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I am pretty new at this but I think that this works out pretty good. I thought it would be cool to have the Salt Lake Blues and the Utah Jazz as they both have something to do with music. Anyway here it is!!

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Why? The Jazz and the Blues have nothing to do with Salt Lake City. The Utah Jazz is the most out of place nickname in sports. If someone wanted to link a musical heritage to Salt Lake City then call them the Choirs! As for the concept with out the note it is just a winged hockey stick. It would better fit a team called the Angles or Wings or something. But to end on a positive note I see your thinking. Perhaps if St. Louis got a NBA team they could buy the name Jazz from the Utah team. Although the best solution would be for Utah and New Orleans to "trade" names.

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IT'S FUNNY, YOU SEE, BECAUSE THERE IS NOT A GREAT DEAL OF JAZZ IN UTAH.

WHY ARE WE TALKING IN BIG, BOLD LETTERS????

On 4/10/2017 at 3:05 PM, Rollins Man said:

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Thats not really a concept anyways, it's just a retooling of someone elses work.

exactly, and a poor one at that.

So much for constructive critisism, huh? Every single concept on here based on an existing team is just a retooling of someone else's work anyways, since it is not an original team. However, You've incorporated hockey into the Blues logo, which I like, I would recommend maybe recoloring the entire concept and some other clean up stuff. Maybe produce an original wordmark as well.

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Thats not really a concept anyways, it's just a retooling of someone elses work.

exactly, and a poor one at that.

So much for constructive critisism, huh? Every single concept on here based on an existing team is just a retooling of someone else's work anyways, since it is not an original team. However, You've incorporated hockey into the Blues logo, which I like, I would recommend maybe recoloring the entire concept and some other clean up stuff. Maybe produce an original wordmark as well.

I would try producing an original concepts.

Recolorings and taking other logos and making one tweak are not worthy of constructive criticism.

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i dont get the 'salt lake' wordmark... what are the a's supposed to be and why are they lowercase ?

EDIT: I just realized by looking closer that you didnt even re-type the word salt lake... looks like u just moved the letters around from ST. LOUIS and then drew in the ones u needed. pretty lame dude

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