try different combinations to see what looks best. Really nice logo by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 As a Jackets fan, here's what I'd personally do.-Lose the flag element to it. It looks nice and all but it looks cluttered.-Take the stars from the writsts and put them on the hem too. Maybe moving up the stars from the wrist would work too.Overall though, this looks really nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J Blackhawk Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 Great start. For a primary crest, I think the logo is just a bit too busy though. Imagine embroidering that! Otherwise, I really like the star element but I think it's in the wrong place. Maybe echo the sock stripe on the sleeves, and then move the stars on the breezers? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Has2916 Posted June 10, 2010 Author Share Posted June 10, 2010 Thanks for all the feedback. I'm on the wrong computer right now so I'll try and make some of the suggested updates tomorrow night. Any suggestions on how to simplify the logo. Word is the cannon will be involved. I heard remove the flag. Any other suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skier14 Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 I really like this logo a lot, but I do agree that the jersey itself is a bit bland.Great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J Blackhawk Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 Maybe try the same logo, except more a profile view where you only see one wheel and then the side of the cannon? It may help simplify the design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Has2916 Posted June 10, 2010 Author Share Posted June 10, 2010 I updated the jersey here. Haven't updated the logo.This now looks like a goofy all star jersey to me now. Any other striping or logo suggestions? I'll try the side view logo later.PS. Is calling hockey pants "breezers" and American thing? I've always just known them as "pants" or "hockey pants" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted June 10, 2010 Share Posted June 10, 2010 you should def try to make the stars on the jersey look like the star from the blue jackets' logo...or at least in the same style. ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 Another white stripe below the red might look better, so it is white-red-white. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 Another white stripe below the red might look better, so it is white-red-white.Or I'd say just remove the white there. One of the things I liked about that set was the lack of white at the cuffs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 PS. Is calling hockey pants "breezers" and American thing? I've always just known them as "pants" or "hockey pants"I believe it's a Minnesota thing, but I call them breezers as well and I'm from Ontario. I'm definitely in the minority, though. Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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