GFB Posted August 26, 2009 Share Posted August 26, 2009 OK, yeah, I wasnt quite sure what you meant by the widths. The tips of the fins look like that because there is shading there. Should I keep what I thought the jaw was where it is?Eh... I would probably move it back to the way it was... And don't manatees have really thin fins? Is that is the case, then you wouldn't have to worry about shading any part of the fin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted August 26, 2009 Author Share Posted August 26, 2009 Im not sure, the pics I referenced didn't make them look thin, everything just looked chubby. I will show you guys an example with no fin shading. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GFB Posted August 27, 2009 Share Posted August 27, 2009 Was this the picture you used? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted August 27, 2009 Author Share Posted August 27, 2009 Yeah, and a couple others. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
taantumus Posted August 27, 2009 Share Posted August 27, 2009 The two stripes in the belly are too much. Use one as you had in the initial logo. Whether they are wrinkles or something else, it just looks off and stupid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
9erssteve Posted August 27, 2009 Share Posted August 27, 2009 OK, update based on GFB's advice. C and C.First off let me just say I really like this logo, but there are two small things I would adjust just to give it a little more realism. I'd look at giving the snout a little more definition, in the silhouette/outline, right now the head looks a little short and it's hard to differentiate the head from the body. The second thing I'd add are nostrils, but other than that I think you've captured it really well and it's a really successful desing.9erssteve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted August 27, 2009 Share Posted August 27, 2009 I'll weigh in since I was the one that requested it.It's looking better, and I think a silver manatee with a double purple and red outline could work well, but I'm not insistent on using the colors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted August 31, 2009 Share Posted August 31, 2009 Here's an idea I had...-Putting a silver manatee inside of a circle similar to the Wild's logo-Making the purple more of a violet and the red more of a scarlet-Creating wordmark(s) so the jerseys are similar to the Dallas Stars' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayLo1112 Posted August 31, 2009 Share Posted August 31, 2009 OK, update based on GFB's advice. C and C.the shading looks good.but he looks like he had a stroke. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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