Beluga4 Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 Denver looks much better!!! I can't figure out who is next, Madagascar? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 Something to do with Makos? That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted May 20, 2014 Author Share Posted May 20, 2014 something's just kinda screaming Madagascar in the hint...I got it!!! Johannesburg!!!BINGO!Here there are faster than anything with legs...the Johannesburg Cheetahs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beluga4 Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 Looks great, really like the secondary! Can't wait for unis again!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmd832 Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 Mind-blowing secondary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 The secondary is great. But I think adding the distinctive black lines going from the eyes to the mouth would make it more cheetah-like. And I believe you spelled Johannesburg wrong in the logos. But, I really love where this one is headed. This nickname and color combo should make for some great uniforms! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 I have a feeling one of these uniforms (probably the 3rd) is going to have a full-out cheetah print jersey. And that's just plain awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted May 20, 2014 Author Share Posted May 20, 2014 Heres the full JohannesbUrg set. I added some highlights and the suggested face stripe and fixed the spelling issue. And yes, I used cheetah print. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 The face seems too human looking. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 ^ Agreed. The nose is all wrong. (Says the man with a cheetah logo he designed himself as his userpic.) Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 I think I'm gonna have to add more categories to my listings. Too many ties. I think the cheetah face could use some more work as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted May 20, 2014 Author Share Posted May 20, 2014 Update on the face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beluga4 Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 Looks better! Now put it on the uniforms and court (or whatever a dodgeball floor is called) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 Update on the face.I think one issue I have with it is the cheek/jawbone being really enlarged. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beluga4 Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 Since this one is taking a little long, can we have a quick hint to the next one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 Right now your cheetah looks a little too much like a leopard. Try to make the face a little skinnIer. Â Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted May 21, 2014 Share Posted May 21, 2014 All of these are amazing, windellcan't argue with pure logic...IMHO top 5 designers on these boards. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted May 21, 2014 Author Share Posted May 21, 2014 Thanks a lot fellas! Im happy with the head now. I like the thickness and the jawline IMO speaks to the aggressiveness. Im not gonna post the updated set here as it was just replacing the primary, but the Flickr is updated with the new stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted May 21, 2014 Author Share Posted May 21, 2014 Introducing The Tampa Surge! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted May 21, 2014 Share Posted May 21, 2014 Introducing The Tampa Surge!I really like what you have here. Color scheme, both logos, wordmark, and name are all fantastic. Personally though, Id choose to go with the Tampa Bay Surge instead of just Tampa. It sounds better than Tampa and your appealing to a broader base. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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