derschwigg Posted March 28, 2014 Author Share Posted March 28, 2014 Without further ado, here's the new look for the Ravens! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted March 28, 2014 Share Posted March 28, 2014 It's an awkward bottom of the logo. I'd try and make the bottom more similar to the current logo instead of such a curved shape #9 LSU vs. TCU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Son_ofNun Posted March 28, 2014 Share Posted March 28, 2014 I don't know if you noticed this, but I think he's trying to make the logo sort of form an 'r'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted March 28, 2014 Author Share Posted March 28, 2014 I don't know if you noticed this, but I think he's trying to make the logo sort of form an 'r'.I noticed it, but it was more "happy accident" than ardent planning and foresight. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted March 28, 2014 Author Share Posted March 28, 2014 Sharpened outer stroke, re-tooled bottom portion My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Impaler Posted March 28, 2014 Share Posted March 28, 2014 Hmmm, still not a fan of the bottom there, doesn't really seem to fit. Strongly disagree with St. Louis Cardinals though, don't return to what they have now, worst part of their current logo. In particular on this one, the extreme arch is bothering me. Rest of it looks great though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted March 30, 2014 Author Share Posted March 30, 2014 Bump! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted March 30, 2014 Share Posted March 30, 2014 I feel that the raven is pudgy-looking right now, and I don't know how it could be changed w/o messing up the entire logo. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted March 30, 2014 Share Posted March 30, 2014 I love the font, but I think the curve on the body could be lessened, if that makes sense?I do love that Vikings stuff tho. @MichaelDanger19Â | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted April 3, 2014 Author Share Posted April 3, 2014 Thanks for all the CC, everyone!I've begun working on the Patriots in the mean time. I want to have a stronger icon for the team, but I did have an idea for an alt/secondary logo.What do you think of this? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted April 3, 2014 Share Posted April 3, 2014 I'm a fan of the NE logo, but I think the wordmark is a little bland; it's lacking something. "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
macalesterscots Posted April 3, 2014 Share Posted April 3, 2014 The NE logo looks great, but its font doesn't really match with what you have for the wordmark. The wordmark needs work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
8BW14 Posted April 3, 2014 Share Posted April 3, 2014 The alt logo is pretty good, but I'm wondering of the red stripes need a bevel on the bottom side, maybe not, but they look a bit flat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sean F&F Posted April 3, 2014 Share Posted April 3, 2014 I second a bevel on the stripes. It looks a little off with the N being beveled but the stripes being flat. Logo looks nice. https://fandfsports.wordpress.com/Hockey Uniform Templates (Gimp/Photoshop) http://seanff.deviantart.com/gallery/52790653/Devious-Folder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted April 3, 2014 Author Share Posted April 3, 2014 Like so? I also made a custom wordmark - you won't find this font out there! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Son_ofNun Posted April 3, 2014 Share Posted April 3, 2014 Beautiful... Font kinda reminds me of michigan state, but as you said it was custom and fits very well with your logo. Also like the changes to the 'e' in the logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted April 3, 2014 Share Posted April 3, 2014 Wordmark is sharper now, for sure. The 'A' seems a little chunky compared to the other letters, though. Maybe a more block-looking A based on the R shape would help?I like the logo, but I think the bevel on the E kinda took something away from it. I liked how they flowed together a bit, and the shading on the left disrupts that. Maybe keep the bevel on the bottom? Or perhaps shade it so it looks like the E is coming from behind the N?Either way, I like where this is headed. Nice work so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted April 3, 2014 Share Posted April 3, 2014 Really like the changes. I agree with above that the A is a big fat, fixing that would make this that much better. "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sean F&F Posted April 3, 2014 Share Posted April 3, 2014 The beveled stripes look great, as does the new wordmark. https://fandfsports.wordpress.com/Hockey Uniform Templates (Gimp/Photoshop) http://seanff.deviantart.com/gallery/52790653/Devious-Folder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted April 3, 2014 Author Share Posted April 3, 2014 I'm with Doug - I think the bevel on the E-bars breaks up the logo a bit too much.Which do you prefer? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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