heernumurr Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 Put simply, too Nazi? Because if so I'll obviously change/ditch it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 I don't think so. It looks very nice though, can't wait to see what comes of it.I think the wings could be simplified a bunch, as in not so many jaggeties. Also, while I kind of like the fact that there's empty space right under the beak, I think there should be a black outline as on the other side of the head, for continuity's sake.Great start. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 I think the fact that it's clearly a bald eagle prevents any possible Nazi association. I agree with chestnutz that the wing tips are too jagged. Also look at where the wings come off the body--that part looks way too thin. But it's a good start. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 I agree with simplifying the wings as well. Everything else looks top notch. Nice start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 I like where this is going William. The only problem so far is that the wings are a little detailed. Simplify the wings and it will look a lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 simplify the wings as mentioned before, and make them less straight, more curved. the stylization on the tail is also giving out a third reich vibe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 Don't take this the wrong way, but the way the wings are all raggedy looking makes the eagle look like he's malnourished or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCap Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 Yeah, very Nazi. I would go with something else. PotD 26/2/12 1/7/15 2020 BASS Spin the Wheel, Make the Deal Regular Season Champion 2021 BASS NFL Pick'em Regular Season Champion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 Stay with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 Stay with it.ah, 'e pluribus unum', a proper national motto. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blitz Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 I think you're still OK, Just make sure you keep the head white, and dont square up the wings too much.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viola73 Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 It look's good but the thing I have about the wings is that they look like moutains or foothills. I would atribute this logo to a team somewhere in the foothills of Western North Carolina: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blitz Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 It look's good but the thing I have about the wings is that they look like moutains or foothills. I would atribute this logo to a team somewhere in the foothills of Western North Carolina:Hmmm.... Except for the whole "being attached to a bird thing" I guess I could sorta see it - If I squint real hard and turn my head back & forth real fast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Cunningham Posted March 30, 2009 Share Posted March 30, 2009 It look's good but the thing I have about the wings is that they look like moutains or foothills. I would atribute this logo to a team somewhere in the foothills of Western North Carolina:Hmmm.... Except for the whole "being attached to a bird thing" I guess I could sorta see it - If I squint real hard and turn my head back & forth real fast No, I can see what Viola is saying. The last 'bump' on the top of the wing is unnatural (and it kind of resembles a rolling mountain). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heernumurr Posted April 4, 2009 Author Share Posted April 4, 2009 Went with some of the advice and changed the wing shape. Improvement? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted April 4, 2009 Share Posted April 4, 2009 UPDATEWent with some of the advice and changed the wing shape. Improvement?100% yes. I like that very much. I love the way the head is created off the solid color body. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted April 4, 2009 Share Posted April 4, 2009 Very, very big improvement. The proportions and balance are much better now. However, I would close the side of the head under the beak. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted April 4, 2009 Share Posted April 4, 2009 Huge improvemnt over the first. But the negative space under the beak is still bothersome to me. Maybe try connecting the beak and left wing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted April 4, 2009 Share Posted April 4, 2009 Nazi logo? I've seen closer matches. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heernumurr Posted April 4, 2009 Author Share Posted April 4, 2009 Negative space begone!I prefer it with the negative space, but is this a lot better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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