derschwigg Posted June 24, 2014 Author Share Posted June 24, 2014 Thanks! I'll tweak the wordmark soon. Should I drop that bit of cheek fluff coming out into the ring? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted June 25, 2014 Author Share Posted June 25, 2014 Here's the revision! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted June 25, 2014 Author Share Posted June 25, 2014 bump? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted June 25, 2014 Share Posted June 25, 2014 It kinda reminds me of the Orioles. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted June 25, 2014 Share Posted June 25, 2014 Does the O or circle around the cardinal mean anything? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted June 26, 2014 Share Posted June 26, 2014 It might look stronger without the ring so the full head is visible. If you really wanna keep the circle maybe turn it into a C which will allow for a little more of the bird to show as well. I would probably do away with the red under the eye too. Other than that it's starting to come together. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted June 30, 2014 Author Share Posted June 30, 2014 Thanks everyone! I'm going to put the Cardinals on hold for awhile - I feel like there's more I could do with the mark.Here, however, is the Falcons! I felt weird re-doing a logo that, I think, is one of the best in sports. However, in keeping with the spirit of the project, here's the new look Falcons. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted June 30, 2014 Author Share Posted June 30, 2014 Promobump! My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted June 30, 2014 Share Posted June 30, 2014 I think its just avereage mabey make the head black. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted July 1, 2014 Share Posted July 1, 2014 I'm not sure how that would be considered average, because that is a mighty fine logo! It just feels so weird seeing the Falcons have such a different logo than what they've had their whole existence. I think the logo is solid for the most part, but something to me feels a little off about the beak. I don't like how the beak connects to form the arrow-like mark. I'd just keep it as a smooth line the whole way through and maybe make it thicker right at the end. I have no complaints about the wordmark at all, it is flat out beautiful, I especially love the marks at the ends of the F and S, it makes it pretty unique. Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted July 1, 2014 Author Share Posted July 1, 2014 I'm not sure how that would be considered average, because that is a mighty fine logo! It just feels so weird seeing the Falcons have such a different logo than what they've had their whole existence. I think the logo is solid for the most part, but something to me feels a little off about the beak. I don't like how the beak connects to form the arrow-like mark. I'd just keep it as a smooth line the whole way through and maybe make it thicker right at the end. I have no complaints about the wordmark at all, it is flat out beautiful, I especially love the marks at the ends of the F and S, it makes it pretty unique.Thanks! And I know, right!? I put the "dimple" in there because it felt blank without something else in there. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nabil Hasroun Posted July 1, 2014 Share Posted July 1, 2014 When you go back to Caridinals I say make the O a C instead.Hope this helps.- Nabil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted July 1, 2014 Share Posted July 1, 2014 The shade of red is too dull for the Falcons, make it more saturated and bright Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nuordr Posted July 1, 2014 Share Posted July 1, 2014 Is those Cardinals and Falcons logos for Arena League teams? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted July 2, 2014 Author Share Posted July 2, 2014 Is those Cardinals and Falcons logos for Arena League teams? If you're a buyer, then maybe My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted July 3, 2014 Author Share Posted July 3, 2014 Anyone else before I begin working on the next team? My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted August 1, 2014 Author Share Posted August 1, 2014 Hey everyone! I'm (finally) back on my feet after an incredible July. And I brought with me a secondary look for the Buffalo Bills!I'm still toying around with an actual buffalo icon that doesn't remind you of their existing mark. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbannon92 Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 That Bills logo is solid. I like how you incorporated the red streak into the top B, though I'd like to see how it looks with the streak widening to the left, like in their current logo. This would make a great secondary logo. Nike + CFL 2015 | 2015-16 NBA Concepts | Complete College Football Redesign Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 What do you think about this? I Love all the logos, very good job!I was also wondering how you got the video on to the post, if you could let me know how to to that, that'd be great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted August 1, 2014 Share Posted August 1, 2014 I like it excited to see the other logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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