derschwigg Posted April 24, 2014 Author Share Posted April 24, 2014 Thanks, all!I haven't forgotten about this, I have a lot going on between work and wedding planning. I'll update as soon as I can, but I wouldn't be surprised if it took another week or two to get back in the swing of things. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gator71 Posted April 24, 2014 Share Posted April 24, 2014 A wedding!? Priorities man! Haha. Well congrats and looking forward to more inspired work from you! (More as in quantitative, not qualitative. Your quality is great. ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted June 20, 2014 Author Share Posted June 20, 2014 I return! I have some time again, and was able to get the Chargers done! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 Oh my...that is a beautiful logo...I want to pet that horse... "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted June 20, 2014 Author Share Posted June 20, 2014 Thanks, man! Any place this could be improved? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 Like the streak of lightning in the horse mane. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clintau24 Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 Thanks, man! Any place this could be improved?Honestly, not at all. The one thing I could pick out if I absolutely needed to, would be that the top of the logo is a bit too rounded, whereas everywhere else is more pointed. But that's nitpicking at that point. "I believe in Auburn and love it!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bort Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 I like the Chargers logo itself, as well as embracing the lighter blue as the primary. Not sure how well two AFC West teams with horse logos goes over in real life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdp Posted June 21, 2014 Share Posted June 21, 2014 Glad to see this is back! Chargers looks great. This is very much a personal preference, but I tend to think lighter blue functions better as an accent. Only thing I could say is maybe the shield is all dark blue, keeping just that half of the horse light blue.Regardless, looking forward to the next installment(s)! "Type something, will ya? We're paying for this stuff." - Peter VenkmanComplete: Stateside Soccer Federation | Complete: World Football Club Alliance | Stalled: Roller Hockey International Redux | Stalled: MLB & Soccer Crossover Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted June 21, 2014 Share Posted June 21, 2014 That chargers is absolutly amazing!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted June 21, 2014 Share Posted June 21, 2014 Glad to see you back at it again! Congrats on getting married. Chargers logo looks sweet, good job! https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted June 21, 2014 Author Share Posted June 21, 2014 Thanks, man! Any place this could be improved?Honestly, not at all. The one thing I could pick out if I absolutely needed to, would be that the top of the logo is a bit too rounded, whereas everywhere else is more pointed. But that's nitpicking at that point.I had thought the same thing. I'll go in and make those bits pointy later.Glad to see you back at it again! Congrats on getting married. Chargers logo looks sweet, good job!Glad to be back! However, I'm not married just yet - got like 3 weeks left! Thanks! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted June 21, 2014 Share Posted June 21, 2014 You rarely see a horse from the front view, so in that sense this is pretty unique. I would consider making the shield smaller. The horse is the focus, yet it only takes up 50% of the composition and there is a lot of empty shield space.I don't know if the hair has to be yellow. It looks like a flame more than hair for that reason. How does it look in dark blue?Other than that, great job! DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted June 23, 2014 Author Share Posted June 23, 2014 You rarely see a horse from the front view, so in that sense this is pretty unique. I would consider making the shield smaller. The horse is the focus, yet it only takes up 50% of the composition and there is a lot of empty shield space.I don't know if the hair has to be yellow. It looks like a flame more than hair for that reason. How does it look in dark blue?Other than that, great job!Thanks! How's this instead? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 The neck looks awkward Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 This is definitely a logo that's ready to go! Looks like something that would be on the hood of a car, which isn't a bad thing. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted June 23, 2014 Author Share Posted June 23, 2014 The neck looks awkward That's part of the reason why a front-facing horse logo is so rare. Most of the head covers the neck. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted June 23, 2014 Author Share Posted June 23, 2014 I also cranked out the Cardinals over lunch today. What do you think? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 Make the opening of the beak just a straight lineRight now he looks like he's sick and about to hurl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted June 23, 2014 Share Posted June 23, 2014 Can't say I'm a fan of the wordmark. I don't like how the state name is under the nickname and I don't really like the font. Looks a little squished vertically. And wonderbread, that's actually what a cardinal's beak looks like... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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