derschwigg Posted April 8, 2014 Author Share Posted April 8, 2014 Alright, in wake of the Eagles (I'm completely revamping it - I'm mad at myself for having three very similar marks. The wordmark is fine, I think), I got the Raiders to a place where I like it!And revised the Pats! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted April 8, 2014 Share Posted April 8, 2014 That Raiders logo is BAD A! I love that! "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 Both are great also can you do another video. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JMtexan09 Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 that Raiders logo is awesome! I wondered what does Bucs would look like FEAR THE FROG! LET'S GO TCU!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JMtexan09 Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 Thanks for the kind words!In the mean time, here's the new Eagles!I wish you could have submit it to my old high school, which is Model Secondary School for the Deaf (short for MSSD) in Washington D.C. its colors are Navy, Red, & White. They were having a debate going on with getting a new logo for its school since it had been using Philly Eagles' current logo. I hate it when every high school used professional or college logos for their schools when they could ask such logo designers like ya and others. Oh well FEAR THE FROG! LET'S GO TCU!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted April 9, 2014 Author Share Posted April 9, 2014 I wish you could have submit it to my old high school, which is Model Secondary School for the Deaf (short for MSSD) in Washington D.C. its colors are Navy, Red, & White. They were having a debate going on with getting a new logo for its school since it had been using Philly Eagles' current logo. I hate it when every high school used professional or college logos for their schools when they could ask such logo designers like ya and others. Oh wellI couldn't agree more. The designers are out there, they just need to look.Both are great also can you do another video. LMAO. Yes, I can do more videos. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 The Raiders logo is looking pretty good. I feel the one thing that would set it over the top would be a nice mouth/teeth area. I've always liked the smirk on the face of the Raiders logo and I think that it could be implemeted very well onto a skull design.EDIT: The Pats logo is also very well done but as others have said, I can't help but to see Belichick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted April 9, 2014 Author Share Posted April 9, 2014 Bump! Anyone else before I move on? I think either the Chargers or the Broncos will be next, after a few quick-hit revisions. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdp Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 Bump! Anyone else before I move on? I think either the Chargers or the Broncos will be next, after a few quick-hit revisions.Because I can't unsee Belichick, maybe try Logan Mankins instead...?Seriously, though, I would agree the Raider skull could use some teeth. I wouldn't say they are necessary, but they could help give it more edge and complete the look. "Type something, will ya? We're paying for this stuff." - Peter VenkmanComplete: Stateside Soccer Federation | Complete: World Football Club Alliance | Stalled: Roller Hockey International Redux | Stalled: MLB & Soccer Crossover Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted April 9, 2014 Author Share Posted April 9, 2014 Want to look younger? Lose a jowl. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 Want to look younger? Lose a jowl.He looks a little younger, but I think the length of the mouth and the line coming down the end still make him look fairly old. I do really like the perspective. I first attempted a perspective similar to that in a concept I made a while ago, but struggled with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperLeafsFan Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 Still see Belichick in there. Something about that frown on the guy's face........... I think I like smilies too much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davidmiller5 Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 My biggest question with the Patriots' logo is why are his eyes closed? To me, it looks like he's sleeping during a sermon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheSoundofThrowingPennies Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 I think you should leave it as was before, when it resembled BB. Even if unintentional, it's a nice way to memorialize one of the greatest coaches of all time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted April 9, 2014 Author Share Posted April 9, 2014 Still see Belichick in there. Something about that frown on the guy's face...........Probably because frown + Patriots = Belichick My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John_KC Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 I am a huge Packers fan and huge fan of your work (yes, I'm sucking up). I like what you did with the packer logo, but would love to see you maybe try something with their logo I use in my profile pic. I don't know. I think the Packers logo may be a hard one to update. Anyway, keep up the great work. I am so amazed at the talent level of you and many of the others in here. If I were an owner of a professional sports team (wishful thinking) I would come in here to find someone to update my logo. Screw Nike. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
8BW14 Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 I think the mouth is too low. The space between the nose and mouth is too far. I think if you shortened that up and maybe made the lips a bit thicker, he would look younger and less like Belicheck. I would lose the white keyline too, the rounded edges give off a cartoon vibe, for lack of a better word.Raiders are phenomenal, by the way. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bucknut42 Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 The raiders logo is great. Not sure what you could do about the patriots eye, something looks wrong with it-like it's half closed or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m6twelve Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 couple things, #1 i thought that the cowboys logo, although it was way back on here, should have had navy instead of a royal blue, i like the seahawks alot, but thought that the beak should have a bottom instead of the grey filling up that space. The eagles (although i know you are redesigning them) green should be darker. just a thought for them as well with the redesign, above every bird in the league, the eagle is known for being a predator, I think maybe a full bird like the way their 80's logo was, would be something where you could improve the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted April 11, 2014 Author Share Posted April 11, 2014 Thanks for the kind words, everyone! I really appreciate the C&C. I'll be adding teeth to the Raiders logo when I hit the revision stride. And for those asking for more videos, I'll be doing a complete video (wordmark and all) for the Carolina Panthers this weekend. GET HYPED, SON. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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