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master splinter?! :shocked:

just kidding. that looks pretty sweet... my only complaint is that the jersey the rat is wearing sorta looks like a hurricanes jersey more than a devils jersey.

great debut. welcome to the board.

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Pay, Here is the original.

I am tweaking the jersey the rat is wearing to more closely match the Devil's jerseys. and I have modified the jersey template to be a bit more professional.

Will post those changes soon.

Original River Rats Logo

AlbanyOriginal.jpg

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I agree with AAO, I'm usually not a big fan of cartoon-ish logos, but you did a great job on this one. Good consistincies throughout. I would, however, like to see "Albany" emphasized a bit more and not vertical like it is, and I know this is being nitpicky, but in your tertiary logo, the black and red outlines around the right bottom of the A seem to be jagged. The font you are using for the A is from "Albany" and not "RiverRats", I am assuming. It might be interesting to see what it looks like with the RiverRats font. Like I said though, nitpicking.

Good job overall man! :)

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WTG, what a debut!!!

I live in the Albany area, and let me tell you this...

We fans LOVE the nickname, but most of us are tiring of Rowdie the River Rat. It's about time the ownership change logos...and more important, ditch the Devils unis. Fifty miles north of Albany is the UHL's Adirondack Frostbite, who have a MUCH better logo....

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I didn't expect much to come from a River Rats concept, but I was very pleasantly surprised. It's great. Have you thought about adding skates to his feet?

Also, you should think about putting a watermark on your work. Just so somebody doesn't "borrow" your art. Just a precaution we have learned to do.

Welcome, and thanks for sharing this good work.

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While this would never fly in the big leagues, it is PERFECT for the AHL. I think this is fantastic and could be used by the team exactly as you did it and be recieved well at Knickerbocker (pepsi).

I decided to come up with a complaint and the only thing I could think of is that I am not fond of the placement of "Albany" and wonder if there were a way you could put it more prominately somewhere jsut above the wordmark?

But man, this IS a great debut. I'm impressed.

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WTG, what a debut!!!

I live in the Albany area, and let me tell you this...

We fans LOVE the nickname, but most of us are tiring of Rowdie the River Rat. It's about time the ownership change logos...and more important, ditch the Devils unis. Fifty miles north of Albany is the UHL's Adirondack Frostbite, who have a MUCH better logo....

What happened to Barry Melrose's Adirondack Red Wings?

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