wdm1219inpenna Posted September 13, 2013 Share Posted September 13, 2013 I love this updated look, my only criticism is the horse's mane looks a bit too feminine for lack of a better term. Appears the horse went to the beauty parlor and got a perm. I've no problems with it otherwise, but even the curly-q mane is unique! Superb work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted September 14, 2013 Author Share Posted September 14, 2013 Ok...I'm back with a couple revisions for you guys to critique. The top one, I kept with the original logo & just made some mods as per some of your suggestions, hopefully they're for the better. The bottom one, I used their new mascot & just made a few minor adjustments. Thanks in advance for all your C & C. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gothamite Posted September 14, 2013 Share Posted September 14, 2013 If the original logo looked that good, they never would have changed it in the first place. The Green Bay Packers Uniform Database! Now in a handy blog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tynamo Posted September 15, 2013 Share Posted September 15, 2013 I cannot unsee the image of the bronco's nose getting picked by a lance. I think the puff can be rendered better. and Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AntCurtain Posted September 15, 2013 Share Posted September 15, 2013 I think that it looks great. Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbannon92 Posted September 15, 2013 Share Posted September 15, 2013 Beautiful work. This is the only successful update to the old broncos logo I've seen in over 3 years here.And I prefer the second one. The linework is a little better and I've never liked the goofy, nose-picking, pointy puff of smoke. Nike + CFL 2015 | 2015-16 NBA Concepts | Complete College Football Redesign Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted September 15, 2013 Author Share Posted September 15, 2013 Went ahead & removed the smoke puff & smoothed out a couple of lines just for comparison sake. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted September 15, 2013 Share Posted September 15, 2013 Went ahead & removed the smoke puff & smoothed out a couple of lines just for comparison sake.Perfect. I like this better then their current logo by far. Color scheme is nicer too, love to see the old throwback uniforms come back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WSU151 Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 Yeah that royal and orange version is really incredible. Again, excellent work. Wish they would use that exact logo. I like the smoke coming out of the nose. I really don't see the lancer, because it wouldn't make sense for it to be there. It's kind of the common-sense test. Smart is believing half of what you hear. Genius is knowing which half. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TShaw528 Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 Ok...I'm back with a couple revisions for you guys to critique. The top one, I kept with the original logo & just made some mods as per some of your suggestions, hopefully they're for the better. The bottom one, I used their new mascot & just made a few minor adjustments. Thanks in advance for all your C & C.I like the bottom one better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gothamite Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 Went ahead & removed the smoke puff & smoothed out a couple of lines just for comparison sake.I think it needs the breath to balance it out, or move the horse. He's too far over to the left. The Green Bay Packers Uniform Database! Now in a handy blog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pittab Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 Great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nook Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 I just realized that the hooves sorta make a capital "B". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tigerslionspistonshabs Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 Ok...I'm back with a couple revisions for you guys to critique. The top one, I kept with the original logo & just made some mods as per some of your suggestions, hopefully they're for the better. The bottom one, I used their new mascot & just made a few minor adjustments. Thanks in advance for all your C & C.Bottom is near perfection. Well balanced and looks aggressive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nash61 Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 Keep the puff, but cut it off at the puff itself, and get rid of the straight white lines that intersect the D. Best of both worlds On September 20, 2012 at 0:50 AM, 'CS85 said: It's like watching the hellish undead creakily shuffling their way out of the flames of a liposuction clinic dumpster fire. On February 19, 2012 at 9:30 AM, 'pianoknight said: Story B: Red Wings go undefeated and score 100 goals in every game. They also beat a team comprised of Godzilla, the ghost of Abraham Lincoln, 2 Power Rangers and Betty White. Oh, and they played in the middle of Iraq on a military base. In the sand. With no ice. Santa gave them special sand-skates that allowed them to play in shorts and t-shirts in 115 degree weather. Jesus, Zeus and Buddha watched from the sidelines and ate cotton candy. POTD 5/24/12, POTD 2/26/17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted September 16, 2013 Author Share Posted September 16, 2013 As per suggestion, here's one with smoke puff alone. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grant1woods Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 I just realized that the hooves sorta make a capital "B".ohh yeah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pittab Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 As per suggestion, here's one with smoke puff alone.You have hit a homerun right here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gothamite Posted September 17, 2013 Share Posted September 17, 2013 Yeah, I think we're approaching Platonic ideal right here. The Green Bay Packers Uniform Database! Now in a handy blog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Admiral Posted September 17, 2013 Share Posted September 17, 2013 I find that the Bruins are sort of a Jungian mandala. ♫ oh yeah, board goes on, long after the thrill of postin' is gone ♫ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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