Brave-Bird 08 Posted October 17, 2013 Share Posted October 17, 2013 I've posted versions of this concept probably a hand full of times in the past, and each time I've received feedback that has pushed me toward what I believe is an optimal iteration of the idea. Some notable final tweaks:- custom number font that aligns more with the 'FALCONS' team script. - solid red helmet, rather than gradient helmet (which was attempted last time)Q: Do you guys like the red jersey, or black jersey as the primary? Let me know what you guys think. I've already posted over in r/Falcons and the folks over there seem to love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted October 17, 2013 Share Posted October 17, 2013 very nice, I'd make the red jersey the home. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted October 17, 2013 Author Share Posted October 17, 2013 @jmoe12I'm starting to feel that more, too. Red/Black/White seemed too natural because so many have said they prefer that over the Black/Red/White that the team has now, but in this design I feel like the Red/Red/White and Red/Red/Black work really well together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted October 17, 2013 Share Posted October 17, 2013 i feel like the number outline is to thin. other than that these are great! #9 LSU vs. TCU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted October 17, 2013 Share Posted October 17, 2013 Count me as a fan of the red jersey as a primary. I think this is great except for a couple of things. The first is the socks. Its a pet peeve of mine but i really think they should be striped. I cant stand solid tops, but thats not a big dealThe aecond is the red helmet. I dont like it as a primary helmet if they were to continue to wear their throwback uniform, which teams should be doing next year with no helmet issues. GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted October 17, 2013 Share Posted October 17, 2013 I would like a red pair of pants instead of black as I am not a fan of darker pants than helmet with few exceptions. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted October 17, 2013 Share Posted October 17, 2013 Is a white mask obnoxious on this set? Not grey, as it'd be too much. cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFuture Posted October 17, 2013 Share Posted October 17, 2013 A few ideas:-Make the sleeve color the same color as the rest of the jersey.-If you're going to use the new logo I suggest using a black helmet. The old logo could have worked with either red or black, but the new motion digital bird looks best on a black helmet, or against anything black-Consider using the angled, Falcon feather stripe you used everywhere else on the helmet also.-Agreed with the previous poster who said the outlines on the numbers could be thickened.-Something I'd suggest not only for this concept but for what the Falcons actually wear: red socks with the road whites. Wearing black socks at home--which you've done here--and red socks on the road would look better for all sets.-Red or black as the primary? For this set black is the best look, but I suggest making red the primary. The black can be used for big or special games. The black is more likely to lose its luster if you wore it eight times a year every year than the red is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buckeye Posted October 17, 2013 Share Posted October 17, 2013 I think the only thing I notice is maybe a thicker outline on the numbers like previous people posted, but other than that it's a very solid set. I'd like to see it on the field definitely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nuordr Posted October 17, 2013 Share Posted October 17, 2013 I would suggest narrowing the stripe on the helmet to match the narrowing of the stripes on the jersey and pants. Also add a pair of red pants as I believe a red-black-red combo would look amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZapRowsdower8 Posted October 17, 2013 Share Posted October 17, 2013 Looks great. My only suggestion would be pairing the black pants with either red socks or striped socks. Red/red/black/red would be a pretty unique look IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oldschoolvikings Posted October 17, 2013 Share Posted October 17, 2013 Yeah, I agree with the above. Black socks with the black pants is a bad look. http://dstewartpaint.blogspot.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dnice Posted October 18, 2013 Share Posted October 18, 2013 I'd rather have predominately white sleeves with the white top and the same with the red jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beast3 Posted October 20, 2013 Share Posted October 20, 2013 Great work, I would make the red the primary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted October 20, 2013 Share Posted October 20, 2013 LOVE. The striping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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